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- May 10, 2018
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no...just sex anything that moves and you'll be fine
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I was okay with romance, those ones put me off and don't fit romance stories at all.
Not unless someone figured out a way to romantically rape someone in their sleep or fuck someone else.
- Sep 29, 2017
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There will be consequences...and my guess is that it will happen to the main character
- Sep 18, 2017
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What getting raped in his sleep?
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It would serve him right!What getting raped in his sleep?
Oh wait, that was me that caused that to happen... Forget I said anything. Most people do.
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I really liked the character models in the game.
Unfortunately the dialogue is not the best. I don't know whether it's a language or a writing issue but the dialogue feels very fragmented. There is no flow just sentence put after each other.
Also the relationships are not mirrored in the tone to the dialogues.
I started to play the game without reading the description in the topic and for a while I couldn't find out what's the MC's relationship with the guest and who is Vicky. Sure, you don't necessarily need narration or internal thoughts to explain everything instead you could slowly reveal these things through dialogue, but as I said the dialogue was not much help in that.
PS: Why is there no Review option for this game?
Unfortunately the dialogue is not the best. I don't know whether it's a language or a writing issue but the dialogue feels very fragmented. There is no flow just sentence put after each other.
Also the relationships are not mirrored in the tone to the dialogues.
I started to play the game without reading the description in the topic and for a while I couldn't find out what's the MC's relationship with the guest and who is Vicky. Sure, you don't necessarily need narration or internal thoughts to explain everything instead you could slowly reveal these things through dialogue, but as I said the dialogue was not much help in that.
PS: Why is there no Review option for this game?
That's because the writer is a retard. It will get better though. I have a very creative person helping me with writing now.
Well, it is revealed. Vicki is Jenna's mom, that's said few times, and you dated Vicki at some point many years ago when Jenna was young (...)
I mean, i don't know, to me it's very clear from the script, but maybe it isn't, i dont know lol
when i'm writing, i dont want to show everything, i want there to be some intrigue. Like, who is she? what's their relationship? why did they brake up? etc etc and it slowly gets revealed in the dialog among characters and inner thoughts as the game progresses. But this might be a huge undertaking for me and it got lost somewhere in the translation or whatever.
Only thing i can say, it will improve. And i might get back to past episodes and change some things (ill deff go back to improve some renders, thats for sure) But currently im working hard on episode 3 so that might wait for a while.
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I have faith in this team
- Nov 9, 2018
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It's clear that Vicki is Jenna's mom. People are just like your writer
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That is something I'd like to stick my dick in ...
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Hopefully the writer won't screw up
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Who writes for this game anyway?
- May 16, 2017
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King, you just can't say X is best girl... that's how World War III will start ( even though, jenna is the best girl)i wonder as well
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