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Verisimilinude

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Chapter 16 wasnt her initiating. It was Lester's date night and she was going along with their established plan. Chapter 23 she initiated sex because she didn't get off after blowing him and Otis. I'm asking for her to pursue Lester for sex. She loves fucking him but she refuses to seduce him or arrange for it to happen. Or even acknowledge she likes fucking him except when they're having sex.
Guess we are reading a different story then, bc she definitely initiated going to the bedroom by teasing Lester in Ch16 and I forgot one, she also initiated Ch19 - if this isn't an invitation I'd be hard pressed to understand your definition of one.

S: How about you open your birthday present tonight? Whatever you
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So that's 3 times and I get it you want her to do it every time or more often, you want her to have romantic feelings for Lester. As I've stated before the writing doesn't support the narrative you want, bc up to this point she's only seen it as sex. Can this change, sure, and for your sake I hope it does.
 

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I completely agree with you in your idea of the relationship between Sara and Lester and I'm sure that most readers want it, but wondering: And what's next?
This will lead to the end of the story, because having created a couple from Sarah and Lester, it remains only to decide what to do with Dan: a complete cuckold or divorce/moral humiliation and destruction of him as a person.
It will be possible to add a few hot sex scenes, but it will not bring the spark/spiciness of a forbidden relationship.
Do we want the end of the story? Is it financially beneficial for DS? Of course, these are good questions to which we will get answers over time.
Exactly this is the point I've been trying to make. Its the human condition - once you have something, you no longer want it. The moment that Lester and Sarah are a "Couple" the story ends, because there is no where to go from there. I agree that DS has probably strung this along far longer than necessary, but I understand he knows his craft for teasing his audience and catering to them whether they like it or not.
 

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You know, I will argue that ending this story is financially beneficial for Don. He has already released two groupings of chapters on Amazon, for sale as digital books, however the length of one story will end up being too taxing on people. Stephen King is successful because he finishes one book and then write another story and then another and another. People wouldn't continue to read him if most of what he wrote was about the same people/story. He even, eventually had his writing leave castle rock, maine as he had pumped enough out of that little fictional town. If your writing is good enough it will sustain multiple stories. Some may be sections of the Green Mile and some might be The Stand, so lengths vary, but eventually you have to be able to move on to the next story and then readers will follow. Readers follow and the money will continue. Basically readers become fans and fans = revenue.
It's the same phenomenon that happens in serial TV. Fans become enamored with the cast/story, creating a relationship with it, and do not desire to see it end - the writers producers see it as a cash cow and want to keep milking it - both of these actions cause the series to go on and on long past it's logical conclusion.

I agree with your assessment and think that new characters/stories are warranted, and to his credit DS is trying this - NE, but as Chillie has alluded to it may be difficult to find the same magic that captured the audience of TA. Which would lead DS to not want to let go of TA.
 
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Probably I am the only one not seeing any reason for Lester and Sarah to proceed further than sex and sex talk.

Sarah is basically a forty something mom which has discovered that she likes sex much more than she has probably thought. She is beginning to blame Dan for his inability to exit from a financial situation which is haunting their family and the kink of Dan exploited by Lester was simply the worst thing in the worst place.

Lester is for sure someone who can satisfy her at level she has never imagined. This does not mean that she is going to develope feelings for him.

She could drop Dan for some other Beta-provider for sure(she is hot yet and perfectly able to find some “fish”), simply not for Lester. He is not a Beta provider neither a alpha man. He hasn’t the “physique du role“ for it and most of all doesn’t lead men.

He is a man who is able to exploit the situations that come to him.

He cannot reproduce with someone like Sarah under normal circumstances neither can be a long term couple, He can reproduce, with the genes distance, only if he is able to exploit the events.

This is why I think any development in feelings in not necessary and probably inconsistent with the story.

