"Huh, this looks interesting. Not enough Titans games in my opinion. Let's just take a look at these preview images."
*looks at first image*
"Okay, looks like it will be something of a management game. Not my cup of tea, but can be fun if done right. Next one."
*looks at second image*
"Okay and here we have aaaaaaaaaaaaaAAA"
*looks at third image*
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!"
JESUS, WHAT THE FUCK IS UP WITH HER FACE?!?! It looks like a modded Sims character or something you would make in Dark Souls!!!
Look, from one (non-active) 3d animator to another (if you ARE the one modeling these characters), then I would suggest scrapping your Raven model (and potentially other future models if they look like...that) and instead either a.) Honing your modeling skills or b.) Getting OKAY FOR USE premade and prerigged models instead. You have access to the internet, which means you have access to sites like sketchfab and deviantart, where there are plenty of people who have already made really good looking models, both free and paid. I would recommend using those instead, AS LONG AS YOU PROVIDE PROPER CREDITS.
I do want this game to succeed, but the models are really holding it back, so I would really recommend getting premade models and using those.
Does this guy even read these?
Did I just waste my time writing all this?
fuck.
EDIT: Okay, I just read your replies to other comments (in my hubris is decided to post this BEFORE reading those), and man, now I feel kind of bad. You got those models done all in roughly a month, and that is just rushing at its finest. I would still recommend using someone else's model, but then if you still want to go for a similar, more "realistic" look, then dont rush yourself on the models. Take your time to perfect them, and use models made by others as placeholders. All art takes time to perfect, and the more time you spend on it, the better.
Also, another suggestion, when you finish a model, leave it sitting for about 24 hours and try to take your mind off of it. Then, come back to it later with a fresh mind, look it over again, and you should be able to notice any flaws that you have. This will give you an even greater chance of fixing mistakes, and then you can take another step back and repeat the process.
Only use a model that YOU feel confident in. Dont feel a need to rush out an update. I understand you have a patreon, and that's why I suggested using a placeholder model for the time being, so that you can hone your skills with modeling more.