ollane — I just read some posts about your new game- Tomie in oddland.
I would suggest you in making a new game with new character. We’ve played as tomie for years and I want a change.
I love your work a lot, you have a lot more potential so I would like to see you work on a different character than again spending your effort and time on tomie.
I like the big titted girl in TWM Expansion a lot, the one in the nude beach (personal preference).
Although it’s been used in other games, a new game with her being a recently divorced housewife looking to move on to new life looks like an awesome premise for a new game.
I feel that TWM should have been a lot more famous but it didn’t get enough love and exposure from a lot of people due to its darker themes. A game without darker themes like abuse, rape, assault etc would be more accepted by the community. I feel these darker themes are very niche and only appeal to a minority of people. A majority of people will appreciate your work more if you chooses a more light hearted story with good corruption progression. Your art, ideas and implementation of them in the game is your strong point, but I feel like your writing of story/plot, it’s progressing is your weak point.
Like TWM has lot of inconsistencies. Like for example, in the sex dialogues, tomie says the guys to bang her hard in very lewd words but in the after sex blow Job scene, it’s shown that she is disgusted even with max corruption. There are many similar mismatches like this in the game which makes me feel stifled while playing the game.
Like the samdai route, if she has Max corruption, she should have gotten a lewd work uniform, she should have liked the sexual harassment better and not be against it(like she shouldn’t be surprised/shocked/angry if anyone would spank her in lift etc). I feel that these are not planned well. You should have kept a corruption cap and the cap should have been increased as the plot progressed(like 50 corruption cap at first update then 75, 100 etc in later updates).
The more the plot progressed, the more the corruption should have happened, and the more corrupted she is, her corruption should have been reflected in all the dialogues & scenes throughout the game properly without mismatch.
If the new game can avoid all these then it would definitely become a popular game.
In the above mentioned plot line, we can explore a lot of consensual corruption, like her having a female friend who can corrupt her, her wanting to explore more options after divorce, her son/new step sons for exploring incest, her working on new jobs to overcome her conservative mindset- like she willingly letting her colleagues grope her tits to motivate them, her marrying a new person in middle of game and her cheating on him later with his colleagues, her sleeping with her son’s friends, the new husband becoming a cuck or sharing his wife willingly if we choose to walk that path, her sleeping with her new husbands boss for promoting him, she getting sexually assaulted at her work then getting corrupted and then sleeping with her own work manager/colleagues, she doing strip dance in office party, beach, mixed baths, massage, gym, park, slums red light area, damn a lot lot more scenes and ideas are worth exploring. This would definitely be a banger.
Anyway I’m just suggesting but I hope you will look into my suggestion. Continuing with tomie again……hmm…… I would definitely play but im not that excited. I would need to play the game and get a feel to know whether I would like it or not but my gut feeling is saying that exploring odd land may not be that appealing to many people.
I suggest that you conduct a poll on your next games theme on patreon and F95..you should also check out the game- downfall: a story of corruption. It has awesome and realistic plot/corruption progression.
Anyway, I would always support you like I always have, so good luck. Also, Can you tell when the new game will kick off?
I would suggest you in making a new game with new character. We’ve played as tomie for years and I want a change.
I love your work a lot, you have a lot more potential so I would like to see you work on a different character than again spending your effort and time on tomie.
I like the big titted girl in TWM Expansion a lot, the one in the nude beach (personal preference).
Although it’s been used in other games, a new game with her being a recently divorced housewife looking to move on to new life looks like an awesome premise for a new game.
I feel that TWM should have been a lot more famous but it didn’t get enough love and exposure from a lot of people due to its darker themes. A game without darker themes like abuse, rape, assault etc would be more accepted by the community. I feel these darker themes are very niche and only appeal to a minority of people. A majority of people will appreciate your work more if you chooses a more light hearted story with good corruption progression. Your art, ideas and implementation of them in the game is your strong point, but I feel like your writing of story/plot, it’s progressing is your weak point.
Like TWM has lot of inconsistencies. Like for example, in the sex dialogues, tomie says the guys to bang her hard in very lewd words but in the after sex blow Job scene, it’s shown that she is disgusted even with max corruption. There are many similar mismatches like this in the game which makes me feel stifled while playing the game.
Like the samdai route, if she has Max corruption, she should have gotten a lewd work uniform, she should have liked the sexual harassment better and not be against it(like she shouldn’t be surprised/shocked/angry if anyone would spank her in lift etc). I feel that these are not planned well. You should have kept a corruption cap and the cap should have been increased as the plot progressed(like 50 corruption cap at first update then 75, 100 etc in later updates).
The more the plot progressed, the more the corruption should have happened, and the more corrupted she is, her corruption should have been reflected in all the dialogues & scenes throughout the game properly without mismatch.
If the new game can avoid all these then it would definitely become a popular game.
In the above mentioned plot line, we can explore a lot of consensual corruption, like her having a female friend who can corrupt her, her wanting to explore more options after divorce, her son/new step sons for exploring incest, her working on new jobs to overcome her conservative mindset- like she willingly letting her colleagues grope her tits to motivate them, her marrying a new person in middle of game and her cheating on him later with his colleagues, her sleeping with her son’s friends, the new husband becoming a cuck or sharing his wife willingly if we choose to walk that path, her sleeping with her new husbands boss for promoting him, she getting sexually assaulted at her work then getting corrupted and then sleeping with her own work manager/colleagues, she doing strip dance in office party, beach, mixed baths, massage, gym, park, slums red light area, damn a lot lot more scenes and ideas are worth exploring. This would definitely be a banger.
Anyway I’m just suggesting but I hope you will look into my suggestion. Continuing with tomie again……hmm…… I would definitely play but im not that excited. I would need to play the game and get a feel to know whether I would like it or not but my gut feeling is saying that exploring odd land may not be that appealing to many people.
I suggest that you conduct a poll on your next games theme on patreon and F95..you should also check out the game- downfall: a story of corruption. It has awesome and realistic plot/corruption progression.
Anyway, I would always support you like I always have, so good luck. Also, Can you tell when the new game will kick off?
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