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I enjoyed this chapter. It was nice seeing Sarah take so much control of the situation, and I also liked seeing the loving scenes between her and Dan and how it ended.
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I'm the opposite. It's a dark story, as we have been told, and the best part to me was Lester telling her that Dan could think he was in charge but that wasn't the case as Sarah craved His cock and her body belonged to him. She got hot from it, and did not share what she was told with Dan, at all. She became a conspirator with Lester. I was truly hoping that maybe, at the end Dan fell asleep after masturbating in his bed, while she watched without him knowing. (Although, Lester joining her in the shower, with Dan doing nothing about it would have also worked). The Sarah goes to Lester's room, enters it, closes the door and locks it, the fucks the shit out of Lester all night long. Her going back to Dan, to me, was a disappointment. But, we all have our opinions and none of us are wrong, we just don't think the same way.
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Yeah I'd have probably enjoyed that too. The darkness and slow loss/descent of their relationship gets me going as much as anyone, but it gave me the warm fuzzies to see that the love is still there (for now, anyway).
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I will wait for the final version of ch 21 to reserve my opinion especially in the light of additional sexual encounters Lester and Sarah shown the alpha and final draft in ch.20. It changed the narrative going from thwarting Lester’s progress to Sarah now being a co-conspirator by not revealing all her transgressions to Dan. This is wider jump to a darker road for Sarah. How one goes from just dipping their two as being Lesters’s co-conspirator to full blown slut wife who will now screw anyone at will is alarming progression. I will wait to see if he adds anything about how Dan truly feels at the end as this is beyond his fantasy realm.
Dan was stroking he’s dick I’d have been throwing up and then packing her stuff. Go home Sarah!.
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That is why I want to wait till the final draft because Sarah went from loving kind of reluctant cheating wife to full blown nympho. I know this storyline is teetering the between fiction and reality, but its getting hard to believe a woman would drastically change without past trauma/alcohol/drugs involved. Don never introduced anything from Sarah’s past or interaction with family to suggest this. I’m no expert or spent a night at Holiday Inn Express, but I did experience from both sides of the aisle several real life cheating wife interactions. Which is why the cheating wife stories always interest me but now from a 50 foot level. You would think in real life Dan would pause and think with the right “head” how Sarah went off-script from their set “rules“ AGAIN. Fool me once shame on me …. fool me thrice……
That's true, I come from an abusive childhood and it is hard at times to not dive off the sexual diving board without looking first. If Don wrote a character exploration chapter, in which you found out that she was either abused or enamored with someone in her family (step-father) because of his forceful ways with her, when she was headed toward a bad place in a teen-age mind and that person became something for her, that became her secret crush and from there she never met anyone forceful like that until Lester and she just falls under a spell, she can't help it. I know, probably too late for that, but even a teacher like that could explain a lot, especially if Sarah never acted on it and Dan's fantasy gave her an opening she did not truly understand until it was too late.
Sarah's past the point of no return not sure what's happened in her early life but something from her past has triggered this behaviour.
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It might be a stretch but Don alluded to word “daddy” in several chapters. Could be possible Sarah has daddy issues or her dad did something to her. The only hint we received as readers was her phone interaction and her hesitation of calling her dad “daddy”. But she is past of the point of no return. Question is who will reign her in now. I couldn’t believe Don wrote Lester just shambled away back to his room. All this time he was written as an alpha
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I agree, especially when back at home, when they were in her shower together, he said he always wanted to fuck her in the shower and she said why didn't you? Then basically invited him to come to her, when she was in the shower in Chicago. That is where he should have been, by everything that Don has written of him. Besides, when is Lester EVER satisfied with one fuck? Maybe, he will do a rewrite where Lester opens Dan's bedroom door and yanks Sarah out and to his bedroom, locking the door; or just have Lester join her in the shower and then they spend the night together, leaving Dan to pound his pud.
