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Jan 28, 2018
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A good game
But should not allow players to add Incest patch
I don't know. Dev. Avoid problems with patreon ?
Nah, a lot of games have incest patches available. After all, if the base game doesn't have any rule breaking stuff but the players mod it in, how can you blame the devs for players modding their copy of the game.
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Aristos

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Dec 28, 2017
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Wow, it looks like the dev really has this sorted out. His webpage is very interesting.
If the game doesn't turn out to be a grindfest and the dev sticks to his plan, I can see this becoming a hit.
 

TundraLupus

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First time trying the game, looks good, but I have some complaints, first, the tutorial is way too long, it is best to explain features as they come, so it is short and sweet, and there is way to much inner monologue, seriously, keep it to the essentials, like, " wow, mom looks great" hugs, "wow I forgot how it was to get hugged by her, this feels like home", "She smells pretty nice", then he moves away, "something about boobs, and being wrong( in case of the patch)", then her moving away "Wow, she looks absolutely amazing", and then just show them in the kitchen and say "should I bring dad up?" or something, Sorry for being long-winded but this is a pet peeve of mine, there is a rule in entertainment, show, don't tell, and inner monologues are basically narration, and nobody likes that. Am I the weird one?

edit: nope, the tutorials only get worse, for real, let me figure some stuff out for myself, I'm in the begging of the game and have to take breaks out of frustration.
okay, the premises of the game are good, I think it could be interesting, but I really can't get past the inner monologue, and I have a feeling that there will be mind control, and I don't like that, now I'll stop plying until I figure out if we undo the mind control or use it, and I prefer undoing it by the way, but seriously, why so much inner monologue? anybody can clarify the mind control thing, and if there are fewer inner monologues going forward?
 
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Honestly, I like what I see, but like someone else already said:
Too much front loaded in terms of tutorial. Maybe they should appear as you go checking out more stuff.
Also, IMO try to avoid creating ridiculous amounts of grind. Personally I think that just adding cheats is not a good solution like it has been suggested. If players have to find ways to circumvent the game then what's the point.
That's just my two cents, though, and I'm just some rando.
 

aunkub11

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Nah, a lot of games have incest patches available. After all, if the base game doesn't have any rule breaking stuff but the players mod it in, how can you blame the devs for players modding their copy of the game.
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Hey, I'm Not Blaming Dev
I'm just complaining that the game should have a clear foundation like about incest
I know you don't want to waste time adding incest pacth:rolleyes:
 

hakulaku97

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Should not mix porn and puzzle games. While i am trying to solve a puzzle my boner's gone.
Ok
now i agree
this is shit
180turning after reaching the first puzzle Question...
there is always away to get it up again, after a victory against some puzzles there is noway it isn't up again, beating puzzles can be fetish too :ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO:
 

EZ8lt

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Okay let's get a few things out here:

- During the intro, there's simply way too much information, all at once. I get it, you built a complex system, and that needs explanation, but shoving all that info onto the player right off the bat is a massive nope. If you made so many aspect, then ease people into them as the story progresses, otherwise when they get to the part where the previously told info would be imperative, they already forgot it. You do it already later anyway, so you could chop that part up a bit more.

- Rolling texts are irritating, especially when it breaks when a .... is written, and only serve to slow down the game play.

- Some typos here and there, nothing too big.

- Using items for every single little action, like in the bus stop will be annoying on the long run.

- Too many 4th wall break by the dev interrupting. Might be funny sometimes, but it's going overboard already.

- Mission completed screens, contacts added, etc, could be simply pop-ups, not something that breaks the flow yet again.

- Story stalling techniques. I don't know why developers thing they are a good idea, but they usually are not. For example the dad situation here. MC wants to know obviously what happened, he even asks it, then the typical "let's not do this now - oh right okay" conversation happens. Either keep it for later if you don't want to reveal anything about it, meaning the MC won't ask about it, or just let some info out of it, but don't stall.

- Too many internal monologues dropped at one time. The mom convo at the kitchen is a prime example. Add to the rolling text to it and it's be another stall.

- Doormat personality for the main character. Way overused. The room situation is that, dude gets everything he owns taken who knows where, then internal monologue, then he's just like: "Oh sure, no probs." Even with the situation is being what it is, it's rather unrealistic. Then the whole clean his office. Yeah, normally you'd say fuck that, when it's obvious that the guy hates your guts. I get that you somehow have to move the plot forward, but shit like this will just make your MC unlikeable.

- "You should look around to see if you find anything interesting" and co. type of dialogues. No one talks like this. If you must implement a hint, do that in a way that won't make your conversation feel artificial.

While it seems much, I did not listed these to discourage you, most of these problems are either minor, or easily fixable that would help on the long run for a better cohesion. It's obvious that you have a massive amount of work put into it, and many thoughts behind it, that is certainly something that's a big plus. The graphics look really good, some animations are sort of iffy but nothing too bad, and the premise is interesting with a possibly really engaging story down the road. Other than these, just don't go overboard on the possible grind aspects and you should be settled among the higher tier games.
 
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DrakoGhoul

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Shit those tags! Incest, Milf, Big Ass, Femdom and Harem? Count me in because I have Time For Them. :love:
 
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