VN Ren'Py Trouble in Paradise [v1.7 Part 2] [Syko134]

[IzzabellaJones]

ANDROID?????

 

[NTR(Natural)]

ill wait...

 

[KnowNoHope]

you need to change lucas sclerea to a slightly pink color because he already looks perpetually stoned

 

[xmilteach]

Thx

 

[superinconspicuosname37]

great release! There was alot of content here for a fist release and if the next one is six days long that would be even better! loving the ambition keep it up any release window for 0.2?

 

[Porn_Jesus]

Syko134 I would like to point out that you are playing a dangerous game with having incest in your game and using Patreon as your monthly income platform. They are very pissed if that happens and will most likely put your game under review until you remove that from the game. Just saying, quite the risk you have there.

Subscribestar seems to be ok with such things. More and more devs, who have incest and other content Patreon doesn't agree with in their games/projects, move over there to avoid problems with Patreon.

 

[Deleted member 1746130]

Looks like a nice first release!

Me likey~

 

[Deleted member 1746130]

Syko134 I would like to point out that you are playing a dangerous game with having incest in your game and using Patreon as your monthly income platform. They are very pissed if that happens and will most likely put your game under review until you remove that from the game. Just saying, quite the risk you have there.

Subscribestar seems to be ok with such things. More and more devs, who have incest and other content Patreon doesn't agree with in their games/projects, move over there to avoid problems with Patreon.

I'm sure it'll turn into the normal land-lady/room-mate situation.

 

[Deleted member 1746130]

Ha! I didn't even see that. Your dick-detection system is impressive.

Right? Dudes got a schlong magnet.

 

[Lucas Martinez]

Hey, this game looks really really promising and I like the look of the characters. From everything written I think you'll do a good job of this. But for myself I'll play it at a later date when it has some more development, in a few months time. Good luck with this project

 

[Syko134]

Sooooo I woke up to 20+ replies, and it took me a solid minute to process it. You guys are awesome! <3

Lawsuit for using Koikatsu in 3... 2... 1...

For real? Thats a thing?

Do you discover you should have read the Dev Notes before you applied to this school?

That would truly be life-changing, eh?

Both, you and ur sis are super excited to move out together...

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MC: school is great!

Yeah, of course. School is the main selling point here. What else could possibly be better than a great school?

multiple penetration and group sex will be mff?

Yes sir! Both MFF and MFM are planned

Please tell me a harem is planned in the future. With such hot girls you got to have all of them.

It is!

Syko134 are there plans to provide an android port? I love this art style and the cute sister seals the deal for me.

ANDROID?????

Yes! I am still tryna figure out how to build an android port lol. It should be out in a day or two!

Why is a random dick crawling along the girl's thigh in the main picture?

Rude. His name is Richard, and he's just vibin' Leave him alone

I like your game, but I would recommend that we can change the MC name

Uhhh you can already do that.

I don't like the idea of posting a review for this early of a release, so here are some initial thoughts, in no particular order.

+ Being able to name the main heroine is actually quite neat. Also, the choice of making her your sister or best friend seems to do a bit more than change her "title", aka the backstory shifts ever so slightly, which I appreciate. I wonder if Childhood friend would have been a better "title" than best friend though, not that it matters, simply a random thought.
+ So far it's relatively funny, all things considered. Some might dislike the occasional meme reference but they're spread enough to not be a bother and I'd be lying if I claimed some of them didn't get a laugh out of me
+ Heroines are cute enough and the dialogue with them is enjoyable for the most part. There was no extreme stereotypey stuff imo. They're all quick to be into the protag but if he's meant to be handsome then it was mostly reasonable.

- The font is definitely on the "oh god my eyes" side.
- Some very minors typos and punctuation. Emphasis on minor, though. (Notably I saw "my" instead of "me")
- Lots of single options in the first few minutes. I'm giving the benefit of the doubt that there might be more options there in the future, but making the player click "Go outside" with no other option when told to go outside is rather pointless.
- Tiff calls the protagonist Alex even if you changed his name when you meet her for the first time at the cafe. I don't know if it happens at other times, but this is the one I noticed.

I have two last thoughts that I'd currently classify as negative until the story makes up for them. By which I mean I'm willing to accept these things if they're meant to drive the story forward.

1. The main heroine accidentally peeking at the protag in the shower felt a bit forced. It's definitely done more responsibly than other games, so I'm willing to entertain it as kind of a wake-up call that they've both grown up, which seems to be the case.

