I'll wait until the final version but this was too packed. Idk why he skipped to the Chicago hotel room when he'd set up Lester going to her house. Also this chapter has way too much Dan POV. Why didn't we see Sarah's version of the restaurant scene. Hopefully Don fixes this in the final version
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The whole chapter is based on the fact that Dan is a complete idiot, just a brainless cretin, or the author is sure that readers will eat this shit because they are also brainless cretins. And I also "like" how an adult smart woman turns into a current bitch who needs to cum. Sarah - your life is turning to shit! - Mmm, I need to cum! Sarah, find out where your husband is! - Mmm, I need to cum.... It resembles a zombie that stretches its arms forward and hums a : dick.. DICK.. CUM..
I'll wait till final version for my opinion, I'm glad at least one of them finally wisen up to Lester's manipulation, as we were discussing earlier. Also liked the sprinke of banter, kiss, role play between Sarah and Lester. I wish Sarah also figures it out, but rather attracted it it and becomes a willing partner
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hey ding ding, read the mod post a few posts above yours. attaching pdfs is not allowed.
also to the moderator Ryahn : why not prohibit the pdf file format from attachments? is this not configurable in the forum settings? (edit: oh i get it, the problem is not PDF, but they don't want to host the pirated content itself)
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Chapter 24 alpha, using approved file hosts. Any thanks should go to chillie_willie
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Oh man. Saw that My Neighbor 12 & 13 was up along with Lisa's Coworker 3 in an earlier post before being removed due to policy. Anyone still able to share using the approved methods?
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Credit to whoever shared these originally
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Can anyone explain why this chapter features more conversation between Dan and Sarah than Lester and Sarah? Like who cares about the details of the hospital hierarchy. Can we have some dialogue between Lester and Sarah?
Now we have to wait another month because he wasted pages talking about Sarah's boss. I hope by the next chapter, Jesse is kicked out and we some one on one time with Lester and Sarah.
Now we have to wait another month because he wasted pages talking about Sarah's boss. I hope by the next chapter, Jesse is kicked out and we some one on one time with Lester and Sarah.
Am not angry at Jesse getting a slice of the pie after all he was the one that gave Lester the breakthrough with Sarah if you recall. The night was suppose to be about Lester and Sarah, so I hope in the full version Lester gets to kick him out immediately
Thank you and to the original poster of the works!!!!
Hey folks, sorry I am yet again asking about tainted conception chapter 4 in this thread for TA. Does anyone have the download link for it? Big thanks !
I like the bit with Jesse. It is interesting to imagine the inner mind, the appeal of fucking someone your husband depises, in this context. That is the game, to walk on the edge of really ruining your relationship, to be reclaimed when your husband makes love to you.
CH 24 its like watching a car crash in slow motion, Dan is in jail while two people fuck his cock sleeve.
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Thank you SmartMan. I appreciate you. I was to about to say heck with this, but I have another gift for you. Detestable Liaisons chapter 5. Not too thrilled how it ended but you be the judge. Sorry doing this from my phone
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