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[Ndbaelor]

Regarding Lester-Sarah team up: if people are correct about Sarah's pregnancy arc starting at chapter 30, there is only 5 more chapters to start weaving the hospital arc with the Dan's snooping plot, sentinel VS Lincoln, Jessie/Byron question,maybe kids, maybe lizzie, Dan Sarah interactions,along with all that beautiful sex scenes before it gets too crowded....which gets prioritized? Which one is saved for later? it's gonna be hell of a task.

 

[Chillie_Willie]

Regarding Lester-Sarah team up: if people are correct about Sarah's pregnancy arc starting at chapter 30, there is only 5 more chapters to start weaving the hospital arc with the Dan's snooping plot, sentinel VS Lincoln, Jessie/Byron question,maybe kids, maybe lizzie, Dan Sarah interactions,along with all that beautiful sex scenes before it gets too crowded....which gets prioritized? Which one is saved for later? it's gonna be hell of a task.

It will make for interesting material and discussion topics as the chapters wind down to this number. I am assuming The Lincoln Group and Dan’ snooping will be interweaved until the end of the story (however long that is) as it becomes the catalyst of the Lester/Sarah super team. If Don wrote like he did earlier in Toxic Attraction then all the topics including the meaningless sex could be stuffed with the five chapters, but I think lately he is keeping himself within a regimented pitch count with each chapte. Don could also shift his intended target goals as well to include kink his paid simps request. That said I look forward in seeing Sarah pregnant by chapter 30 if Don keeps on Task

 

[adamblack144]

Where are you guys getting this chapter 30 info from?

 

[Chillie_Willie]

Where are you guys getting this chapter 30 info from?

If I remember correctly it was a response from Don on Discord but he quickly removed it. I also heard the target was chapter 25 so you see where we are. Like sand shifting through an hour glass as the world turns

 

[Chillie_Willie]

So Sarah is firmly on Team Lester‘s tip and enjoys the dominance and playing the good slut. However she relishes the control she has over Jesse and other weak minded men (Eugene, Ned, Otis, etc.). Sarah is not infallible once these lowlifes get her horny, but if she can control it she and Lester could use her charms once they go up against the heavy hitters, like The Lincoln Group. Everyone needs a patsy or fall guy why not them so Lester and Sarah can make a clean getaway.

 

[Verisimilinude]

I’m sure we have not seen the last of Byron and The Lincoln Group. The Lincoln Group is searching for the hacker which will be traced to Lester somehow I’m sure. Byron wants to save face after embarrassingly being called out by the CEO for incompetence. Now Byron will want revenge by whoever caused his problem. Hopefully this is when Lester and Sarah team up to take down the opposition and their bond bec

Regarding byron, he might try something to reach Sarah through Jesse or Dan, I don't think he knows Lester. Honestly, he doesn't add much to the story so I don't think people will miss him. I personally prefer Jesse over him and I hate Jesse.

I've been giving this some thought and I don't believe that these "random" encounters are so random after all. If I were DS (which I'm not) I would use these scenarios to test the waters with my audience. Using the other guys as an opportunity to see how the audience would interact with them and if it was negative move on but if something got good reviews keep it in the story line.

Example (for me anyway): When Richard came on the scene, I immediately thought this was setting up as a power rivalry btwn Lester and Richard over who would "own" Sarah. I'm not on the discord so I don't know others reactions but I didn't care for it.

But it would be smart to use this strategy as a focus group for your work, prior to committing to it.

 

[Verisimilinude]

Regarding Lester-Sarah team up: if people are correct about Sarah's pregnancy arc starting at chapter 30, there is only 5 more chapters to start weaving the hospital arc with the Dan's snooping plot, sentinel VS Lincoln, Jessie/Byron question,maybe kids, maybe lizzie, Dan Sarah interactions, along with all that beautiful sex scenes before it gets too crowded....which gets prioritized? Which one is saved for later? it's gonna be hell of a task.

Yeah I don't think DS's original outline survived CH 10. I'm sure he had something plotted out the way he saw the story going but then once he realized what the story had become to his fans, he realized he needed to alter it to make all the new ideas work. And on that note - even if she does become pregnant, doesn't mean she can't still have sex. Granted one would think her maternal instincts would kick in after she confirms she will have it and not risk these wild random encounters that could harm the child. Idk depends on how "dark" DS wants to go down that particular rabbit hole.

 

[Sermex67]

Didn’t Sarah have some kind of issues during her pregnancy hence Dan’s Vasectomy?.

 

[Ndbaelor]

The romance is probably the hardest part to write so at least he's aware it's lacking in some respects.

The pillow talk doesn't have to be a talk. If Don having trouble writing dialogue, he could replace them with small intimate gestures. Like her checking her work emails and showing it to him while snuggling him or her reaching for water and sharing with him or helping him to pace his breathing or noticing for moles and asking him to get checked. Show that her interest in him has grown beyond his magic dick.

One thing I realized is while they both exchanged nude pics and him taking videos her (with and without her knowledge) Sarah herself hasn't taken a picture/video of him or them together afaik (one time she did was due to jesse-as-dan's manipulation). What if, after their sex session, both exhausted and Lester pretending to doze off to not get kicked off, while Sarah quietly rolls over and picks her phone and surprise him by taking selfies of them together. Anything other than just falling asleep.