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Dan retreated to the Cellar as he heard Lester and Sarah fucking upstairs with tears in his eyes he went to the Boiler and broke the Gas supply thinking to himself this will all be over soon he went to sofa to sit and struck a match.
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My next chapter prediction: Dan and Sarah have a huge fight, around her having sex in their daughter's bed. Sarah says its just sex, the girls weren't home and he starts trying to assert himself. She tells him that if he hadn't pushed her and hadn't been so bad in bed, with nothing but a little worm between his legs, she wouldn't need to fuck Lester. He says, I thought that was just sex talk, as you keep telling me. She tells him every lie is based in fact and maybe Lester has been right about Dan all along. She tells him that he has to watch the girls, she needs some time away from him and his insecure perverted double personality. He asks where she is going and she says to a real man's hotel room, because her husband hasn't been a real man in a very long time. She switches rings and packs a small bag. Telling him that she will call when she is ready to come back, he notices her ring change and asks about it. She says she is wearing the one that matters right now and leaves, showing up at Lester's door, crying and holding her bag. Lester is not completely sure what happened but has an idea as he hugs and comforts and thanks the gods of slime-balls everywhere as he brings Sarah into his room where they will stay for the next week. Each day another for Lester to program Sarah further, another day to bring her in closer to him, another day to break apart her and Dan's marriage.
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Yeah, I was really hoping to see seeds being planted with the mother more but there really hasn’t been much, it needs a proper build up if its going to eventually happen.
That part was definitely a bit much lol, I cannot say I am a fan of all the SPH bits either but I know a lot of people in this genre like that stuff.
Wow psiber that's kinda dark bordering on criminal even....lol....if this happens in that order then it's you and veris that are the ghost writers..
Anyone got the final version of DS's undercover story with the 2000 word addional in it...even if it's pdf..
Is Undercover Blonde as slow-paced as The Bad Tenant? For those who don't know, after 12 chapters, there still hasn't been a single sex scene between the two main characters in The Bad Tenant.
The way Dan was portrayed in this chapter makes me think he is unstable. While I do think that he is gonna remove himself from the world, being unstable means he can be unpredictable. The world has been cruel to him, and when people get cornered like this (specially men) they usually deicide to take out their demons with them. In this case, his demons is represented by Lester. So, a dark turn is approaching which is fair given it IS a dark cuck story.
we just have to wait a couple of chapters while he takes his usual step or two back.
I tend to agree with Verisimilinude, that it was just a bed. I come from being an abused child in many ways and with a bunch of therapy managed to get my head on pretty straight about that stuff. Kind of like a woman by the name of Maxwell now residing in a minimum security prison and getting work release. Pedophiles and their suppliers should go to maximum security prison and then the general population of said prison should be told what they are by an intrusive guard. Just my opinion, but I realize that I am incredibly inflexible when it comes to kids and abuse, probably due to my childhood experiences. However, a child was there, then a problem exists, so call the police and a prison guard you may or may not be friends with.
No one should ever apologize for seeing justice served in its maximum form against ANY perpetrators who especially victimizes the most vulnerable of our population, mainly children. No quarter, no flexibility, period.
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I would add and justice served for the vilest of crimes. To be extremely clear on this topic: It would be a violation of a lot of Site TOS's as well as IRL laws, if minors were present. However my point was that without said characters present, it was just a room. A hammer isn't evil, but people can use a hammer to do evil things.
Edit: Furthermore if it had anything even remotely like that as content - I'm out and would not continue the story. It's why people got outraged when DS floated the idea of Lester "removing" the daughters from the picture. It was unnecessary and a far darker place than most of us would stand for. I still believe this was a mistake on his part; it's fine to provide knowledge that Dan and Sarah have offspring, but they don't need to be brought up in the story in any way other than thru oblique references; picking them up or who could watch them, etc.
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Finally it happened....not reading after that's all I wanted to see happen...the humiliation that's gonna come next isn't my cup of tea..
As a member of law enforcement I stand firmly with you and everyone else against this sort of thing/crimes committed by vile unsavory characters...I'm happy that you have turned into an upstanding member of the world...not everyone is that strong or that fortunate...
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Guys, this story (The Black Belt Affair Ch. 20, 21, 22, and 23) was perfect. I think Ashley is going to fall into Carlos's clutches, and Jacob is going to move on. I hope Ashley gets pregnant by Carlos and says goodbye. May Jacob find someone else and not stay in this cuckold situation. If he has a fetish, on the contrary, he could go train in Thai boxing, a martial art that is good for him since he is thin and fast. Shin kicks hurt, flying knee strikes when taking someone to the ground, elbow strikes. These are very effective techniques. As for pedophilia, for me, it's like a morgue in the slums (tin can): the monster goes into a tin can with oil and gasoline, and then there's no need to talk... Lester won Sarah over when she found out that Lester was going to earn $250,000 at work, the security she needs, and she could also make Lester take care of himself a little.
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I've just read 2 major different stories from 2 different writers and both stories had the same exact sex scenes
I m disappointed...So many different ways this should have played out..Dan in many chapters showed backbone, made Lester bend to his will just to curl up like a baby the next. Chapter..after reading a posted copy of 34 I'm glad I'm not o patreon . Then again maybe I should write some porn..may e a WHAT IF..Chapters 30 to 34..rewrite
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I also expect some changes in Dan's attitude. Now financially he is in the hands of Lester and Sarah. The marriage is already over. If Lester takes care of his appearance a little and improves his hygiene, Sarah will be 100% his. The story has also changed focus a little (Sarah's mother has already entered the picture). As I said, Dan had to set up the story arcs: beginning, middle, and end.
I hope D.S. uses the information Dan told him about his fears (the cage and dressing up as a woman). Sarah talks to Lester about Dan's fear that they will force the situation, Dan jumps out and breaks the spell. I know D.S. doesn't like these things, so it would be ideal for Dan to wake up to reality. He begins to see that Sarah is now his enemy, wanting Dan to see a psychologist, get therapy to take care of himself, and find a new woman to be with him. Lester pays a little, but stays with Sarah and her mother.
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What's Left Unsaid - Chapter 8
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“Have you tried an extender? Or perhaps a penis sleeve?”
I suppressed the urge to grab Dr. Vance by his white coat collar and throw him across the room. Mainly because that wouldn’t be good for my back. Not because the suggestion of using some sort of false penis to please my wife was utterly humiliating.
It wasn’t the first time this idea had come up. Daisy had even suggested it at one point, though that had been early on after I’d fully recovered from my injury and surgeries. Just as a temporary thing. That was before we realized the depth of my situation.
15 de setembro
“Have you tried an extender? Or perhaps a penis sleeve?”
I suppressed the urge to grab Dr. Vance by his white coat collar and throw him across the room. Mainly because that wouldn’t be good for my back. Not because the suggestion of using some sort of false penis to please my wife was utterly humiliating.
It wasn’t the first time this idea had come up. Daisy had even suggested it at one point, though that had been early on after I’d fully recovered from my injury and surgeries. Just as a temporary thing. That was before we realized the depth of my situation.