VN Ren'Py Troubled Legacy [v0.20] [Blackthunder_vn]

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Troubled Legacy [v0.0.30] [Blackthunder_vn] - Update only

Ren'Py/Python version changed, read the Spoiler before installing!
If you missed it you can find the old Update only patch HERE.

Win/Linux: v0.0.29 -> v0.0.30 [98,7 MB]
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FaceCrap For you it may look like a lot of time, but for every dev it means just a short time since you also have to prepair the next project.

With the next update TL already reaches the age of 4 years.
 
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this is another vn which i consider among the best on this site ..... love the update .... hate these updates always have to end .. the only good thing about that is the next update coming :love:
which gives me time to play this one again for like the 100th time :love:

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I mean no disrespect. But, whoever did the english translation for you needs to be slapped upside the back of their head and sent back to Language arts class. At this point? This VN has been going for awhile. I'll even fix the issues for cheap cheap if you'll let me. Its gotten sad at this point.
 
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Reb3l911 There is no translation for english, it's typed in english by myself, but... english isn't my native language.
Since english isn't my native language I have some nice guys who are helping me with the proofreading.

Yeah what should I say, 3 native english speaking guys... (one australian and also 2 americans).

I had to learn over the last few years that you can't hit the head of the nail in english.

I also know that the old parts need a revisit there are a lot of... let's call it mistakes inside.
But I also think it's readable.

The revisit is already on the todo list but it takes a lot of time.
 
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Why is there only 1 option with Gradi at the photo studio? It sets a variable too, which would only make sense if there used to be another option but that one got removed for some reason.
 
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Kinetic Novel pregnancy('s) Huh? I guess that's literally a year and change of support wasted. If this were an 100%

Pure KN won't say a thing about pregnancy implication's, just lazy non-implications of choice('s) on what's supposed to

be immersive experience during a reading experience, for the fact this isn't a KN, pregnancy implications should be 100%

reader's choosing. I mean, if I (we/maybe) wanted to read Kinetic Novel with these types of implications I think we wouldn't be

here. Yeah, I've said it differently in the pasted, our wasn't clear on another forum page no matter if it's locked Li('s) by the

reader('s) choosing with any Li('s) of any story other than Pure KN('s) pregnancy implications should be a reader's "Decision

Period". This would be written to anyone down blow (the Banners) I see as standard for AVN writing as well.

This is "Strictly My Viewpoint" Problem Go to Negan right of Follow Click it and done.
 
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Nice Update I enjoyed most of it would of said all of it but then.
I'd need to Ignore the forced no option Anal I have to Skip past.
I honestly don't know where its all come from all of a sudden.
Your not the only Dev of late to go Anal crazy out of the blue
Must be some fekin Patron whispering in their ear.
Filling Dev minds into thinking it's a good idea to suddenly add it.
And then go overboard with it at the same time.
Hope thats not the case here but it do's tend to be the trend once it's introduced.
Oh well it was almost a great christmas present.
 
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Blackthunder_vn said:
But I also think it's readable.
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That's because you don't understand English very well. It makes sense to you but doesn't make as much sense to people who actually speak English because they can actually see the mistakes.

Having a good translation is one of the most important things for any developer to focus on, if people start playing your game and can't get past the broken English, they aren't going to play the rest of it or consider supporting you financially. Good writing can take your game so much further, look at something like "Grandma's House" that has no animations and simple visuals but has become one of the most supported games because it has solid writing. Your game could easily be as big if you spent more time perfecting the writing aspect.
 
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BigJoe644 said:
Kinetic Novel pregnancy('s) Huh? I guess that's literally a year and change of support wasted. If this were an 100%

Pure KN won't say a thing about pregnancy implication's, just lazy non-implications of choice('s) on what's supposed to

be immersive experience during a reading experience, for the fact this isn't a KN, pregnancy implications should be 100%

reader's choosing. I mean, if I (we/maybe) wanted to read Kinetic Novel with these types of implications I think we wouldn't be

here. Yeah, I've said it differently in the pasted, our wasn't clear on another forum page no matter if it's locked Li('s) by the

reader('s) choosing with any Li('s) of any story other than Pure KN('s) pregnancy implications should be a reader's "Decision

Period". This would be written to anyone down blow (the Banners) I see as standard for AVN writing as well.

This is "Strictly My Viewpoint" Problem Go to Negan right of Follow Click it and done.
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Sooooo..... You're saying that you don't like the fact there is a chance for pregnancy? I read what you said. Twice. And I don't understand it much. I'm guessing English isn't your first language as the way you said this is hard to put into context for me. Or, it could be my dyslexia acting up. LoL.
 
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I realize my reply is late, but then so is the recent release.

Hey I get the fantasy thing, but to claim "fantasy" you cannot bring in real world organizations and expect to believe BS replaced the reality. Your suggestion of making up a name, or have a play on the name is far better and shows an obvious intent to joke or create fantasy. Using Interpol with a ficticious purpose makes about as much sense as calling the FBI or CIA a child daycare service. It doesn't make any sense and actually pulls you out of the fantasy for the stupidity of the claim, not the fantasy.

Even movies, actual fiction too, use made up agencies if they are going to insert "artistic license BS" to push the plot. To use an actual agency and give it completely different roles is just laziness not creativity.

The "it's a porn game stupid" claim would be valid if the writer didn't invest a considerable amount of rendering and dialog, as well as a gigantic chunk of the game to the ridiculous poorly laid foundation.

Listen, critiquing a guy's work can bring out ego and anger, but seriously it's a major flaw. The funny thing is, a simple string replace could restore "fantasy". Change "Interpol" with "UNIPSY" or "INTERPSY" or something sillier. If you're going to use a real world name it needs to have the same real world nature, else make up something.

Part of a porn game's purpose is to create and enhance a fantasy, but pulling in real world names and elements and giving them a new meaning confuses the reader and weakens the fantasy. I actually like this game, but as soon as the Interpol plot came into play, it pulled me out of the fantasy and and made me feel I was dealing with a flat-earther wanting me to believe the new BS and expect me to throw away common sense.

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Black, I am also a published author, and I have helped in writing two different VN games, one of them was fairly popular, and I am helping in editing another VN as I write this. Since your story is fiction AND it IS porn, somewhat, to a "cartoon" degree, I guess, instead of being whatever this dude is being, if I were writing it, just to add a bit of humor, I might name the "agency" one of two choices: 1. Interpole or 2. Inherhole. :ROFLMAO:

Hey, Black, not to appease this dude, but if you ever wanted to insert a chuckle or two in your work, something like that would do it. In fact, it would be hilarious! Or don't. It doesn't matter. Just do your thing, man. My original suggestion was for the aesthetics of the sexual act; to make it more arousing, intimate, and tantalizing, you know? This guy's suggestion is more about taking a fictitious work of art and making it non-fiction, which is a fine line with fiction. In one of my published novels, I used a fictitious town. In a subsequent novel, Book 2 of the series, I introduced another town, which was real, in another part of the country. But it really didn't matter. The crux of the story really hadn't much to do at all with the names of the towns but more of what was going on within them and with their residents.

swelldude: And where in the world did you get the idea that even the remotest scintilla of believability accompanies fantasy? The definition of fantasy is: The creative, capricious imagination; unrestrained fancy.

Now, does that sound like something that is supposed to be believed? Your proposal is simply ridiculous. If you have a problem with alphabet agencies, then you're in the wrong forum, chief!
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