Sigh. Alright, what's the poison: are Kate and Emily lesbians? Or is this another corner-cutting "everybody's bi" harem? Either way... why, just why do we have to go down this road?
Look, it's your game, I'm not owed anything, everybody likes different things, I get it. But dammit, man. I feel like there was really an opportunity here to do something different than everybody else. This could have been a "happy harem gets established early, everybody's cool with the master fucking everybody, but then the maids start catching real feelings and they all start competing for the master" style story. How often have you read that story? How many games actually have the harem compete for the harem king's heart after the harem's established? It's surprisingly few! Usually they all miraculously get along so the author can skip straight to "Happy Harem Bullshit Ending A". You could have been a trailblazer here, providing something different and unique, and you know what scarcity does? It stands out! It sells!
There still could have been threesomes, but hot competitive threesomes where the two girls try to one-up each other to please the master. There could have been sexy mishaps between two or more of the girls, but it could have been brought about by their attention-grabbing teases accidentally going too far. For the femdom flavor, each girl could attempt secure the master's deepest submission as the master's true mistress, while the maledom route could consist of lovable toys doing their very best to be the favorite/wildest/most compliant fuck of the bunch. This game blitzed into sexy times so fast, I was really curious to know what the bigger picture could be - you already blazed past the usual step-by-step approach, so I thought you were doing something a little unique here with the story!
But no. It appears not. Instead, it's looking like we'll hook up Kate and Emily (because harem kings love playing cupid for other people instead of claiming every girl for themselves, right? ...Right?
). And then probably Leyla will happily hop into that mix of her own volition. Whaaaaat, she's bi?! Who could have guessed!! And eventually, oh, we'll convince 100% straight married Mary that surprise! She was secretly bi all along too! And then we'll have a harem that all fucks each other whether the master is there or not! Oh boy, people who claim they love you fucking each other behind your back! That's just what harems are all about!
Please be more creative. Please don't just throw in the lesbian tag for the sake of having the lesbian tag, or worse have
50% OF THE HAREM actually be lesbians (because you realize lesbians AREN'T ATTRACTED TO MEN, right? So they'll NEVER find the master truly attractive, you understand? THAT'S SUPER DEMORALIZING FOR A GUY'S HAREM, WHEN HALF THE HAREM DOESN'T FIND THE GUY ATTRACTIVE, YOU SEE?). Also, please don't make all the harem members bi. "Come on, that makes things super easy and convenient!" Yeah, okay, but convenience doesn't make your story better, so no, don't do that.
Please.
Just look at it this way: Kate said she loved us. Emily said the same. Are they liars? Or are they super frivolous with heavy words like love? Because right now they're shown to be straight up lying right to our faces, since they happily flaunt their true feelings for each other right in front of us, right after fucking us. That is NOT endearing. Surely that's obvious.
Listen, I only bring this up now because there's really only part of one scene that would have to be removed to course-correct. All that needs to change is that Kate really
did hope to be Emily's bestie and nothing more. Like I said, I really think you could do something cool and original, with a competitive harem angle instead of the umpteenth everybody-loves-everybody harem story. If you think I don't know shit about shit, or that's just not a direction you're comfortable heading, hey, that's your right. Feel free to ignore me and carry on with your plan. In the end you're the real master of this game's universe, so do what you enjoy! No matter what you choose, I realize once things progress further than this point it will be too much bother to backtrack so I won't bring this up again. Promise! But if you think I might have made a decent point here, or at the very least that you might be interested in doing something other than yet another by-the-book (bi-the-book?) harem plot, PLEASE. PLEASE don't continue using your author wand for lesbomancy in this harem game. Use it to Thanos-snap what's there and instead take us in a fresh, exciting new direction. Threesomes, orgies, yes. Les/bi harem members, no. Remember: the master is the harem king. It's all about him! At least, that's what this random internet user would like to see. Thanks for reading! Have a good one!
