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[viper217]

You're mixing way too much IRL stuff into a NTR game. If you analyze netorare works with that mindset, whether they are games, doujinshi or whatever you prefer, the genre would die in a second.

It is the exact same thing as a protagonist in an action movie. Is it likely that he survives hundreds of shootings and always comes out alive? No. Is that an element that ensures that fans of the said genre will end up liking it? Yes. Mirror all this on a netorare work and you have your answer.

There are very few works with strong themes that maintain true realism, and do you know why? Because otherwise they would be boring. And no one when reading/playing something wants to interact with something boring.

In addition, we are talking about porn here. If someone wants a 100% percent realistic porn, they should masturbate while looking at a white wall. What people find erotic in porn is precisely the fact that it manages to depict situations that in reality would be difficult to find themselves in/experience.

... but that doesn't mean the quality of the story cannot be better written and that is what we have been discussing, all fiction requires the suspension of belief, but the better writers manage to thread the eye of the needle by avoiding incongruent content while still maintaining the tension and changes in the story arc when necessary. No one is expecting intellectual high brow porn, as you said it would be boring, what they do expect is that where possible these incongruent elements are minimised. This game has a lot of potential, I find NTR interesting, I don't hate it, but the treadmill of NTR games on F95 tend to demonstrate the lowest common denominator of derivative porn, where women are mindless fuck dolls who have limited or minimal control over what happens. The desire for better writing does not = hate a particular topic, it just means that people want something better, the fact that we are on a pirate porn site makes it all the merrier, sometimes the devs come on and even engage with the people who engage with their products.

 

[cnoxj]

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[Terox34567]

Which update Danielle came into talks.

 

[Unwatched]

Sophie already uses Felix as a pretext and keeps her status at school clean but there is no more relationship between them as things stand, 2 more updates and Felix should get out of her life. I think that in the options for Sophie, look for an ending where she sees the real Zack.

I didn't play this game and I doubt I will play it. But, from what I read on this thread, I have a feeling she will realize how dumb she became after Zach goes for that Daniella chick along with his friend that black dude (kinda forgot the name and I don't want to look for it xD).

She will most likely try to use her authorithy as a teacher (if she will have any left after the fiasco) and try to pressure Daniella to stop "seducing" Zach, but then after the failed attempts to "bring back" Zach. She will most likely become desperate and say she is willing to do anything just to bring him back, he will "accept" her proposal and turn her in some kinda of cum dump and pass her around his friends, but after he is done he will just toss her away after she became pregnant with someone' s child or something and forget about her.

Afte that she will "realize" what she has become and how she hurt her husband just for some good dicking and she will try to get back with him, but he would already move on with his life and forget about it. But, since this is NTR the simp might actually accept her back and raise someone's else child along with her and she will be most likely way too far gone and still cheat on him behind his back.

Well this is classic way this game could go imo, but I might be wrong xD.

 

[Fapbert]

The fuck are y'all talking about? People fuck no matter the consequences. Are you really young or something? Students fuck their professors sometimes and sometimes they get caught but many times they never do. Hell, there are countries where people will be literally killed if they're caught in adultery but some people still do it. Nothing about this story is unrealistic.

 

[viper217]

The fuck are y'all talking about? People fuck no matter the consequences. Are you really young or something? Students fuck their professors sometimes and sometimes they get caught but many times they never do. Hell, there are countries where people will be literally killed if they're caught in adultery but some people still do it. Nothing about this story is unrealistic.

I think from your response you are really young, straight into profanity second word, second sentence second word profanity, third sentence second word profanity. With a vocabulary that limited you may just be the next NTR script writer they need I love how you end your statement "Nothing about this story is unrealistic" - do you still believe in Santa?

 

[tata19]

There are other episodes that occur on Felix's route, one where he talks to Jonah because he sees him worried. Jonah doesn't finish explaining his problem about Danielle, maybe he is thinking about some kind of sharing or cuckold relationship?
And in the conversation with Brooks, I have the feeling that he is the one who gives Sophie to Zack in exchange, perhaps for her to come and play at his school, knowing about Zack's problematic past?

 

[JevilVerum]

I think from your response you are really young, straight into profanity second word, second sentence second word profanity, third sentence second word profanity. With a vocabulary that limited you may just be the next NTR script writer they need I love how you end your statement "Nothing about this story is unrealistic" - do you still believe in Santa?

Just out of curiosity, you're indirectly insulting the writer saying they also have limited vocabulary?

 

[tata19]

I didn't play this game and I doubt I will play it. But, from what I read on this thread, I have a feeling she will realize how dumb she became after Zach goes for that Daniella chick along with his friend that black dude (kinda forgot the name and I don't want to look for it xD).

She will most likely try to use her authorithy as a teacher (if she will have any left after the fiasco) and try to pressure Daniella to stop "seducing" Zach, but then after the failed attempts to "bring back" Zach. She will most likely become desperate and say she is willing to do anything just to bring him back, he will "accept" her proposal and turn her in some kinda of cum dump and pass her around his friends, but after he is done he will just toss her away after she became pregnant with someone' s child or something and forget about her.

