Ren'Py - Completed - TP: The Class Next Door [v0.12.1] [9thCrux]

I did not get the idea that should drive the story. Same procedure everyday :
Daughter says wakiee wakiee in the morning then either daughter or dad I'll drive today. At school random girls come with ideas how to improve their presentations . In the end it does not matter what happens at school as school events are even more boring than events that happen at home...
There is no sex happening all nudes depictedv are the MC dreaming of banging them one by one so you get to see all girls nude step by step but as this is not really happening it i astonshly also only boring....

I would say the story is good and happy with lot of choices with girls but the game not just throw the MC to all of them. Love story with sexy times I would say. Good updates too every month which means this game in serious hand.

Entitled incel power fantasy simulator.

I don't mind the slow burn but it needs a good and well written story and some actual drama to not become boring, but we don't get that here.
All the girls instantly fall in love with the MC and the game is a long slog to get anywhere with anyone. None of the girls show any bad emotions toward each other and generally accepts everything between the MC and the other girls. No jealousy, no competition, no consequences.
Even the teachers and parents doesn't seem to mind MC being with the students, more than some cautionary words.

It has very nice renders and models witch is leagues above the writing performance. Maybe the creator should let someone else to do the story and concentrate on the art. Nevertheless the art is outstanding.

So boring , unengaging and badly written story give it one star and outstanding art gives it a bonus star.

If you are looking for some real life drama you won't find it here. If you want a power fantasy without any hardship, setbacks or resistances this may be your thing.

It's 2021. The renders are really good but there is so many many problems. The whole dreams are annoying me. I feel like my choices don't really lead any where. There are so many questionable events going on. For example the whole bunny thing. I become flabbergasted at what I just witness. It's really wired especially with the mc's daughter dress up as one. No father would enjoy that. heck that's plain awkward. This needs too be redone it .

Well, it has almost all the genres that I like. U have got some cute innocent virgin girls at your discharge. It's Slow burn for sure, but I felt at ease while playing.Story is not that deep though. But the character render makes it up for me......

The burn of this story is so slow you can feel it changing the space time continuum. The renders seem pretty good, especially the daughter. The weirdest thing for me was when the daughter dressed up in a bunny costume and kissed the father. But i take what i get. This day to day thing is also kinda pissing me off. Everything seems to repeat itself in som kinda way not like in sandbox games. But as if you were in a time loop of the same day but in different worlds so that overall the same happens but with small changes. There seems to be no humor whatsoever, pretty weird or its so unfunny i instantly forgot it.
Edit: These sex dreams the MC has are pissing me off JESUS. Like a fcking Manga/Anime virgin.
Edit2: The "Self" is really immersion breaking.
Edit3: I think the MC is a virgin.
Edit4: After the bunny cult part i can say that the developer has some serious brain damage.
Edit5: the more i play the more i hate the MC. he seems to be pretty egocentric when it comes to sex stuff. he gets himself sucked off and immediately runs off. would like to see some equality or at least a pussy and not always a fcking dick.
Edit6: I'm driving, I'm driving, I'm driving, I'm driving, I'm driving, I'm driving, I'm driving, I'm driving, I'm driving, I'm driving, I'm driving, I'm driving.
Classes pass without significant incident, Classes pass without significant incident, Classes pass without significant incident, Classes pass without significant incident, Classes pass without significant incident, Classes pass without significant incident, Classes pass without significant incident. When does it stop.
Edit7: As of the 1st of June there is no sex scene besides the dream sequences but they dont count bc thats cheap. for a game 2 years in developement pretty meh.

The renders are very good, and the girls look great. The english is fine, but feels like it was translated, with overly simple phrasing, rather than spoken by a natural english speaker. The dialog is too empty, meaning it is mostly lacking dramatic content. Things stay pretty safe and pleasant 90% of the time, with occasional but very brief dips into emotional character building. This makes the story pacing fairly dull. I don't mind a "slow burn", but this story is taking slow quite a bit too far - even if I am not necessarily here for erotic content.

No game is perfect, but 2 and a half stars at the time of this review really doesn't do this game justice.

