Maybe her daughters are difficult because daddy is away working and blame her and if Lester does look like a troll the children aren’t going to warm up to him any time soon and to be an engineer you would have to explain your ideas to simplest guy on the shop floor in a way he would understand to get the job done so explaining to young daughters would not be a problem.
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As I recall someone stated that Don had no plans to involve the children. They are merely there as part of the initial character building. He was avoiding their involvement due to the young child status.
I would also recommend reviewing the physical description of Lester (older, very obese, thinning hair, hairy, ok Troll like - said many times by Sarah herself.) Sure he's a warrior in the bed, but has the personality of said troll. He has the "potential" to become a nicer person, however time and again he reverts to being the utter tool that he is. It is part of the draw for this type of story.
I would also recommend reviewing the physical description of Lester (older, very obese, thinning hair, hairy, ok Troll like - said many times by Sarah herself.) Sure he's a warrior in the bed, but has the personality of said troll. He has the "potential" to become a nicer person, however time and again he reverts to being the utter tool that he is. It is part of the draw for this type of story.
The explaining things to anyone on the street for the jobs he gets is something I don't necessarily agree with. Generally, the people who work with engineers know what they are talking about. Its like saying that a builder insulates his way in a job by having an architect explain every little nuance in a way a high school kid could understand. Also, the old saying is, "those who can do, those who can't -- teach." I have known many people in my longish life who are just like that. For instance, I had a film teacher who did not know what a mic screen was and completely humiliated themselves in class when we watched a documentary on an African filmmaker and she thought the fuzzy thing on the boom mic was something the filmmaker created based on his hunting. We then had to explain how all that worked to a professor with a PhD in film studies. Some people explain better than others, even if they are an expert at what they do, but fine, math is a horrible example showing my complete ineptitude. Take any other subject, because Lester must be good at something. I can't hack into computers, so he is better than me at it. Outside of ESO I don't play online games and then I only play with people I knew before we played the game. You might say Lester is mediocre at gaming based on how he spoke to his team online, but I have 1000s of hours electronic gaming and he still has more experience than I do at online gaming. I have more hours than a lot of people in tabletop gaming (real gaming to me) and am sure I would be very much more experienced at that then Lester, but he is presented as the leader (not GM, just leader) of his little group. Stories, in particular, stories such as porn, are not very good at taking time to show exactly what someone's life skills are out side of fucking and, truthfully, Don could give Lester whatever skills he wants to. Maybe he is a great cartographer and can help kids in geography (as an example only). the point was just that he could ingratiate the kids to his friendship by helping them where their parents lack. The kids could also have been raised to not judge a book by its cover and don't make snap decisions about someone if they are ugly. I get that it is easy to say Lester is sub-par at everything he does because he is a short fat troll-like individual who has no respect for anyone. There is not enough in this story to make me think I know all about exactly Lester is and anything like that would be supposition on my part. Everything else is just what ifs from a reader of an online story.
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Thank you Psiber. I 100% agree with you especially working on the construction side of an electrical engineering company and seeing it first hand
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The alpha draft released today on his Patreon 5 hours ago. I’m interested to see how the story ends for Courtney, Archer and Harry
Anyone who can share it? Seems like the only one of his series which hasn't lost all the wheels, though Courtney seems to be succumbing fast.
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You’re right. If this truly is the last chapter, I would like to see how Don ends his finale especially since this story and Toxic are loosely similar tones. May or may not shed light on how Toxic will end eventually.
Hoping someone is good enough to share My Neighbour ch12 soon !
This story is done now. WTF did I just read? Who asked for that? His discord must be an insane asylum. That's literally the worst addition he could have made. It destroys both characters and makes no sense in the story and is disgusting to read.
Instead of building on the love scene from last chapter, having Sarah go to his bed that night and have a talk about what that meant we get this. A chapter repeating sex scenes, her still being defiant, pointless bits about irrelevant background characters and now this. The worst part of this entire story for literally no reason. I'm absolutely baffled by this decision. Even if I was to continue reading this it would involve skipping parts of it because I'm disgusted at where this is going
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WTH did I read and what possessed Don to write that scene between Lester and Dan. This can’t be right? Okay who made this suggestion on Discord or waved enough cash at Don. Don jumped the shark and wants to torture his fanbase and their loyalty by going this direction.
Now I’m dreading Ch. 24
Now I’m dreading Ch. 24
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It isn't the real final version. Some did a fake. It doesn't show on the Patreon site at all.
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I believe Dan gave this final draft early to some top tier paypigs, or at least that's what I was told by the person who gave it to me.
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Whoooo nice catch NEOhioDude. I know there are elements in this story that’s off the rails but I’m relieved Don did not author this alternate version. Part of me wonders about the previous chapters uploaded to this site. Were they real or Memorex (For any kids of the 80’s)? I guess we have to vet the fake Toxic Attraction stories now.
He usually does that through Patreon, but just saying if that is the way he is (and according to the opening has planned on) it makes no sense. Let's say he could even get Dan to do all of that. The only reason I can see it happening is so Lester could take pics and show to Sarah to disillusion her on Dan and why he's doing all of this. Even if he could make Dan into some sort of subservient beta (which there has been noting to allude to that) He, most certainly is not gay. Blackmail or humiliation is the only thing I can see Lester doing with that and Dan saying oh, shit, as he realizes that the whole thing was ill thought out now has backfired. Also, prison and gangs in South America both have situations in which men use what they refer to as bitches and they never see themselves as gay, that is the person receiving it, not giving it, in their minds. Why would Lester not do the same exact thing???
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Anybody having any luck securing a copy of the last chapter of Detestable Liaisons. My curious icy is growing about the ending. Will it be entertaining or a dud?
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Maybe Don just finished watching Sicario and got inspired by Benicio del Toro’s character during the interrogation scene