PS. People like Lester which are basically lonely and haven’t a social circle of people that are led by them(in a broad daylight I mean), in the end are going to get caught in their manipulation and lose. DS can allow a different stories here due to paying people but it would be an unrealistic end.
There has been significant psychological changes to the three main characters since the first chapter. Monogamy and marital vows I don’t see I questioned the strength and resolve of their marriage prior to Dan being let go and Dan and Sarah exploring apartments in Chicago. This was Dan’s sexual fantasy and Sarah was used as a vessel to fulfill his fantasy. They never went in with a plan and opened Pandora’s box inviting Lester into the fantasy. Lester uses the same techniques as the past once the couple is in his lair. Starts with the voyeuristic videos of the wife which in turns leads to separation and isolation of the wife while actively humiliating and manipulating the husband. Have her reluctantly have sex with Lester and husband watches. Do this several times until Lester gets bored or they escape. Lester profits from the video sales. Rinse and repeat as it’s clinical for Lester. Unlike his last known conquest Lizzie, Lester began to develop feelings for Sarah in his twisted way, but Don has yet to explore those feeling. As much as its interesting to see Sarah’s slow transformation it would be more noteworthy to see the affect Sarah has on him internally. We yet to see any changes physically, but in Ch.25 Lester has shown small changes. Lester is less interested in video games, lends an understanding ear and comforting when Sarah was demoted, he has given her space and not exploited as she thought, complimented and flirted with her, included her in tactics and valued her thoughts and opinions, and shown his ability to provide for her while spoiling her with expensive jewelry.

Sarah has seen the biggest jump. She has the beauty, charm and sexuality to pick up any man she wants like Jesse who comes from money and worshipped her, but I don’t think she cares about being financially secure. During sex with Jesse she sought Lester out in the darkness not to cuck him but to show off for him. She didn’t let Byron or Jesse cum inside her once she had Lester in her thoughts. Lester gives her what she needs and desires. Sarah wants to please Lester and fulfill his desires as he has opened a whole new world sexually. Dan was unable or never willing to fulfill those desires. By Ch.25 she sees Dan as weak and pathetic and openly questions her desire for him. The feckless and stupid way he pinches his nose when confronted with his fantasy. Sarah can see Lester as a viable mate who is strong and sure. She desire his cum not Dan’s inside her and made it a point to lick every drop after the blowjob in front of Lester. Sarah was at first repulsed by Lester’s features and appearance, but gradually we seen a change were she was overlooking those issues. Now we see her being attracted and turned on by Lester’s body, his breath, his quirks and features that repulsed her earlier. she wasn’t made at Lester after he revealed his plot. She openly cheated and had sex with Lester on the very futon she had sex the first time with Dan. She wasn’t mad Lester fell asleep on the futon. Sarah calmly requested him to leave. If Lester pushed I’m sure she would have relented on breakfast with the girls. She didn’t care if the girls heard her moan and cum on Lester’s cock so its naturally going to transgress to Lester and her having sex full time in her bedroom. We see the changes only in the bedroom and yet to see those changes publicly. Symbolically it was interesting for Lester to point out Sarah was not wearing her rings. Lester slipping on that ring and her accepting it with admiration is was more than just sex talk. Will Sarah wear Lester’s engagement ring publicly where everyone she knows will see it’s not Dan’s engagement ring and wedding bands. Does her body leans towards Lester in public when he talks as it does privately so she can be near him to feel his heat and smell him.
Fans want to see Sarah fall completely for Lester and anything less would be a disappointment.
 
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There has been significant psychological changes to the three main characters since the first chapter. Monogamy and marital vows I don’t see I questioned the strength and resolve of their marriage prior to Dan being let go and Dan and Sarah exploring apartments in Chicago. This was Dan’s sexual fantasy and Sarah was used as a vessel to fulfill his fantasy. They never went in with a plan and opened Pandora’s box inviting Lester into the fantasy. Lester uses the same techniques as the past once the couple is in his lair. Starts with the voyeuristic videos of the wife which in turns leads to separation and isolation of the wife while actively humiliating and manipulating the husband. Have her reluctantly have sex with Lester and husband watches. Do this several times until Lester gets bored or they escape. Lester profits from the video sales. Rinse and repeat as it’s clinical for Lester. Unlike his last known conquest Lizzie, Lester began to develop feelings for Sarah in his twisted way, but Don has yet to explore those feeling. As much as its interesting to see Sarah’s slow transformation it would be more noteworthy to see the affect Sarah has on him internally. We yet to see any changes physically, but in Ch.25 Lester has shown small changes. Lester is less interested in video games, lends an understanding ear and comforting when Sarah was demoted, he has given her space and not exploited as she thought, complimented and flirted with her, included her in tactics and valued her thoughts and opinions, and shown his ability to provide for her while spoiling her with expensive jewelry.