It's a slow burn with tons of char development, which in turn means most of the characters are great both by being fairly well written and unique. Also, at least as far as I can tell there's no stock daz models which is a huge plus for me.

With the excepcion of the dreams the scenes feel very rewarding and the best is still to come.

I could spend a lot of time writing about it, but I'd rather go play. Just wanted to try and raise it's rating by giving stars, but at least it for sure deserves at least 4.

It wouldn't matter if everything else was absolutely golden, the whole calling people by their surname like we're all primary school kids is so jarring it ruins everything else.

The kids all have names but the adults are all calling each other MR Surname or MRS Surname and it makes every single conversation so wooden and stiff.

It's painful to read.

If it wasn't for that it would be a tolerable game.

Add on to that the complete 180 about the wife. One minute she was the worst thing ever then she phones him up and it turns out she'd done nothing wrong, she just thinks differently to everyone else. He knew how she was before he married her yet still went through with it.

Gets ill, collapses, blames everything on his ex wife then 3 updates later she's asking why he left, she tried as hard as she could and nothing said makes sense anymore....

Make your mind up, dev. You start off making her sound liek the bitch from hell then end up making her the most sympathetic character in the game and everyone else look like twats for trying to turn her into someone she wasn't.

That and the surname thing make this so hard to get into. It's such a weird game.

This game has great looking girls and as you can see on afew reviews here sometimes that's enough for those just looking for a brainless experience.
But if you make a game that's supposedly not just a fapgame but a "slowburn" then some actual decent story, character development and show of evolving relationships should be there, right?
But it's really not and thus the slowburn is turned into a torture session of boredom and bland conversations.

I feel lile this game could easily be 4+ stars potentially if the developer got anyone decent to rewrite the dialogue to feel engaging and meaningful raghter then just a big empty void and to portray characters to have have some realistic emotions.
Adding to the story beyond just "everyone want's your dick, and your ex is a bitch" would also possibly improve it.
Shame to see so many pretty females be wasted on this game.

I really hope the developer wants to improve upon the game or he should join the other's who are incapable of telling a story with realistic characters, emotions and dialogue and just be upfront and make it official that it's a "try to fuck everything that moves" type story
just that unlike most other such games where you can do it at the speed of light, here it's done in slowmotion.
Some people do enjoy those games for a quick fap or whatever, but the drawn-out phasing makes it fail to please those as much as the story does for the ones who like a slowburner (such as myself).

I wish the developer the best of luck and hope that they either get a storyteller or stop fronting like one

Great game MC's daughter is gorgeous and charming and she loves her dad more than anything i think there will be a twist when MC's wife (soon to be divorced) will be returning and all the university girls are cute too character development is great , writing is great , characters are charming and cute just waiting for other updates
Well done Dev

I must say that this game has good base concept.
The problem with it is that without mods its hard to see anything worth watching and when we do get some action its dissapointingly short one at that. Plot isn't solid in the least because our protag has it too easy and too long.. a long is the text and useless mundane stuff that happens along the way. It would be nice change of pace if characters wouldn't appear two dimensional. With depth to them.. for now its shallow like roadside puddle after light rain.

What I would change to make it better:
- kinky action must be more erotic. More stuff to see. More drama, excitement or stress. By which I mean that girls would jump his dik but let it be a challenge. Like teasing him while others are around. Blowjob when girls are around the corner. Parents calling their girls phones when they are in the middle of action and they need to talk while doing the deed. To make the action more rewarding and less dissapointing add animation. Add more angles. Lenght to it. More kinky play with words. For a stretch of a plot this long only to get so little is unwelcome in kinky world of ero games. If you want to make an ero game. Do it in a way that rewards players for playing this long and not make them dissapointed instead. This is only the kinky aspect.
- Choices.. I mean. Its like choosing between ansers in a test. All of them sound similar or the same when we read them but the text that follows does not match well with what we chose and points awarded for said choice is at least hard to see/point out. If we saw notification.. then we could notice it. At least do so much as to put it there. Next thing to change is reaction of characters to our answers. Its damn hard to tell if said answer pleases them or not.

