Detestable Liaisons was described by Don as a quick stroke story, which in theory would give him a short creative break from Toxic Attraction and the other two long form stories. In reality Don has tried to morph the story beyond his original concept. If Don stuck with the original premise and made it quick story as swewx stated the sex scenes between Courtney and Archer are smoking.
Everyone has their own take take, but end it with chapter 5. Archer and Courtney are salespeople so they have tendency to be narcissistic and vain. Conventioneer seek each other out for a spur of the moment fuck so I hope Don doesnt try to make them a couple like Lester and Sarah will be at the end. Let Courtney’s husband get arrested at the concierge’s desk for making to much on a commotion. Archer and Courtney can have uninterrupted, unprotected sex the whole weekend. As she and Archer walk hand in hand to the concierge desk after having a quickie in the elevator, they overhear employees talk about a guest’s disturbance and arrest. Courtney is immediately smacked back into reality when she can’t get a hold of her husband and leaves Archer’s side without even a goodbye kiss. Courtney bails her husband out while notified he is permanently banned from the hotel and future conventions. Still full of Archer’s spunk the couple argue, go home and have make up sex, but it’s too late the deed is done as she is pregnant with Archer’s baby. A year later, Courtney attends her first convention after having a healthy baby boy that favors Archer more than her husband. Courtney and her husband avoided sex since the Archer Jr’s birth. Her husband safely at home with the baby she sees a familiar face that makes her wet. Archer hearing through the grapevine Courtney was pregnant was ready to give her baby number two this weekend. As they approach each other and hug like longtime friends, Archer loves seeing and feeling Courtney’s new post baby body and eager to see the changes intimately. She whispers into his ear “Hi Daddy I think Archer Jr needs a brother or sister”. Archer nods and smiles as he pulls Courtney to the elevator. THE END