Zephea

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So plot is?
Mc fucks Tran? or the Mc is the Tran?
Pretty much sums up the plot ->"It’s a simple story about a group of guys that help their friend realize that he's really a tranny slut deep down."
Yes, the MC and the other guys get sexually involved with the trans friend.
 

Asia Argento

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Kinda cringed at the word "tranny" used in 2021..... but will attempt to overlook that and enjoy it despite that given this is my one of my top 5 things.

Advice for better title? Teaching T-Girl Feelings. Good Boy Gone Girl. Being a GRL

I could go on... if you wanted more ideas...
 

Behappy69

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I see that in some parts there are videos but the sound is muted... Why mute it when you get it I have played some of these games where you as the player can choose to unmute it as it is often muted. That is an idea I would like to have added in this game as some of us like to have the sound. Apart from that I would of course like more content. Good luck with it I well keep and eye on this one. And one more thing I forgot more like 10sec to 1min videos are way more enjoyable.
 

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Some thoughts.

I expected a kinetic novel as it was tagged as such, and that's fine as a little tester game, but I do hope your future endeavours will actually let players have a hand in the events that unfold... I saw something about you making a sandbox game (must admit that's something I'm also not terribly keen on as it's rarely done right) but that doesn't necessarily mean there'll be choices the player can make to change how relationships develop, the events that occur, or how the world turns out (just that there's going to be a lot of clicking to get to the content). Though I imagine it'd be kinda hard with using real porn, especially if you're trying to match up pictures to specific actors (which here made it rather noticeable it wasn't the right girl in the spitroast gif).

From a story perspective I'd much rather have played the initial friend that gets to help sissify the girl.
(In a choice based game it'd be here where it'd be interesting if you'd be forceful and lead them down the path of being a freeuse slut or loving and have something more vanilla, even though I'd choose the former it's still nice for it to feel like a choice).
I will admit I didn't play through it the second time with the perspective shift so I don't know how much that changed things up or if there was anything clever done there.

Getting to rename the characters was a nice touch, but then when the girl changes her name it'd make sense to then choose that too.

The English was correct, only one amusing "you let her duck your cock yesterday" but that could easily slip through when proofreading.

One missing image or something where you're seeing code instead of it... <img src="Images/Misc/LivingRoom".jpg"" style="max-width: 45vw; min-height: 25vw;"/>
Again I count that as pretty good.

I'm guessing the MC of this one will be the one for the next game and that'll involve him doing this thesis of his, so that was an interesting way to make a tester game, but also have a prologue/backstory.
 

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"I don't want to be part of the team that fucked up a week's worth of work, and if you plan on having a carrier in this field than neither should you."

I suspect the author meant career there since this is a Psych dept and not the Maritime Institute
 
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So there's a fair number of mistakes like the carrier/career thing above showing that this thing could use a good proof reading pass. Also there's some broken media problems that aren't just due to Firefox not wanting to deal with mp4. This VN has fallen into the trap where the author used a case agnostic platform (ie Winders) where the filesystem (NTFS) preserves the case on writing but ignores it on loading. The content on Linux which respects case both ways ends up not being able to find the files to load. Usually this problem is due to the dev letting Winders exploder hide the file extensions by default and thus not noticing when say a .JPG ends up out in the filesystem while setting up the URL to find a .jpg. It's a bit different in this VN, because the URL in the content wanted to load a "Images/Misc/Lippy.Jpg" for example but the file out on disc was "Images/Misc/Lippy.jpg". I'm not exactly sure what chain of catastrophe causes that situation, but it happened to more than one URL in the Ella part of the story.
 

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Kinda cringed at the word "tranny" used in 2021..... but will attempt to overlook that and enjoy it despite that given this is my one of my top 5 things.

Advice for better title? Teaching T-Girl Feelings. Good Boy Gone Girl. Being a GRL

I could go on... if you wanted more ideas...
Agreed. There is a person on the other end of that dicc and they need love and kindness too.
 

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Okay, so I'm going to use a sexual slur to describe the plot of this "game," but only because the "plot," if you want to call it that, is so horrendous and disgusting. Please understand that no insult is intended to gay people of any stripe.

So the basic premise is, Mark is a faggot-in-denial who's scumbag enough to coerce someone he calls a friend into satisfying his sexual desires, then (*cough* bullshit *cough*) "cover it up" by claiming that friend is a trans woman. Everyone in this "friend group" can see that these rationalizations are bullshit; it's obvious in every early interaction with Elton, the victim in this "story."

