Hello man from icecream van, I have played this new update and it is good (as usual), but there is still that little issue I talked about some time ago that bothered me: Mark talks like if he actually care for the girls, but the player has the chance to play him like if he doesn't care about the girls' destiny and like if he is trying to take advantage of them. I have reflected upon this an I think this is due to how you have structured the dialogues: for example in this update Mark offers some money to Zoe, in order to avoid that she will let the bar's customers grope her, only if the player choose the "Offer some money to Zoe" option. This is obviously logical, but in this way the attitude you want give to Mark, doesn't emerge and this creates the little issue I'm talking about. Instead if Mark offered some money to Zoe and only after a first Zoe's refusal, the player had the choice if convince Zoe to accept the money or not, the Mark's attitude would emerge in a clearer way.