Hi
anna94 nice start to the game.
A few comments for your feed back to do with as you wish
Love the fact that all other guys seem to be blocked out by the MC. Hopefully stays that way.
One pretty noticeable bug that happened was when the MC was over at Vivy's protecting her from the gangster and there was the "cut scene" back to your house with Kiesy and Lanny talking... the scene played twice before going back to the MC and Viv.
I don't know if it was a bug or not, but when you have the option to trust Lacy or not before going back her place for the first time, both options seem to have the same effect on Kiesy's stats and don't change them from before. I don't know if it's intended to change her's or not, but if not then why show it? I did notice Lacy's stats change if you trust her.
The grammar needs a little work, as well as the capitilisation and punctuation but are by far nowhere near the worst around.
My biggest criticism of the game is the faces of the models, they all look like clones of the same girl with different hair. She's not bad looking, just a little sad that it's the same girl for every girl. Even the body types and tits are too similar.
I do see the potential in this one and know you'll get better with the renders as time goes, really looking forward to seeing where this is in a year or so. All the best with it.
Oh and one last note on the sandbox
Please, please, please don't make it so two or more things can only trigger at a specific time on specific day so you have to play through a whole week of nothing to select the second option.
An example of this is something like research into affection where there are 4 options that trigger on a weekend at the same time and there are other whole day events that trigger at the same times. You'd need to play through at least 3 weeks of game play to get them all, but by the end of the first week or maybe week and half, you've done enough to trigger the next levels with the girls and can't get all the events if you move on.