HTML Completed To Train Your T-Girl [v1.0] [Amusing Oddity]

[AmusingOddity]

Overview:
This is the first of the practice games I made as I was learning Twine. It’s a simple story about a group of guys that help their friend realize that he's really a T-Girl slut deep down.​

Thread Updated: 2021-05-17
Release Date: 2021-05-17
Developer: Amusing Oddity-

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Version: 1.0
OS: Windows
Language: English
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[The 1★ Dude]

The overview looks like sissi but it isnt?

 

[AmusingOddity]

The overview looks like sissi but it isnt?

No. It's consensual.

 

[Deleted member 3145675]

Hi,
While the story concept may be interesting - the cosmetic choices are debatable - the text's disposition and font size + avatar pictures would be relevant if we had 9/16 screens instead of 16/9 (or even an old 4/3)

Current screens format imposes to spend a lot of time scrolling down for very little logical reasons. (not related to text length)

tho some people may appreciate it - I on the contrary have the impression of reading a (porn) children's reading textbook which may be a totally valid technical/artistic choice but is sadly not an enjoyable one. (I repeat in my opinion)

May you encounter success in your future endeavors.
GL

 

[AmusingOddity]

Hi,
While the story concept may be interesting - the cosmetic choices are debatable - the text's disposition and font size + avatar pictures would be relevant if we had 9/16 screens instead of 16/9 (or even an old 4/3)

Current screens format imposes to spend a lot of time scrolling down for very little logical reasons. (not related to text length)

tho some people may appreciate it - I on the contrary have the impression of reading a (porn) children's reading textbook which may be a totally valid technical/artistic choice but is sadly not an enjoyable one. (I repeat in my opinion)

May you encounter success in your future endeavors.
GL

Exactly the kind of feedback I was looking for from posting this, thanks.

I went back and forth on the sizing a bunch because I thought people would prefer the images to be bigger. I know a lot of people only skim the text and focus on the visuals.

I'll take it into account for future games.

 

[Holjix]

I would say there are merits to each approach, so giving the player options for txt and image size would be good to help cater for what different players would like.

 

[Asmodean2]

Ella Hollywood

 

[happybrother]

The following is not true if: this is a full standalone game, not just a demo for bigger game, or a "chapter1" (which gets chapter2-update after a month or six).

Please change the naming sense. This is not version 1.0, but an initial demo v0.01
[Most people do this trick in initial releases, then you download and enjoy 5min of a (contentless) "game"]

Comments say that this game is finished and complete. Nice.

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

Omg do we finally get to play the one enjoying the tranny or are we yet again the sissy/tranny?

 

[zack9999999]

looks good

 

[NPC041188]

is good, but for me most of the videos don't load

 

[AWolfe]

Omg do we finally get to play the one enjoying the tranny or are we yet again the sissy/tranny?

Both, actually. First as one of the straight guys and then from the POV of the tranny.

 

[phupdup]

Disagree. This is a standalone story that comes to a logical conclusion as the internship ends. If anything, it might become episodic if the author so chooses by following up with Elle or the MC as she changes colleges or he develops his thesis and likely encounters either Elle or another aspiring trans the next semester.

I don't like the way that the author laid out the VN as a sequence from the MC POV first and then from Elle's POV in the second half. It would be better to set this up as a decision fork after the initial intro and character naming passages have been displayed. Then jump back to that passage after each section has played out.

Please change the naming sense. You deliberately confuse people.
This is not version 1.0, but an initial demo v0.01

 

[Alleykatt]

Most of the videos don't work for me.

 

[Cloudchaser]

If I explained something wrong, love to be updated

You got the spirit so all is fine but transgender itself is not a gender but trans just means the gender does not match the sex, hence trans gender. Ella Hollywood is a trans woman and so if the MC in the story is a man it is just straight sex.

It's completely linear, you just press continue until the content ends. It feels like reading a comic or a kinetic novel.

The Game does state though in the tags. It's the reason why, besides the title of the game, I won't bother downloading it myself.

Hope the this test game works for the dev though and they are able to create the game they want in the future.

 

[AmusingOddity]

Please change the naming sense. You deliberately confuse people.


This is not version 1.0, but an initial demo v0.01

It's a standalone game not a demo for a bigger game.

missing the "gay" tag tho

I thought about that but I'm not really sure if the gay tag applies in the context of the game.

is good, but for me most of the videos don't load

I've only tested it in Firefox and Chrome. What browser are you running?



Is anyone else having this problem?

I don't like the way that the author laid out the VN as a sequence from the MC POV first and then from Elle's POV in the second half. It would be better to set this up as a decision fork after the initial intro and character naming passages have been displayed. Then jump back to that passage after each section has played out.

I thought about doing that but I like the way the story flows better when the player doesn't know that Ella's enjoying it until the end. His feeling guilty for "taking advantage" of her wouldn't work the same way if the player knows that she's actually into it.



I think both ideas work but that's why I chose to go the way I did.


As for whats next I'm working on a big sandbox game called Sluttown U.S.A. I'm working on the last touches now, than I need to spend a few weeks play testing it.


I have 2 more practice games I made. One is a sequel to this where you play as the same guy, it leads straight into Sluttown, which is a further sequel. The other is an incest thing in a small sand box that I might tie into Sluttown in someway as well.

I'll tighten them between play testing sessions on Sluttown to keep myself from getting burned out.


I might - might, try for a game a week for the next 2 weeks and then drop Sluttown on the third week if I'm happy with how it's looking.

 

[Fakecrash]

missing the "gay" tag tho

it's widely known that traps are only 2.19% gay, so that's not enough to amerit a Gay tag.

 

[Dastardly]

I had to play it using Chrome. Firefox wouldn't play most of the videos.
Also... Some of the MP4's are misnamed in the HTML. The ones that call for the "C" 1,2 etc. were the most noticeable.

 

[DragonRager123]

You need to sort out the videos files themselves, as they won't load in either Firefox or directly from the folder for me. This is the message that appears when trying to run videos from the folder.

 

[Alig8r]

Couple of images didn't load (I tried till the first pov ends) but it was interesting throughout. Waiting to see more from you.