Those are the two main issues I have with this game to fix it. Next thing to add is that to not play it without cheat mod couse its a chore to seach for new branches or perfect playtrough.

Edit:
Side Note, daughter is damn beautiful and cute. There are several games with almost the same model but kinky action with her was awesome but damn too short. I demand to add lenght to it and more kink to the kinky events. Add more sublime hints about what happened between them or how it affect their relationship afterwards. Its damn hard to notice how kinky situations affect future events and their relationship. I mean.. it looked as if there was nothing kinky going on between them when they continued their daily routine after that as if nothing happened between them and it was completly normal day for them.. I mean.. Normal people would at least think about what happened or about consequences of their actions. Not in this game it seems.

I'm in love with this game. the girls are extremely cute and sexy at the same time. I like their design. Renders are good and the story is ok. I'm cool with the updates without much sex, but I'm looking forward to being able to be with all the girls haha

This VN is definitely not for everyone. Its like reading a really long book, with lots of stops & turns. If you're looking for a quick fap then seek elsewhere.

That being said, personally I love how slow it is. By chapter 17 you can see your harem slowing forming, every time you all get together the sexual tension rises. The renders for the girls are also amazing. The daughter and Daria are top tier.

A gripe I do have is that you just cant seem to have any alone time with just 1 girl. The girls always have to invite one another or the mc has to start inviting peoples parents. Like, why??? We need way more alone time with the daughter, and Daria, we have gotten cocked blocked sooooooo many times by the other girls with Daria its insane.

Once things really start going down this VN will have some of the best sex scenes, keep yourself posted.

Quite simply one of the worst VN's I have played. The story doesn't make sense, the English within it is readable but still makes little sense in parts.

The dev has said it is not just a porn game and that lewd scenes would take a backseat to the story. That would be admirable if it actually had an interesting or in depth story, but it is lacking in that sense.

The scenes with the girls are all very short and do not help you build knowledge or a relationship with the girls. The dialogue needs to be expanded upon far more. For a game that is supposed to be about romance and falling for a girl and not just about sex it is falling short in both aspects.

The sex which mostly comes in the form of dreams is far too short and random. The story meanwhile suffers due to the problems I already stated. You do not spend enough time with any of the characters to develop much of a relationship with them.

An example of both main issues rolled into one would be when you are on the couch with your daughter. She tells you she wants to get closer or words to that effect. She tells you to rub your hands over her hips. Which you do... then pretty much instantly she is like OK that is enough, we can do more in 2 days time and proceeds to disappear. No dialogue to find out how she is feeling, where you stand with her in terms of your relationship, what are her dreams and hopes in regard to the relationship etc...

Just a short scene devoid of any sexual or emotional connection which leaves you feeling frustrated that nothing is happening in any regard.

The only positive about this game is the renders which are all very well done. The girls look fantastic and overall visually it is appealing. Sadly the storyline and sexual content leave a lot to be desired.

I love the story and the characters! It's really intriguing on how things will turn out with Tiffany and the MC, after they become comfortable to each other and Tiffany having sleepovers and her friends hanging out with MC.

Slow burn? Nah... Asnine and boring text? Yes. I mean, slow burn implies that there is at least some form of burn... There is no burn here. I mean... The MC is a teacher for like 2 days and student's parents are like "Hey, go ahead and fuck our daughter even though student/teacher relationships are extremely inappropriate, just don't break her heart." And then, no one gets fucked.
Honestly, you can set up a mouse click macro program to run this game, walk away for an hour and not have missed anything significant.

Some of the best looking girls in any game, good story, impeccable renders, and a well done slow burn. That last point might turn some people off, but for those who are fans of it, this is definitely one to check out.

The text is boring and endless. The scenes are short, few and far apart. The models are bland and uninspired and the costumes are unattractive. If you value your time, go play something else. This game bored me so hard that I took the time to write this review and even try to get over 200 characters.

One of best games on this site. Do not care about those nagative reviews, it definitely deserves much more than that. Story, beautiful characters and a decent male protagonist. 5/5 for me! Give it a try guys!