I have to admit, outside of the ubiquitious TSA, I liked both the original and the extra chapter by others...thanks to all for sharing.
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- Nov 9, 2024
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Just read this continuation and it was a bit of a let down. The TSA scene was unnecessary and unrealistic. It was probably a fantasy that the author had in his head when he wrote the story. The bathroom scene was disappointing as well. Although the blowjob scene was hot, he should have had sex with her and be part of the mile high club. Fortunately the plane got diverted so hopefully they are stuck a few more days together, giving Dan enough time to get Sarah hooked on his massive cock. Overall it was still a good attempt by the author. I am about to read the second continuation.
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Ugh the continuation is even worse. We need our upcoming author Verisimilinude to step in and fix it. Just kidding. Lol
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I kinda agree on your take that the sex scenes are getting redundant. However in my opinion, Lester and Sarah’s scenes makes this series interesting and enjoyable. The slow development of Sarah’s feelings towards Lester is pivotal. Small changes like saying she loves him is what me as a reader look for. I think DS should mix it up on the location though. So far their sex scenes were always the apartment, office, home, parking lot and hotel. Now that Lester is her direct superior he can disguise a trip to Paris as a work conference but in reality he’s taking her to their honeymoon and leave Dan behind helpless. So Lester can openly display themselves in public as a couple. DS can then add new sex scenes like on a yacht, a public restroom or on a plane. So many new possibilities to avoid the redundancy.
The problem is the second one has no relation to the story, the author states that they had writer's block and would write other stories instead, but then named the characters the same as the original story...not great. And the problem is that too many people use the TSA...the second I see the TSA in an adult story, I flee almost immediately.
I think we might get a new location next chapter, based on the line about taking Sarah outside her domain turning Lester on. My hope would be a public date in Middleton as the risk of getting caught by her friends, family PTA acquaintances would be thrilling experience for both of them (and us readers)
Regarding potential honeymoon spot, I was thinking of Las Vegas as its the most common spot for tech related events outside California. Also city of sin works better for their relationship than city of love. Though ideally I would prefer it to be a place where Dan and Sarah honeymooned, as tainting the couple's memory like that adds a lot of salt to the wound. Also ideally I would prefer it to be the time when Lester successfully impregnate Sarah.
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I was thinking of a place that Dan could not afford to take her. Places she has never been to, stay in a luxurious hotel, eat in the most expensive restaurants and shop expensive signature clothing. Lester rents a yacht and they go cruising, showing off her new risqué swimsuits. However the most important thing about this trip is Sarah can act as Lesters wife without thinking about Dan and due to the expensive airfare Dan could not afford to follow them.
Yes. An expensive vacation is a good idea. That's where the real breeding should happen. Lester can control her birth control access easier that way. Also being away from Dan and the other losers is what this story needs. Just Lester and Sarah. Public PDA, new locations for sex and further development of Sarah's love for him
at this point there is more foreshadowing toward "lester pimps sarah out to strangers" than there is foreshadowing toward "lester and sarah have a romantic getaway"... so if they go to vegas, it's going to be so that sarah can pick up some shifts at a brothel 
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Lester has exceeded or altered many things Dan and Sarah use to share. In Ch. 14, Lester recreated their wedding night by making Sarah wear her wedding dress, the ring ceremony consummated their “marriage” while mocking Dan for his lack of sexual performance by getting drunk. Besides the ring size, I’m sure the destination and Lester‘s public marriage proposal to Sarah far exceeded how Dan proposed to her. The next logical step after their engagement would be marriage. Lester can recreate her honeymoon where he exceeds and replaces every experience she shared with Dan.Lester. The romantic, secluded destination will allow Lester to properly impregnate Sarah. All while poor Dan is left an emotional wreck in Chicago
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I don’t mind the sharing since it provides variety while Lester continue to push Sarah’s boundaries. Keeps the series interesting as long as it’s done tastefully and Lester claims her after.
My problem doesn't lie with the sharing, per se, but with Lester constantly claiming that he doesn't share.
good point, that is really funny. and don seems really committed to it, he makes lester bring it up all the time, instead of it being a trait that he quietly moves away from as the story goes on and he changes his mind
it would be nice for lester's character to acknowledge "hey maybe im into this shit too lol" - kind of a funny situation where he understands dan's perspective. maybe this could be a fun way for them to get into a joker/batman "YOU AND ARE I NOT SO DIFFERENT" type climax
or define himself away from Dan, adding some demarcation as Dan is a cuck and Lester is a puppetmaster/pimp. Personally, I would rather see Sarah fall for Lester, because of all that she has gone through, conditioning her to him.
I think that is close to happening - Lester is there for her/acts as protector, Dan is far away, they're not talking....Dan is going to show up to try to out Lester as manipulative and an hacker, Lester is going to screw up his relationship with Sarah by unveiling who he really is with with the videos and manipulation.
At least thats how I imagine the fireworks going off.
Dan needs to be watching when his wife gets knocked up.
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I find it interesting Dan doesn’t want to communicate with Sarah anymore. It’s like they are living two separate lives heading for separation and divorce. I have a hard time believing Dan will confront Lester on any of his lies. What Dan needs now is to find a support group as the addiction has even made himself question calling his own wife for support. Dan went from cocky and arrogant to feeble and weak. Hopefully Ned or Lizzie could give him an intervention so Dan can get the help he needs.
Next logical evolutionary step in Lester and Sarah’s relationship is public PDA in Middleton so her friends, family, co-workers, kid’s parents and even Jessie can see her openly affectionate with someone other than Dan. The ring was a step in the right direction, but he needs to go deeper if Lester wants everyone to believe including Otis that Sarah is his woman. Right now Sarah looks unclaimed and its open season on her mouth and vagina.
Next logical evolutionary step in Lester and Sarah’s relationship is public PDA in Middleton so her friends, family, co-workers, kid’s parents and even Jessie can see her openly affectionate with someone other than Dan. The ring was a step in the right direction, but he needs to go deeper if Lester wants everyone to believe including Otis that Sarah is his woman. Right now Sarah looks unclaimed and its open season on her mouth and vagina.
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