Sarah has seen the biggest jump. She has the beauty, charm and sexuality to pick up any man she wants like Jesse who comes from money and worshipped her, but I don’t think she cares about being financially secure. During sex with Jesse she sought Lester out in the darkness not to cuck him but to show off for him. She didn’t let Byron or Jesse cum inside her once she had Lester in her thoughts. Lester gives her what she needs and desires. Sarah wants to please Lester and fulfill his desires as he has opened a whole new world sexually. Dan was unable or never willing to fulfill those desires. By Ch.25 she sees Dan as weak and pathetic and openly questions her desire for him. The feckless and stupid way he pinches his nose when confronted with his fantasy. Sarah can see Lester as a viable mate who is strong and sure. She desire his cum not Dan’s inside her and made it a point to lick every drop after the blowjob in front of Lester. Sarah was at first repulsed by Lester’s features and appearance, but gradually we seen a change were she was overlooking those issues. Now we see her being attracted and turned on by Lester’s body, his breath, his quirks and features that repulsed her earlier. she wasn’t made at Lester after he revealed his plot. She openly cheated and had sex with Lester on the very futon she had sex the first time with Dan. She wasn’t mad Lester fell asleep on the futon. Sarah calmly requested him to leave. If Lester pushed I’m sure she would have relented on breakfast with the girls. She didn’t care if the girls heard her moan and cum on Lester’s cock so its naturally going to transgress to Lester and her having sex full time in her bedroom. We see the changes only in the bedroom and yet to see those changes publicly. Symbolically it was interesting for Lester to point out Sarah was not wearing her rings. Lester slipping on that ring and her accepting it with admiration is was more than just sex talk. Will Sarah wear Lester’s engagement ring publicly where everyone she knows will see it’s not Dan’s engagement ring and wedding bands. Does her body leans towards Lester in public when he talks as it does privately so she can be near him to feel his heat and smell him.
Fans want to see Sarah fall completely for Lester and anything less would be a disappointment.
if the future of Dan and Sara is more or less clear, that is, it is practically non-existent (I mean the usual future as a family), then very little has been written about the future of Lester and Sara, everyone sees some kind of conclusion in favor of their couple, but for some reason they discuss it very shyly, which confirms the desire most to unite them in a family.

Somewhere in classic literature, Madame Bovary by Gustave Flaubert, I could be wrong, it was written that when you love a person, you love them completely with all their flaws, if you don't love, then the innocent habits of your partner start to annoy you. This is me at the expense of Dan's nose.
and I also read that there is no greater fury in hell than the fury of a rejected woman.
and that the most dangerous animal is an animal that is cornered, whether Dan will become such a weakling is quite interesting.
 
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Guess we are reading a different story then, bc she definitely initiated going to the bedroom by teasing Lester in Ch16 and I forgot one, she also initiated Ch19 - if this isn't an invitation I'd be hard pressed to understand your definition of one.

S: How about you open your birthday present tonight? Whatever you
want.

So that's 3 times and I get it you want her to do it every time or more often, you want her to have romantic feelings for Lester. As I've stated before the writing doesn't support the narrative you want, bc up to this point she's only seen it as sex. Can this change, sure, and for your sake I hope it does.
I still think this is a story of psychological manipulation and repurposing on Sarah's brain. Sarah wants sex while Lester wants to completely control her. At that point she is his. However, I believe her telling him that she loves him is a little more than sex talk, just wish he had kept up with it, because the more she repeated it to Lester the more it would seem like normality.
 
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It's the same phenomenon that happens in serial TV. Fans become enamored with the cast/story, creating a relationship with it, and do not desire to see it end - the writers producers see it as a cash cow and want to keep milking it - both of these actions cause the series to go on and on long past it's logical conclusion.

I agree with your assessment and think that new characters/stories are warranted, and to his credit DS is trying this - NE, but as Chillie has alluded to it may be difficult to find the same magic that captured the audience of TA. Which would lead DS to not want to let go of TA.
I think that as long as he is writing TA then everything else he writes just seems to be a TA rip-off. He needs to end it in order to be more creative and with great creativity comes revenue.
 
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I think he can do it. He's a very good writer and there's tons of scenarios to be explored in this genre. One I'd love for him to try is a Lester/Sarah like couple (ugly man with very attractive wife) who seduce and exploit younger women. They could move to a neighborhood and seduce wives and daughters and ruin relationships. Have them be outwardly progressive but secretly hateful and cruel.

