Hey, not sure if this is the best place to post this but VZB just uploaded Chapter 8, Corruption of a Greek Goddess, on his Patreon. Has anyone got that?
Maury: "You...are...NOT, NOT, NOT, NOT, NOT, NOT, NOT, NOT, NOT, NOT, NOT, NOT, NOT, NOT, NOT, NOT and NOT...the father!"This story has lists
Sarah is going to end up like Marisol 17 men tested and and no idea who the dad is.
I think the shadow is Chronos, but I did always think that Richard ends up being Chronos, so...Granted you are correct there are a lot of micro-narrative reasons for Richard, but he was only in the one maybe two chapters and then he became a leverage point (I guess that's what I would call it). But you have to look at the hint DS added to Sarah's dream sequence at the beginning of ch 31 "There was something behind Lester's bonfire, a presence darker than the other shadows around it." It could be Richard, but I think we would mostly agree it's either someone at TLG or Chronos that's being hinted at.
Then again maybe I'm just fatigued by the series at this stage and would like things to start narrowing down to a conclusion.
Yeah I like the concept of "The Bet", it's a good way to include the audience in some of the decisions, but the chapters are a bit on the short side as well due to the format.BTW: to the person who listed The Bet and the Kemono link for it, thank you. I was not familiar with it and where it is not a truly original idea at this point, it is still well written and even though it took me a while to read due to my f'd up schedule, I really enjoyed it...looking forward to the next chapter.
i dont think he gonna get his manhood bcuz no husband in DS'a work has and in most NTRI really hope DS gives him a spine in the coming chapters and he finds Lizzy and get some dirt on Lester and also take back his manhood
Hotwife stories changed massively . Every bvll is also a light yagami now .Bad Tenant Chapter 7
Undercover Blonde Chapter 6
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It has been on simmer hasn't it, even though it's suppose to be a slow burn story.I wonder when Wendy from executive privilege is getting corrupted fully. Waiting for ch 7 to be shared
Rooting for this guy, honestly. Imagine having to clean Lester's bedroom. He deserves a medal.Oh no. Another guy fucking Sarah. I can guarantee there'll be a gangbang by Lester's gamer nerd friends sometime in the future.
Yeah, I started reading Undercover Blonde, I've found I'm reading it like any other novel now (idk I find it interesting) instead of as erotica.Wrapped up reading the last chapter of the bad tenant and let me just say there is slow burns and then there's that there was no action no kind of nothing in that last chapter this is definitely like lukewarm
Someday after all this is over .Yeah, I started reading Undercover Blonde, I've found I'm reading it like any other novel now (idk I find it interesting) instead of as erotica.
Cumbunny ch 8 and The Bet ch 11 are on RabbleLaid's patreon channel.BTW: to the person who listed The Bet and the Kemono link for it, thank you. I was not familiar with it and where it is not a truly original idea at this point, it is still well written and even though it took me a while to read due to my f'd up schedule, I really enjoyed it...looking forward to the next chapter.