I am going to write my opinion tomorrow, I have really been thinking on this one, because there are some things that really don't work here, in a literary sense. However, that being said, I will say that the ending of the chapter doesn't really work in the wat Don thinks it does. He needs to wrap back around to Lester and Sarah, maybe just finishing -- again -- and maybe with her riding him, she ends, embraces him and thanks him for a "perfect evening." He could ask, to cover himself, even though Dan never showed up? and she tells him something Lester would really like, like "especially because he never showed up." I just think it needs to end on them starting a conversation and a large part of their over night talk needs to include why he said Dan was there, when he clearly wasn't and why Jessie was the one to use her. In my opinion anyway, I will put more tomorrow.