DS should have a cinematic universe of ugly men conquering attractive women by the time he's done. It's this dynamic that makes his stories appealing. An attractive man seducing women is boring. Making women desire you despite themselves is what I love about his work
 

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I think he can do it. He's a very good writer and there's tons of scenarios to be explored in this genre. One I'd love for him to try is a Lester/Sarah like couple (ugly man with very attractive wife) who seduce and exploit younger women. They could move to a neighborhood and seduce wives and daughters and ruin relationships. Have them be outwardly progressive but secretly hateful and cruel.

DS should have a cinematic universe of ugly men conquering attractive women by the time he's done. It's this dynamic that makes his stories appealing. An attractive man seducing women is boring. Making women desire you despite themselves is what I love about his work
Sith lord Sarah is also on my bingo card for TA endings, right next to "gone girl" style ending.

Imagine someone like Saul from TC meeting Lester. Batman vs Superman of loving wives genre !!
 
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I loved the way Chapter 25 began. A lot of people thought chapter 25 would be just about all of the "rounds", but the chapter begins with the last sex act that Sarah makes that night and does not include any details from Round Two and in between. I think this may be an opening for some of those to show up in later Chapters. For example, Lester can't help humiliating Dan and it looks like he recorded all the times that Jesse had his way with Sarah. Lester is bound to send one of those videos to Dan, just to rub it in. Also, I'm still a fan of wanting others to share Sarah, and once Lester comes up with the fake birth control pills, I don't think he will be sharing her any more. So I hope that maybe during one of the rounds when Sarah was really out of it, that Ned and some of the D & D gang were rewarded for helping Lester at the hotel. Sarah admits she can't remember how many times she had been used, so maybe it was even more than she realized and with more than just Lester and Jesse.

Just to throw out some scenarios. Dan continues his search to find out more about Lester. He joins one of the D & D discords since Ned invited him. The guys start talking about Lester's hot girlfriend. Of course Dan knows who they are talking about, but I don't think anyone knows that Sarah is really Dan's wife. One of the guys mentions that they hope Lester recorded some of the action that happened the night at the hotel. Low and behold Cronos is one of the members of the D & D gang that night and again offers 50K (chapter 9) to see the hot blonde that Lester is not willing to share with Cronos. "What??" Dan thinks to himself. 50K? Dan realizes he still has the first videos that Lester and Sarah made during Chapter 7. He calls Cronos out and offers the video for the 50K. Dan sends the video and suddenly he has 50K in his bank account! Financial problems solved with just one video and on top of that, Cronos offers more money for more videos. Now Dan finds himself in control. Lester sends a video to Dan of Jesse and Sarah in action just to rub it in. But in doing so, Lester is actually helping Dan solve his financial problems. Dan now realizes he no longer needs Lester to play out his fantasies and definitely does not need him to pay his rent. He and Sarah can now control their sexual experiences, choose who they want, when, etc. Sarah continues to feed her sex addiction and Dan is now in control, not Lester. Sarah tells Dan how disappointed she was not to be shared by two guys at once, and now Dan can set that up. He can even be one of the guys. He becomes Sarah's hero again. Can they find someone who is as well endowed as Lester to keep Sarah satisfied in that department? There is always Archer! Sarah does get pregnant since Lester already switched out the birth control pills, but now no one knows who the father is.

I know this goes directly against those who want the Sarah and Lester connection. And I am not saying I want the story to go this way, but see it as a way for Dan to become the hero. Bottom line, it is fun to think of different scenarios and I really enjoy reading them all. I still look forward to reading what Don has in his imagination and will continue reading until the very end.
 
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I still think this is a story of psychological manipulation and repurposing on Sarah's brain. Sarah wants sex while Lester wants to completely control her. At that point she is his. However, I believe her telling him that she loves him is a little more than sex talk, just wish he had kept up with it, because the more she repeated it to Lester the more it would seem like normality.
I remembered we had some big discussions on the topic when Lester coerced Sarah to say I love you. This added spice to the story as Sarah would only say those words to Dan previously. Lester’s effort paid off in Ch.23 when Sarah said I love you to Lester repeatedly and naturally while Dan watched. So why did Don choose to abandon it after Lester put that much time and effort? Seems odd as Lester would have to restart his efforts at square one.
 
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Sith lord Sarah is also on my bingo card for TA endings, right next to "gone girl" style ending.

Imagine someone like Saul from TC meeting Lester. Batman vs Superman of loving wives genre !!
I wonder if there will be another D&D session where Lester‘s cohorts will make their way to Middleton for a game and more with Lester and Sarah. Or if Lester and Sarah will return to Chicago on a date night to play at Ned’s shop. Lester will get to show off Sarah with the engagement ring while Sarah dresses provocatively as a D&D character. She would get a thrill being the distraction and center of attention for these lowlife men.
 