2. The story is currently railroading the protag in a specific route. I don't know if this a "well in future release you'll be able to go with whoever you want" or if this needed for the story to do certain things. I do hope this isn't a "well duh, this is a harem of course you'll go on dates with everyone right at the start".

Overall, this was a fun one hour. It's a good start. I'll be on the lookout for the future updates.

Thanks for the detailed feedback!
-> The Tiff-calling-MC-Alex bug has been fixed, and will be implemented in the next release, sorry about that!
-> I'll try my best to fix all the typos! Some sneaky ones always make it into a release huh?

-> Choices in this release was just me tryna figure out how to work with menus. The next release will have game-affecting choices and multiple routes. Sorry about that!
-> About railroading the protag, you might see exactly why that has been done in 0.2

you need to change lucas sclerea to a slightly pink color because he already looks perpetually stoned

Maybe he is? Ngl, that would make a great friend (I'll try my best to do something about it!)

great release! There was alot of content here for a fist release and if the next one is six days long that would be even better! loving the ambition keep it up any release window for 0.2?

Hopefully around late October/Early November! If it takes too long, I might have to split the updates into 2 parts

Syko134 I would like to point out that you are playing a dangerous game with having incest in your game and using Patreon as your monthly income platform. They are very pissed if that happens and will most likely put your game under review until you remove that from the game. Just saying, quite the risk you have there.

Subscribestar seems to be ok with such things. More and more devs, who have incest and other content Patreon doesn't agree with in their games/projects, move over there to avoid problems with Patreon.

Yeah. I was considering 'accidentally' dropping a patch somewhere for the next release and removing the choice at the beginning. If I don't get cancelled before the second release, it will come with a patch!

I'm sure it'll turn into the normal land-lady/room-mate situation.

I hope not! 'Mmmmm what are you doing step-roommate?' is quite a turnoff for me

 

[LonDonJohnSon]

Soon as I get some *ahem* alone time, this is first on my list. Really like the way it seems that you took advantage of Koi's lighting system. I think most people who use it as a renderer completely forget that it exists. Which is why most end up looking abhorrent, and yours actually looks professional.

 

[DA22]

Sooooo I woke up to 20+ replies, and it took me a solid minute to process it. You guys are awesome! <3




Yes sir! Both MFF and MFM are planned

Thanks for the warning, guess the game will not be for me. Good luck and have fun with development of your game. It looks good and active devs are always appreciated.

 

[Syko134]

Soon as I get some *ahem* alone time, this is first on my list. Really like the way it seems that you took advantage of Koi's lighting system. I think most people who use it as a renderer completely forget that it exists. Which is why most end up looking abhorrent, and yours actually looks professional.

Thanks! The lighting controls kinda took a while to get used to. You may see some inconsistent lighting in first few scenes

Thanks for the warning, guess the game will not be for me. Good luck and have fun with development of your game. It looks good and active devs are always appreciated.

I get it, man. If its any redemption, both MFF and MFM scenes will be avoidable. Won't pressure you to stay though. I don't wanna ruin your experience in any way Cheers!

 

[DA22]

Thanks! The lighting controls kinda took a while to get used to. You may see some inconsistent lighting in first few scenes

I get it, man. If its any redemption, both MFF and MFM scenes will be avoidable. Won't pressure you to stay though. I don't wanna ruin your experience in any way Cheers!

Hahaha, well to me MFM scenes for my reasons are even worse as scenes where a LI has sex with just another male. Especially if it would include certain characters, avoidable or not since you still know it. So better for me to not play and get annoyed and unreasonable.

 

[Syko134]

Hahaha, well to me MFM scenes for my reasons are even worse as scenes where a LI has sex with just another male. Especially if it would include certain characters, avoidable or not since you still know it. So better for me to not play and get annoyed and unreasonable.

Alright. Looks like you should skip this one after all, then. I hope you find what you're looking for!

 

[ZZ23]

Awesome first release and to be honest I don't mind it being kinetic if this keeps up especially if story gets spiced up in some interesting way and pacing/event transition get smoother. Mad props for animation, I think we are past still lewed scenes at this point anyway. Couple more of release and I'm definitely jumping into patreon for sure, hype is real.

Good luck

 

[RexGenocide]

The font is difficult to read.

 

[Syko134]

The font is difficult to read.

Already found a better one. Will be changed in the next release

 

[blackmasha]

this is more content as a first release than most games give in 3 updates LOL...

really well done, now if we can get some mother action and maybe a gangbang or two this game is going to be a blast. ofc I fully respect whatever the author chooses to do and support him either way.