Yeah i understand the story like you mention. But when its about playing game, first you need to know what the genre first, this game is about JRPG ( role play game). That means the MC must have development element. This game on the first chapter show MC kurt has role whereas he got inherited hero blood, want to defeate demon, mini boss, boss villain to make peace of the world, gain recognition or gain strength, power, ability or whatsoever . So that means even the MC's girl got succumb by the 3 bad guy (via EV, SREV, Etc). The role and idea why this MC created must also need progress accordingly since is a JRPG. Even the MC girl cheated him, still in the end MC need accomplished his role to be remarkable heros or knight on this game. Now this game i think is in a half of progress, one of the MC girl got succumb. The Kurt MC still lame no progression at all to become hero or knight. He lack power, strength,magic even some of event mini boss got defeated by the villain not him. He do not know who is the villain, got no skill to upgrade. All he do was doing part time job and peeping his own girl got succumb stupidly. If the game do not want MC to progress, just make it as a visual novel game or whatsover that do no require fighting since this game is about sex scene succumb plot.
Its NTR, so what can you really expect. As a JRPG its a bit of a fumble to not give the player more options depending on what they do. I despise NTR, but I can watch it and play it if other areas make up for it (Story, art, gameplay) and this dude has amazing art, but not much of everything else.
His beast rangers doujin is hot as shit, and something even I, an NTR hater, can enjoy. But the problems are really exacerbated with this project. Because the gameplay aspect is completely forgotten along the road, not leaving the player with much of anything to do outside of going where they're told, not being allowed to move as they wish due to invisible walls, and being forced from event to event without any sort of, well, playing of the game. Which does make me question why a VN wouldn't have been a better choice for this.
The problem would really just be solved if he allowed the player to make their own choices. Like putting time limits on certain quests, where not completing them leads to something bad happening to innocent people. But if you go on the quest, you further the corruption of the girls due to one of them maybe having to stay behind in the castle town to be corrupted by the nobles.
Or maybe finding out clues about what's going on by talking to information brokers or country bumpkins. Clues around the house. Actually being able to decide if you
want to stay in the house with the creepy kid. Whether you want your first love to tutor the weird kid or not.
There has got to be some sort of offset, make the player agonize whether they wanna protect the girls or the common folk. Whether they wanna risk one of the girls being corrupted in exchange for being given some sort of reward to help the player on their quest. Hell, don't make it mega giga obvious which people are the antagonists so the player doesn't know who to trust the girls with.
The people dismissing your opinion obviously don't have much love for the game itself and just want to jerk it to the art (Cavemen in my opinion. Fuck is the point of a hentai game if it's just forcing you to walk from A to B to get scenes. Without any exploration or story or actual
gameplay), which is a bit sad, because the dudes art is really fucking good. And the dude has good tags he works with. But seeing artists not go 100% with their creativity in favor of mass produced easily made shit is just downright depressing.
I do have to give him one thing when it comes to the story. And thats making it so that the girls aren't NTR'd for some stupid shit like "Sexual prowess" or "Big penis", and instead making it due to mind control/pheromones/incense. At least makes me able to sympathize with the heroines instead of them just being disgusting sluts like in 90% of NTR hentai.
But, hey, the game is still being worked on, so maybe the story and everything i've criticized is going to be fixed in the finished product. If anybody knows anything I don't about the gameplay then feel free to correct me.