J267 is one of the best authors from Lit. I have been following him for years. Something happened to him and he’s no longer posting stories. I heard it was due to medical reasons. I truly hope he’s ok. His stories are shorter 1-3 chapters but it’s well written and consistent with the wife sharing storyline.
I don’t see Dan locating Lizzie that fast. Dan tried searching social media for over an hour to locate Lizzie/Elizabeth. This is the same man who didn’t have a passcode on his phone not that long ago where Jesse got access to Sarah’s photos and the couple’s text messages. So you except someone with the little tech skills to locate one person in Chicago, IL. I say the only way Dan will locate Lizzie is bumping into her by accident.
Dan always ruining something
Lester's conditioning first and foremost and possibly a DS breadcrumb of future events.
What's so messed up about the sweet, romantic story I'm writing??
Did she really lie to him? She certainly omitted telling him she was taking precautions. Obvi Lester would think she's lying as she "seemed" into the breeding, but she never admitted outside of sex-talk that she wanted him to get her pregnant.
I still think that its not about Lester falling for Sarah, just absolute control and makes her fall in love with him
But what Sarah thinks happened with regard to all this sex talk about her having Lester's son is not important, its that Lester is going to MAKE her think she lied to him, he will say it seriously, she will think opposite, he will convince her, no, they were serious and she said ok but then lied to him by taking it. Its, for lester, about making her think and do what Lester wants and believe that what he says about it has to be right.
I love both ideas collar or piercing, preferably nipple piercing!
Psiber thank you for thinking the same and adding context. It was never about the baby more than it was about constant control and manipulation until her reality becomes skewed.
It's a given at this stage that its about control and manipulation for him. I was simply stating she didn't lie to him. But you got me to thinking. Yes Lester has said it a few times now "but what if I didn't get that operation" and we've seen her inner monologue react to it in a sexual way. I do wonder what she will think when he tells her that it's true he didn't get the snip. Will it turn her on, freak her out, or be the key element to letting her admit she wants it.
Sarah may felt guilty at first saying yes to the ring and public proposal, but when she chose not to wear Dan’s rings Sarah subconsciously she made it known she not was longer Dan’s committed wife. Im sure Sarah was showing her appreciation to Lester for being smart enough to give her space while observant to notice her empty ring finger. Like Sarah was testing Lester, he passed with flying colors when Lester returned his engagement ring onto Sarah’s finger. Sarah willingly choosing to admire and then accept his ring is the ultimate sign or symbol of ownership. Don also made note how Sarah was being hypnotized and mesmerized by the ring’s shiny glints dancing off the wall and her peripheral vision. Hopefully now Sarah will proudly wear Lester’s engagement ring in public. This way Dan and anyone the former couple will see a married woman corrupting herself with another man by his ring.
Most obvious would be Lester telling Sarah he secretly had procedure reversed when he knew she was the one. Would Sarah be gullible enough to believe his lie is the question
True that. Was wondering why he doesn't post any more stories now. Where did you hear about his medical condition?
Cucked by an incel is incredible! It's a very refreshing read. Can't wait for the next chapter but I know it'll be a while.What's so messed up about the sweet, romantic story I'm writing??
Definitely Don poking fun at himself (and/or the readers). It's not the first time he's done it and he'll take other small ideas from the audience like Lester's CPAP machine. Or how he wrote in how Sarah wouldn't eat Lester's ass again after the negative response from readers.