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Just to throw out some scenarios. Dan continues his search to find out more about Lester. He joins one of the D & D discords since Ned invited him. The guys start talking about Lester's hot girlfriend. Of course Dan knows who they are talking about, but I don't think anyone knows that Sarah is really Dan's wife. One of the guys mentions that they hope Lester recorded some of the action that happened the night at the hotel. Low and behold Cronos is one of the members of the D & D gang that night and again offers 50K (chapter 10) to see the hot blonde that Lester is not willing to share with Cronos. "What??" Dan thinks to himself. 50K? Dan realizes he still has the first videos that Lester and Sarah made during Chapter 7. He calls Cronos out and offers the video for the 50K. Dan sends the video and suddenly he has 50K in his bank account! Financial problems solved with just one video and on top of that, Cronos offers more money for more videos. Now Dan finds himself in control. Lester sends a video to Dan of Jesse and Sarah in action just to rub it in. But in doing so, Lester is actually helping Dan solve his financial problems. Dan now realizes he no longer needs Lester to play out his fantasies and definitely does not need him to pay his rent. He and Sarah can now control their sexual experiences, choose who they want, when, etc. Sarah continues to feed her sex addiction and Dan is now in control, not Lester. Sarah tells Dan how disappointed she was not to be shared by two guys at once, and now Dan can set that up. He can even be one of the guys. He becomes Sarah's hero again. Can they find someone who is as well endowed as Lester to keep Sarah satisfied in that department? There is always Archer! Sarah does get pregnant since Lester already switched out the birth control pills, but now no one knows who the father is.
You know what, I totally forgot the kronos angle and I honestly kinda dig the Dan becomes the arms dealer himself idea. Only wrinkle in that is I don't think Kronos is a part of his DnD friends (I don't think even Lester knows who he/she is). Lester is described as someone who maintains his acquaintances into different bubbles and don't like crossing the stream iyk. Ned is part of his DnD bubble and Kronos is part of his dark web bubble
 

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DS should try another shopping spree chapter. Sarah seems to like Lester's fashion sense and he can use it as a date night to avoid the same sex scenes repeating themselves and have them interact with the public as a couple. He can buy her daughter's some gifts too and develop Lester's role as replacing Dan. It will make Sarah more grateful to Lester and Dan won't be able to object considering the austerity he's imposing
 
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I loved the way Chapter 25 began. A lot of people thought chapter 25 would be just about all of the "rounds", but the chapter begins with the last sex act that Sarah makes that night and does not include any details from Round Two and in between. I think this may be an opening for some of those to show up in later Chapters. For example, Lester can't help humiliating Dan and it looks like he recorded all the times that Jesse had his way with Sarah. Lester is bound to send one of those videos to Dan, just to rub it in. Also, I'm still a fan of wanting others to share Sarah, and once Lester comes up with the fake birth control pills, I don't think he will be sharing her any more. So I hope that maybe during one of the rounds when Sarah was really out of it, that Ned and some of the D & D gang were rewarded for helping Lester at the hotel. Sarah admits she can't remember how many times she had been used, so maybe it was even more than she realized and with more than just Lester and Jesse.

Just to throw out some scenarios. Dan continues his search to find out more about Lester. He joins one of the D & D discords since Ned invited him. The guys start talking about Lester's hot girlfriend. Of course Dan knows who they are talking about, but I don't think anyone knows that Sarah is really Dan's wife. One of the guys mentions that they hope Lester recorded some of the action that happened the night at the hotel. Low and behold Cronos is one of the members of the D & D gang that night and again offers 50K (chapter 10) to see the hot blonde that Lester is not willing to share with Cronos. "What??" Dan thinks to himself. 50K? Dan realizes he still has the first videos that Lester and Sarah made during Chapter 7. He calls Cronos out and offers the video for the 50K. Dan sends the video and suddenly he has 50K in his bank account! Financial problems solved with just one video and on top of that, Cronos offers more money for more videos. Now Dan finds himself in control. Lester sends a video to Dan of Jesse and Sarah in action just to rub it in. But in doing so, Lester is actually helping Dan solve his financial problems. Dan now realizes he no longer needs Lester to play out his fantasies and definitely does not need him to pay his rent. He and Sarah can now control their sexual experiences, choose who they want, when, etc. Sarah continues to feed her sex addiction and Dan is now in control, not Lester. Sarah tells Dan how disappointed she was not to be shared by two guys at once, and now Dan can set that up. He can even be one of the guys. He becomes Sarah's hero again. Can they find someone who is as well endowed as Lester to keep Sarah satisfied in that department? There is always Archer! Sarah does get pregnant since Lester already switched out the birth control pills, but now no one knows who the father is.