And what does this group of "friends" do? Nothing. In fact, they all go along. Because OF COURSE somebody who likes Hawaiian pizza is obviously a trans woman (I'm sorry ... "tranny") who wants to suck men's cocks, right?

This story is so loathsome that it should be condemned as a hate crime ... or hate speech, at the very least. Had there been one ... ONE ... actual choice that allowed the tables to be turned on the abominable faggot blackmailer who starts this whole series of events and turn HIM into a sissy cocksucker, this might have had some value as a game, or at least as a story. But since it's a "simple story with no branching paths about a group of guys that help their friend realize that he's really a tranny slut deep down," it turns every character involved into a complete asshole. I find the entire thing completely reprehensible on every moral, ethical and worst, storytelling level, and it has, quite frankly, severely prejudiced me against any further offerings from this author.

In short, don't bother with this collection of hate-speech bullshit.
 

Asia Argento

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Okay, so I'm going to use a sexual slur to describe the plot of this "game," but only because the "plot," if you want to call it that, is so horrendous and disgusting. Please understand that no insult is intended to gay people of any stripe.

So the basic premise is, Mark is a faggot-in-denial who's scumbag enough to coerce someone he calls a friend into satisfying his sexual desires, then (*cough* bullshit *cough*) "cover it up" by claiming that friend is a trans woman. Everyone in this "friend group" can see that these rationalizations are bullshit; it's obvious in every early interaction with Elton, the victim in this "story."

And what does this group of "friends" do? Nothing. In fact, they all go along. Because OF COURSE somebody who likes Hawaiian pizza is obviously a trans woman (I'm sorry ... "tranny") who wants to suck men's cocks, right?

This story is so loathsome that it should be condemned as a hate crime ... or hate speech, at the very least. Had there been one ... ONE ... actual choice that allowed the tables to be turned on the abominable faggot blackmailer who starts this whole series of events and turn HIM into a sissy cocksucker, this might have had some value as a game, or at least as a story. But since it's a "simple story with no branching paths about a group of guys that help their friend realize that he's really a tranny slut deep down," it turns every character involved into a complete asshole. I find the entire thing completely reprehensible on every moral, ethical and worst, storytelling level, and it has, quite frankly, severely prejudiced me against any further offerings from this author.

In short, don't bother with this collection of hate-speech bullshit.
As expected of a fan of Morrigan. Blunt and brutally honest. Thanks for the review.

Still think Sissy Trainer is the best of this genre because consent is clear and they are all joining in as consenting adults. Even “The Makings of a slut” does a pretty good job of consensual sissy making. Maybe dev-sama can play those as a cast study for a sissification game.
 
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Isn't tranny a slur?
Hi,

Tranny (or trannie) is a derogatory term for a , , , or person, and is an offensive in mainstream contexts. During the early 2010s, there was confusion and debate over whether the term was a pejorative, or was still considered acceptable, or a term of unity and pride. By 2017, the word was banned by several major media and considered hate speech by .


so, the answer is.... (subjective - it was not some time ago - it would appear to be today - and tomorrow?)

Edit: it reminds me of an old expression I use to hear in England (long ago) - Fancy a fag?
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AmusingOddity

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Kinda cringed at the word "tranny" used in 2021..... but will attempt to overlook that and enjoy it despite that given this is my one of my top 5 things.
Yup. Me too now that i know its a slur.

Okay, so I'm going to use a sexual slur to describe the plot of this "game," but only because the "plot," if you want to call it that, is so horrendous and disgusting. Please understand that no insult is intended to gay people of any stripe.

So the basic premise is, Mark is a faggot-in-denial who's scumbag enough to coerce someone he calls a friend into satisfying his sexual desires, then (*cough* bullshit *cough*) "cover it up" by claiming that friend is a trans woman. Everyone in this "friend group" can see that these rationalizations are bullshit; it's obvious in every early interaction with Elton, the victim in this "story."
Are you the same person form TFGames? Wow you really chased me around the internet to shit on me huh?

You might have already read my response over there but if you haven't I'll give it to you here as well.

I honestly had no idea that the word tranny was considered a slur. The only context i ever see the word used is in porn. In porn it feels like its normal used in a similar way to how in straight porn the girl might be called a slut in the title of the video to let you know that shes into it.

The game is a simple kinetic novel told form 2 sides. The first one is one of the men in the house that sees the trans character as the victim of of another person in the house. The second POV is the trans character. In it you see that she is not only a willing but an eager participant. That's what i was trying to get across with the use of the word tranny as i understood it.

I apologies for my ignorance, i have learned and wont use word again in future games.
 

