Toxic Attraction DonSilver #Cuckold 8muses forum

[john_doe6711]

Sarah has already completely changed Dan! In her dreams, she leaves Dan and her family and goes to Lester. Lester would never accept sharing Sarah with Dan. The best thing is for Dan to see Lester give pleasure to Sarah and Sarah in depravity. - End of the series: Lester conquers Sarah and Trisha has Dan for herself (Dan thrives away from Sarah). Sarah becomes pregnant and divorced from Dan (Lester now continues with the search to impregnate Renee), with the last arc with Dan x Lester when Lester talks about having a harem. Having a passage of years. Then Lester can die, a very exciting confrontation, all the depravities come to light.Lester thinks I have Renee, Sarah, now it's just a matter of the girls when they get older. They'll go to college, I'll give them the initiation they need... When they were kids they didn't like me, when they become women they'll change their minds.

Wow the end there is kinda dark...

 

[Verisimilinude]

I think the stories he's been writing on the side are MAYBE something to fall back on if the TA bombs at the end and his paying public are disgruntled about it...idk he's writing too many side stories and not really concentrating on his cash cow( if I may)right now....all of his energy should be put into the story to finish it off with a bang..

But you just gave the reason he wouldn't hasten it's ending. Why would he finish TA if it's his only cow that's making milk? (not saying it is or isn't, I don't have that data).

 

[swewx]

But you just gave the reason he wouldn't hasten it's ending. Why would he finish TA if it's his only cow that's making milk? (not saying it is or isn't, I don't have that data).

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If I had that cow on my stable I wouldn't kill it either. lol

 

[DarkStutzel]

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[King_Gonta]

The island mom and bully concept was fine

But Silver was just simple plain "unimaginative " with that. One of the worst things a writer can do is be "unimaginative"

His villains are all supervillains ( the teenager and his friend simply siphons the supplies and no one even knows.

Basically Dan is so focused on being dark and edgy he is forgetting the story is supposed to be erotic . People get off on genuine sexual situations not just sadism

He should not end TA bcuz I don't think his any other story will make such an impact

 

[King_Gonta]

But you just gave the reason he wouldn't hasten it's ending. Why would he finish TA if it's his only cow that's making milk? (not saying it is or isn't, I don't have that data).

Hey friend

I want to hear about your thoughts on the island story

What would you have done with the plot??

 

[sdkain]

Hey friend

I want to hear about your thoughts on the island story

What would you have done with the plot??

Since Don S loves the bully romance/manipulation angle, make the bully into the hero. He gains support of the survivors, then uses his hero status to manipulate the mom, while continue bullying the son behind the mom's back. As the son continues complaining to the mom, have the mom slowly start taking the bully's side over her own kid, putting the bully's needs over her own son's.

 

[ABinWP]

Just read the island story. It's extremely boring. Don't know why he's starting new series when Neighbor Encounters us still unfinished.

A very underwhelming start to a story. Seemed like the author wrote it during a commercial break or something. Very rushed, no depth, just....meh.

This author, in general, has the capability to write a very good sex scene. Even when TA went off the rails, the sex scene writing was often still of a decent quality. This island thing? Very mediocre in this respect, at best.

 

[john_doe6711]

Hey guys have any of you read chapter 13 of the bad tenant yet?

 

[ABinWP]

And he's been indecisive from the start. Idk maybe this is normal in a sharing lifestyle; I have to think there would be hesitation and indecision about sharing your wife with another man for the first time.

In my opinion and experience, you would find a full spectrum of feelings/responses here. Healthy and unhealthy, rational and unrational, random and planned, enjoyable and not so much.

I personally never felt any hesitation or indecision at all (I personally don't think it's fair to engage with others if those feelings or reactions are possible/probable - hard to predict sometimes though, I suppose). Nervousness and excitement? Definitely.

A plan and continuous communication is usually necessary for this sort of thing to go well. And a commitment to an enjoyable shared experience. Dan and Sarah failed each other miserably in both ways in this story.

 

[Psiber@mauvais]

Since Don S loves the bully romance/manipulation angle, make the bully into the hero. He gains support of the survivors, then uses his hero status to manipulate the mom, while continue bullying the son behind the mom's back. As the son continues complaining to the mom, have the mom slowly start taking the bully's side over her own kid, putting the bully's needs over her own son's.

One of the major problems, though, is that the kid isn't bullying the son. It stopped years ago. Now the son looks down on the bully as a failure, which should be the bully's nightmare. Where's the betrayal with regards of the Mother to the son, with no bullying it seemingly can't exist, not truly; and to start now seems ridiculously trite.

 

[sdkain]

One of the major problems, though, is that the kid isn't bullying the son. It stopped years ago. Now the son looks down on the bully as a failure, which should be the bully's nightmare. Where's the betrayal with regards of the Mother to the son, with no bullying it seemingly can't exist, not truly; and to start now seems ridiculously trite.

Absolutely! I was responding to the question how the plot might be approached differently

 

[Big K2]

You know what I am thinking of a "trad" ending here

Dan and Lester have to unite to protect Sarah from someone ( say that stalker whose name I can't recall)

Lester gets a heart attack and a change of heart (figuratively) and decides he loves Sarah . Like "love

That becomes his downfall and sentinel starts catching up to him and now Dan has to protect him and participate in his schemes

Lester with his new morality corrects the couples life while he is dying meanwhile Sarah gives birth to his baby which is about sealing the trio forever

Lester soon dies and Dan and Sarah bury him and all saying he was their "good friend " .

Sarah still pines for him but she has a family and Dan to tend to and realizes her mistakes . Dan meanwhile is finally cured of her cuckolding kink and searches through Lesters stuff to finally discover all his tapes and shit.