I know this goes directly against those who want the Sarah and Lester connection. And I am not saying I want the story to go this way, but see it as a way for Dan to become the hero. Bottom line, it is fun to think of different scenarios and I really enjoy reading them all. I still look forward to reading what Don has in his imagination and will continue reading until the very end.
Let me play devil’s advocate as well. So Dan accepts Cronos‘s offer of 50K for some videos with Lester and Sarah? Dan thinks he’s finally outsmarted and outmaneuvered Lester, but this decision only proves he is an idiot. Dan doesn’t know the identity of Cronos, but what if it’s a character we already met. What if Cronos was Richard Thornhill or Byron? Both are executives with deep financial pockets and an axe to grind with either Dan or Sarah. Once they view the tape and see Sarah on screen, they will have leverage over Dan and Sarah. Sarah would be blackmailed and forced to become a slut or watch her career and family life get ruined by the scandal. In this scenario, Sarah would never forgive or trust Dan for putting himself over her and kids for financial gain. His transgression may cause Sarah and the girls to run to Lester for protection and comfort. Lester will be the hero.

I don’t see a scenario where Dan wins against Lester or anybody with a superior mindset. He has never planned or made an effort to work through a problem from start to finish. He puts in little effort when he does work or just enough when searching Facebook and Insta for Lizzie to Google for Ned’s store. However when he arrives, Dan has no game plan on getting the necessary information. He just lucks in with the Discord invite. Whether that was by design by Lester or was Ned truly clueless like Dan.
 
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I really liked reading all the posts about where the characters are heading. I was also asking same questions about what is next for Lester and Sarah, not just physically but also emotionally, as right now it seems only Dan is going through an emotional journey. Right now Sarah and Lester have been going at it for 6-8 months maybe and Lester seems to be her only ally on professional front. All the gifts exchanged between than are from Lester to Sarah to woo her/complement who she is. I think It's time for a romantic gesture from Sarah to Lester.

That got me thinking what would Sarah buy for Lester. A CPAP machine is too on the nose, dress or accessories are lame (and expensive). I am thinking of something that signifies their time together. Like something that denotes their DnD characters- how about a loaded dice that is 20 on all sides as a reminder for that time he rolled a 20 and *won* the maiden. Or a special photoshoot of them at her house with her dressed as her character (she has sent her pics to him but I don't think they ever took a pic together). How about slight modification of appearence to appeal Lester. Now let me tell you, I hate the bimbo-fication subgenre so extreme makeovers like plastic surgery, too much tattoos and piercings are off, I'm thinking of may be a shorter haircut or shaved privates or just one tattoo etc. Something small yet intimate.
 
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DS should try another shopping spree chapter. Sarah seems to like Lester's fashion sense and he can use it as a date night to avoid the same sex scenes repeating themselves and have them interact with the public as a couple. He can buy her daughter's some gifts too and develop Lester's role as replacing Dan. It will make Sarah more grateful to Lester and Dan won't be able to object considering the austerity he's imposing
Lester needs to get her a piercing or tattoo as a mark of ownership to go with the ring. Great dialogue opportunity as Sarah tries to explain/defend to Dan
 
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DS should try another shopping spree chapter. Sarah seems to like Lester's fashion sense and he can use it as a date night to avoid the same sex scenes repeating themselves and have them interact with the public as a couple. He can buy her daughter's some gifts too and develop Lester's role as replacing Dan. It will make Sarah more grateful to Lester and Dan won't be able to object considering the austerity he's imposing
+1. One of my favorite parts of Don writing is his descriptions of Sarah's various dresses. That's why I love that "honeymoon" idea we were discussing- imagine don describing Sarah's bikinis, her choosing and dressing up, Lester rejecting them and choosing the most risque one.

Sidebar: during earlier chapters, I thought of Lester doing something like accessing Dan's computer, notices him bookmarked a dress for sarah, cancels it and buying it for her himself...I just wished we saw more of Lester being needlessly petty roommate!!