Others Abandoned Treat Me Like The Slut I Am [v0.2dBeta2] [Hentai&Hentai] [UPDATED+Fixed]

[ecyas]

And if you did explain that at the start and not going immediately with nude pics, there wouldn't be such a problem.
Something like

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Game got removed within 1hour without a prior notice or any warning and instant labelled ********** before we could see even the comments.
When you aren't given any chances to do so, it is hard to do it.

It was our very first post and game making so of course mistakes and in-experiences do happen.
We had no chances to learn or fix the mis-understanding.

 

[Bloo]

review:

art 8/10: the art looks "simple" but it really well made and if you look closer it remind me a little bit of dreaming of dana. the posing is good but sometimes it looks a little "stiff" like clothes dummy. BBW main character is a bold move that i hope it will pay off. As a little note, It would be a lot better with animations

Story 7/10: The story is interesting enough to make me read the whole thing. kinda feels like a "big sausage pizza movie" but it's porn and it doesn't have to make sense, must be entertaining and fappable and it does it. The story is all there tho: a wife as weird dreams about fixing the city to some high moral ground, but she has a twisted mind ,morals and conduct and, for our joy, everything will turn into a fuck fest thanks to a "magical girl".
Some writing errors here and there that makes you cringe (a apple, an bike, an dick) but i'm not a native speaking so they don't bother me as much.

overall 8/10: i have to admit that this Visual Novel ( it's not a game & you can't choose nothing for now, just click to advance and save) it's really up my alley (cheating, "corruption", "ntr", voyeur, blackmail) so maybe I've exaggerated with the vote but who cares? I Love it and had a nice fap. I will definitely follow it.


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P.s. how she treated her husband really made me laugh.. i'm a bad person?

Please use the review system, top right corner (stars) and write your review there.

 

[Bambino]

She doesnt go from 0 to 100 , she is on 100 to beginn with , she is just an fake " saint " who is jeaulouse of others doing what she cant due beeing ugly and fat , so thats why she got to resort to get others to rape her , and keeping the airs of beeing an seriouse woman , at least according to her own way of seeing things , which most in game and here wont agree mostlikely , the bodys in the gym , i see worse in real life gyms , way worse .you dont like the spell thats fine , cant please everyone , and i m not trying to pelase everyone with this kind of game with fat and ugly main char , its meant for the few who do like it , i m in no way good on what i do , i m trying to learn by doing ,and as long as i jsut find half a dozen people who like my game i ll keep on doing it

It is just that I have the feeling that, with only a little more work and "love", this game would be really singular and interesting, not just another game.

 

[ecyas]

It is just that I have the feeling that, with only a little more work and "love", this game would be really singular and interesting, not just another game.

well thanks i will try , i m not much of an writer thats the other hentai , i will try to improve my work on grafics and story as i m pretty much new to both , and actually hope to improve by working on these games

 

[renice]

1. Clearly you have not read the rules. 2. This is not the correct place for this. 3. If you did post this in the correct place, you'd find that there has already been extensive discussions about the topic.

Understood.
For response: 1, I guess not - I'll do that. 2, yeah, I suspected as much as I posted, sorry. 3, I may look for that discussion, I'm sure anything I could say would have already been said there.

 

[Aprilsun]

This is kinda interesting.
Nice to see a game of this type without the tiresome corruption and rather use the release slut within as the driving factor. Well done, most dont have enough imagination to do a story this way. Beside it will be awesome to see her sluttiness go up as her hotness improves.

 

[xort]

well thanks i will try , i m not much of an writer thats the other hentai , i will try to improve my work on grafics and story as i m pretty much new to both , and actually hope to improve by working on these games

I hope you earn some money and can buy a period and shift key.

 

[Bambino]

Question: Is this going to be a game (decisions, possibility of losing...) or a visual novel?

 

[szshadowz]

Thanks

 

[ecyas]

Question: Is this going to be a game (decisions, possibility of losing...) or a visual novel?

There will be decisions from next patch on , there wont be any game overs , decisions will lead to different situations

 

[Tbone]

Looks like a great game, is George W Junior or Senior in this one as well?

 

[ecyas]

Looks like a great game, is George W Junior or Senior in this one as well?

No , they are complete different games , written by 2 different people , however they could meet up in mirandas since its the one place all our games have in common , there might be crossovers later on .

 

[rle68]

Thats 20 minutes ill never get back its terrible

 

[ecyas]

Thats 20 minutes ill never get back its terrible

so you spent another minute to post this here , thats 21 minuts now , and if you read this it will be even more .
And why didnt you stop halfway if it was that bad ?

 

[rle68]

so you spent another minute to post this here , thats 21 minuts now , and if you read this it will be even more .
And why didnt you stop halfway if it was that bad ?

its a car wreck you cant take your eyes off of you pray it gets better but its a fat whale in A MINI SKIRTS CLOTHING

 

[ecyas]

its a car wreck you cant take your eyes off of you pray it gets better but its a fat whale in A MINI SKIRTS CLOTHING

if her beeing fat was your only problem , u should read the spoiler and you had known she stays fat , for this game , next chapter a bit thinner , and third chapter like on poster ,so only on third game chapter 3 she ll be like on poster fulltime .

 

[Jellal]

how new is this game its not bad but it only takes like 5 minutes to get tho?

 

[DavidTurner]

review:

art 8/10: the art looks "simple" but it really well made and if you look closer it remind me a little bit of dreaming of dana. the posing is good but sometimes it looks a little "stiff" like clothes dummy. BBW main character is a bold move that i hope it will pay off. As a little note, It would be a lot better with animations

Story 7/10: The story is interesting enough to make me read the whole thing. kinda feels like a "big sausage pizza movie" but it's porn and it doesn't have to make sense, must be entertaining and fappable and it does it. The story is all there tho: a wife as weird dreams about fixing the city to some high moral ground, but she has a twisted mind ,morals and conduct and, for our joy, everything will turn into a fuck fest thanks to a "magical girl".
Some writing errors here and there that makes you cringe (a apple, an bike, an dick) but i'm not a native speaking so they don't bother me as much.

overall 8/10: i have to admit that this Visual Novel ( it's not a game & you can't choose nothing for now, just click to advance and save) it's really up my alley (cheating, "corruption", "ntr", voyeur, blackmail) so maybe I've exaggerated with the vote but who cares? I Love it and had a nice fap. I will definitely follow it.


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P.s. how she treated her husband really made me laugh.. i'm a bad person?

You know I really enjoy reading your reviews, I do have a question though.. Do you ever come back to a game you've reviewed after it's been developed more and do a re-review? Just out of curiosity

 

[boingo]

i've changed my modus operandi a little, but as standard i do the first version that comes out on f95 and i do another one when the game is finished. The fact is that both my opinion and the game change much during the developement. For example i use 2 popular games: the twist i wuold have give a 5/5 till version 6 but i would give a 1/5 now cause it bores me to death now and same for Big brother after version 5

i have no idea what you said all i know is that signature is so fucking cute holy crap.

 

[DavidTurner]

@ThorMcBalbo, I understand, there were games I played at the beginning and loved, and after a couple of updates, I hated them, I'd be interested in hearing your take on some of them.