I don't think her father did anything to her but she craves he's respect and for her to lose it could be cataclysmic for Sarah
One more thing Dans’ temper is coming to the fore more and more of late something tells me he can be a real handful in a fight.
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I wish I saw consistency in Dan’s temper. Chapter 20 Dan was aroused after seeing Lester and Sarah but angry enough to say their safe word, physically grabbed Lester, and shoved him out of his house, forced himself onto Sarah and continued into the morning during their verbal spat. However by the next chapter we are supposed to believe all that hate and anger is water under the bridge. Again Dan is aroused while observing Sarah break their rules by having sex with multiple men. The same man Dan just threw out and now we add a complete stranger. Where was the hate and anger from Dan? No Dan just showed Sarah a weak approving smile and walked somberly back to his room. We read an amped up version Dan viewed in Chapter 20, but in 21 he was just fine with everything he saw enough to yank on his pud when Sarah appeared in the bedroom. Oh okay
I think Dan actually likes to think he is an Alpha, but when he meets men like Lester and Byron, he is at a loss. It is one thing to power someone physically around, but people like Lester and Byron not only out-think him, but then lord it over him. People like Jesse and Peter are who he normally has no problem controlling as they are just users and bottom-feeders. I think Dan feels, in many ways, less than people like Lester and Byron as they are smarter than him and he lacks complete confidence in his own intelligence.
He always has to build himself into it, or talk him self into it or have Sarah boost his self-image when he is looking at jobs and ways to save his family. Sarah has to convince Dan that he is a great head-of-family before she eventually questions him being capable of that position as she has been actually taking on that role for months, if not years, and that is not what she wanted in life. Yes, she wanted to be a partner but also controlled in some ways by the masculinity of her husband and what she misses as she finds him an apartment in Chicago, or finds him ads for jobs in the paper, of acts as the bread-winner in her own job as opposed to Dan.
She runs her household and she always wanted Dan to do that and he won't, but Lester will and does and that turns her the fuck on as that is what she perceives as masculine and sexy and Dan is, just -- quite frankly -- missing that. I have though about it, long and hard and this answers many issues presented to the reader of this most recent chapter. Sarah is tired of asking Dan what to do and he hems and haws and is really milque-toastish and indecisive. Lester doesn't need to be asked, he tells hers what is going to happen and then he does it, causing Sarah to melt into a puddle on the floor for him instead of her husband.
Lester tells Sarah that she craves him and she is wet for him as she thinks about him and his cock throughout the day, at home and work. He asks if she has ever been as affected by Dan as she is by himself and she tells him, never. Not like she is with Lester. It no longer becomes about just the cock size. "Who's the better fuck Sarah, me or Dan?" Without hesitation she cries out, even now, in front of her husband, "you are Lester!" He asks, who owns her pussy and then who owns her as a person and she answers, "You Lester, you own me!" once again, in front of her husband.
There are only two questions left to ask in front of Dan to solidify himself as the head of this household, displacing Dan, entirely. They are, "Who would you rather make love to, not fuck, if given the choice and do you love me?" Maybe when these questions are asked and answered in front of Dan, his heart breaks and he attempts to hurt Lester again, Sarah will stand up and defend Lester, pushing her husband away, before she takes Lester to his bedroom and locks the door to keep Dan out.
Knowing all this now and able to juxtapose this argument, I think Dan is perfectly right in just where he has them.
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Good points and psychoanalysis Psiber. I see you are especially fond of the idea Lester and his princess locking themselves away from the big bad wolf
. I do hope Don explores finding a resolution to the lingering questions we have brought up in discussion sooner than later.An interesting nugget in ch. 21 was brought up by Richard Thornhill: who did he tab for the head of IT at the hospital? Popular answer would be Lester, but I wonder if maybe an outsider would be hired. Through his discovery sees Lester’s involvement in the hack and assumes Sarah was complicit with her Chicago boyfriend.