He destroys them but keeps some for his own pleasure. He never tells Sarah out of his final respect for the monster

This is the only "trad" ending I can think of where all 3 get their own ways and move on

If Don was writing this story right now I could see your outline. But I strongly believe someone else Is writing
and the story of Dan and Sarah for me is over.

 

[Skarner12]

Yea the story is over, the corruption is complete but I'm eager to see the debauchery that follows. Hope Don publishes it soon (also hope for no more kid´s related stuff, that's very off putting)

 

[Verisimilinude]

Hey friend

I want to hear about your thoughts on the island story

What would you have done with the plot??

This was my first impression of the Island Story:
https://f95zone.to/threads/toxic-attraction-donsilver-cuckold-8muses-forum.186283/post-18356987

I don't know if I'm a good person to ask what I would do with the plot because I'd chuck the bully theme altogether. It's too hard for me to switch mental gears from tragedy/pain to pleasure. In short it felt like reading the script for the first episode of 'LOST,' but where some of the edgier characters unleashed their darker impulses. I'm sure a lot of people wouldn't have liked it but the first chapter wouldn't have had any sex in it, beyond maybe a mental fantasy. I'd have set the scene for what would occur later in the series (which he did), but the Mom going all horndog, was too fast and too much.

 

[DarkStutzel]

If Don was writing this story right now I could see your outline. But I strongly believe someone else Is writing
and the story of Dan and Sarah for me is over.

Sarah has already completely changed Dan! In her dreams, she leaves Dan and her family and goes to Lester. Lester would never accept sharing Sarah with Dan. The best thing is for Dan to see Lester give pleasure to Sarah and Sarah in depravity. - End of the series: Lester conquers Sarah and Trisha has Dan for herself (Dan thrives away from Sarah). Sarah becomes pregnant and divorced from Dan (Lester now continues with the search to impregnate Renee), with the last arc with Dan x Lester when Lester talks about having a harem. Having a passage of years. Then Lester can die, a very exciting confrontation, all the depravities come to light.Lester thinks I have Renee, Sarah, now it's just a matter of the girls when they get older. They'll go to college, I'll give them the initiation they need... When they were kids they didn't like me, when they become women they'll change their minds.

 

[King_Gonta]

Yea the story is over, the corruption is complete but I'm eager to see the debauchery that follows. Hope Don publishes it soon (also hope for no more kid´s related stuff, that's very off putting)

I am still not sure about story being over because if am I right.

He gonna step back . He gonna step back hard.

We will suddenly see Sarah becoming lovey dovey to Dan and the progress being undone too

So I won't really say the arc is complete till Sarah gets pregnant

You all are just getting too hyped up according to me.

 

[DarkStutzel]

I am still not sure about story being over because if am I right.

He gonna step back . He gonna step back hard.

We will suddenly see Sarah becoming lovey dovey to Dan and the progress being undone too

So I won't really say the arc is complete till Sarah gets pregnant

You all are just getting too hyped up according to me.

We're at the point where Sarah will leave her husband for Lester and increase the humiliation (which will be words of contempt, to destroy Dan). The chair is part of a cuckold fetish (things Dan is afraid of and has already told Sarah, and she said she would protect him from them). It would be one of the betrayals. I hope Trisha gets involved, talks about work. For those who are interested in Dan, she rarely contacts him (she can get smaller jobs), until she uses these pretexts to call Dan.
I hope to see Sarah and Lester making love, Dan talking nonsense, and Sarah constantly asking Lester to get her pregnant.
Season 1 ends. (Dan gets divorced, Sarah gets pregnant by Lester, Dan steals Lester and Trisha's hard drives, and he begins his revenge.)

Season 2: Lester is the father of a daughter. Lester begins working on Renee, without Sarah knowing. Renee comes to help care for her granddaughter, and Renee becomes pregnant with Lester's child (Dan manages to search all the hard drives and select the evidence that puts Lester in jail).

Season 3 - The moment of truth. Lester will want to corrupt Dan and Sarah's daughters when he gets out of prison. There's the final battle, with all of Lester's schemes revealed. Dan and Lester, and Sarah, have their clashes...

 

[Psiber@mauvais]

We're at the point where Sarah will leave her husband for Lester and increase the humiliation (which will be words of contempt, to destroy Dan). The chair is part of a cuckold fetish (things Dan is afraid of and has already told Sarah, and she said she would protect him from them). It would be one of the betrayals. I hope Trisha gets involved, talks about work. For those who are interested in Dan, she rarely contacts him (she can get smaller jobs), until she uses these pretexts to call Dan.
I hope to see Sarah and Lester making love, Dan talking nonsense, and Sarah constantly asking Lester to get her pregnant.
Season 1 ends. (Dan gets divorced, Sarah gets pregnant by Lester, Dan steals Lester and Trisha's hard drives, and he begins his revenge.)

Season 2: Lester is the father of a daughter. Lester begins working on Renee, without Sarah knowing. Renee comes to help care for her granddaughter, and Renee becomes pregnant with Lester's child (Dan manages to search all the hard drives and select the evidence that puts Lester in jail).

Season 3 - The moment of truth. Lester will want to corrupt Dan and Sarah's daughters when he gets out of prison. There's the final battle, with all of Lester's schemes revealed. Dan and Lester, and Sarah, have their clashes...

I am not sure how much of that will or won't happen, but, I have a thing when Sarah defends Lester when talking/arguing with Dan about Lester. She truly wants Dan to leave Lester alone and that might be the straw on that broken camel's back, Sarah yelling at Dan to back the fuck off and leave Lester alone. Maybe Dan involuntarily cries and Sarah sees it and uses it to emasculate her husband in front of Lester.

 

[shulz777]

Why are so many ppl here want the family and marriage being destroyed ???? Is that where you get hard and can get your jolies off ????