AmusingOddity

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I see that in some parts there are videos but the sound is muted... Why mute it when you get it I have played some of these games where you as the player can choose to unmute it as it is often muted. That is an idea I would like to have added in this game as some of us like to have the sound. Apart from that I would of course like more content. Good luck with it I well keep and eye on this one. And one more thing I forgot more like 10sec to 1min videos are way more enjoyable.
I use muted videos because if you use ones with sound it too often conflicts with the context of the clip and makes it much harder to get good clips.

Some thoughts.

I expected a kinetic novel as it was tagged as such, and that's fine as a little tester game, but I do hope your future endeavours will actually let players have a hand in the events that unfold... I saw something about you making a sandbox game (must admit that's something I'm also not terribly keen on as it's rarely done right) but that doesn't necessarily mean there'll be choices the player can make to change how relationships develop, the events that occur, or how the world turns out (just that there's going to be a lot of clicking to get to the content). Though I imagine it'd be kinda hard with using real porn, especially if you're trying to match up pictures to specific actors (which here made it rather noticeable it wasn't the right girl in the spitroast gif).
You're pretty much bang on in why the story is as it is. The reason you play as the guy first is that he will be the MC of Sluttown when it comes out and if you don't get his story form the game it kinda defeats the point.

The second perspective gives a very different context to the events (it pretty much confirms that she was in fact into it the whole time).

Thanks for pointing out the bugs I'll fix them up as soon as i can.

And yes Sluttown will have choices. I'm building it a little different to how a lot of these games are made which should hopefully let me add a bunch of branches to character story's to give a lot of variety- eventually, it will obviously take a long time to get there.

So there's a fair number of mistakes like the carrier/career thing above showing that this thing could use a good proof reading pass. Also there's some broken media problems that aren't just due to Firefox not wanting to deal with mp4. This VN has fallen into the trap where the author used a case agnostic platform (ie Winders) where the filesystem (NTFS) preserves the case on writing but ignores it on loading. The content on Linux which respects case both ways ends up not being able to find the files to load. Usually this problem is due to the dev letting Winders exploder hide the file extensions by default and thus not noticing when say a .JPG ends up out in the filesystem while setting up the URL to find a .jpg. It's a bit different in this VN, because the URL in the content wanted to load a "Images/Misc/Lippy.Jpg" for example but the file out on disc was "Images/Misc/Lippy.jpg". I'm not exactly sure what chain of catastrophe causes that situation, but it happened to more than one URL in the Ella part of the story.
Thanks for catching these for me bud. The .Jpeg .jpg thing was just a typo i missed. The carrier/career thing is just cause I'm an idiot lol. I'm dyslexic and if MS Word doesn't give me the squiggle i assume everything is OK.

Other than that did it all run fine on Linux?

would be nice to add a background picture instead of the dark-void
would like to feel like im playing a game
not surfing a deepweb
I absolutely hate background images in games. It has a weird effect on my dyslexia and makes it really hard to read. I understand its a personal preference for a lot of people but i has made games fully unplayable for me in the past so i probably wont ever use one.
 

AmusingOddity

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Hi,
You do know you are in the process of creating porn games right?
if you try to appease every woke idiot complaining easily offended sensitive genderfluid non binary carbon based lifeform you probably gonna end up writing politically correct lullabies.

I doubt anyone could ever write a Woke Porn game - the basic principle of Porn is not woke at all. In its intrinsic nature Porn IS offensive. (or should be)
;)

New Title: How to sensibly show your non binary genderfluid friend the entire spectrum of human potential interactions taking into account that all activities are between fully responsible adults who fully understand and accept the true nature and potential consequences of all their consented legal actions and that nothing will happen that may harm anyone's either conscience virtue well-being moral political or philosophical beliefs or body integrity - consents will be publicly notarized at least 48 hours before any occurring.
Yeah your right, i mean there are games on this site about rape and stuff, by comparason this game is super tame (and in content i thought gave the trans character dignity while also making her slutty- at least in the second arch).

It's not the use of a slur that bothers me its that i did it without realizing.

If i was making a game around race play for example i wouldn't use the n word in the title and I'd make clear in the description that the game will contain slurs. I totally get people calling me out on it.

The title was just meant to be a pun on how to train your dragon . . . Puns man, they get you every time lol.
 

StokkaFilippo

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Nice, simple, little novel. I would add a third point of view, Mark's one, and would be complete.
Yes, of course, is rough, simplicistic and derivative. There are also bugs (on the second route some pages are not displayed, the name is incorrect sometimes etc etc). But it works, and that's the main point. It works. Could be funny to have original artworks for this.

PS There's a wonderful threesome of Ella Hollywood with Natalie Mars out there.
 
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