Afte that she will "realize" what she has become and how she hurt her husband just for some good dicking and she will try to get back with him, but he would already move on with his life and forget about it. But, since this is NTR the simp might actually accept her back and raise someone's else child along with her and she will be most likely way too far gone and still cheat on him behind his back.

Well this is classic way this game could go imo, but I might be wrong xD.

As it stands now the story is a total corruption of Sophie who could end up as Zack's sex toy or end up scorned and abandoned by everyone. Felix right now in Sophie's life is just a way for her to get excited by humiliating him and this is just the beginning. Maybe the options will give some twist to the story, it opens up other expectations, not only how much Sophie continues to corrupt under Zack's manipulation.

 

[Walter Victor]

I think from your response you are really young, straight into profanity second word, second sentence second word profanity, third sentence second word profanity. With a vocabulary that limited you may just be the next NTR script writer they need I love how you end your statement "Nothing about this story is unrealistic" - do you still believe in Santa?

So now we are shaming people for using profanity on F95. Please.

100% personal attack. I guess you couldn't come up with a pertinent rebuttal.

 

[blewbury]

So now we are shaming people for using profanity on F95

Ye. We are people of culture here. You know, Shakespeare, etc.

 

[Bringn_Da_Pain]

Ye. We are people of culture here. You know, Shakespeare, etc.

Go Forward and Fornicate with Thyself

 

[carlos213]

I really liked your game

 

[xcalibar4]

I think you make some good points, the story could have some interesting side play if the female character is totally corrupted, she could become a corrupter, but it would be a real mind break from her current position and I don't know if the developer has the patience to develop these side plots. Who knows I cannot speak to how much time and effort it takes, but we all have examples of games that could have been so much more, but there was a mad dash to the finish line and onto the next product.
Part of the NTR schtick is that we get to see all the sides of the triangle, but a smart writer would keep back some information for a parallel story line that we are not aware of to increase the surprise/shock factor later.

Now this could make for an excellent sequel, where Sophie becomes the predator at a new university.

I mean in my mind NTR is an extension of Corruption Genre. Why most dev focus and stop after the cuckolding is done. Succulence has one end where she becomes evil and RaiOhGar (Which made me come back to NTR again) has most ending with corruption and NTR.

Chuuka Naruto has done with Female Teacher Reiko and it's sequel Yuutousei Minami - Onna Kyoushi Reiko 2.
Yamada Gogogo ERONA and ERONA 2 has done it.

Hope someone makes a good Corruption game or at-least extends NTR into full Corruption.

 

[tata19]

I mean in my mind NTR is an extension of Corruption Genre. Why most dev focus and stop after the cuckolding is done. Succulence has one end where she becomes evil and RaiOhGar (Which made me come back to NTR again) has most ending with corruption and NTR.

Chuuka Naruto has done with Female Teacher Reiko and it's sequel Yuutousei Minami - Onna Kyoushi Reiko 2.
Yamada Gogogo ERONA and ERONA 2 has done it.

Hope someone makes a good Corruption game or at-least extends NTR into full Corruption.

In this case everything points to something like that. Zack is capable of achieving anything with Sophie and the desperation of not losing him will put her in a position to do what he asks, who would imagine that she would feel so good humiliating Felix the way she is doing.

 

[MayFreese]

The fuck are y'all talking about? People fuck no matter the consequences. Are you really young or something? Students fuck their professors sometimes and sometimes they get caught but many times they never do. Hell, there are countries where people will be literally killed if they're caught in adultery but some people still do it. Nothing about this story is unrealistic.

Being an NTR genre game, you kind of have to expect this level of coping from people.
The MC is a complete pushover and it's understandable why his wife lost respect for him.
Not justifying it, just saying that it makes sense if you stop being anal-hurt.

 

[ButterscotchJackson]

Question for you guys. I currently think this is the best NTR game out right now. I literally have not been able to wait for the free version and have been paying the 15 bucks to get it on the 20th. Is there a better more comprehensive and seductive NTR game than this one right now?? I truly would like to know, I feel like this game corrects the mistakes that A promise Best Left Unkept made.
If there is a better NTR game out there right now than this one, please let me know because I'm honestly curious.

 

[rustyspoon]

Honestly a great update for Felix's path. Finally some good NTR content for him, it's been a while. And I applaud the creators' courage for daring to go a bit homoerotic with Felix's POV.

 

[tata19]

Question for you guys. I currently think this is the best NTR game out right now. I literally have not been able to wait for the free version and have been paying the 15 bucks to get it on the 20th. Is there a better more comprehensive and seductive NTR game than this one right now?? I truly would like to know, I feel like this game corrects the mistakes that A promise Best Left Unkept made.
If there is a better NTR game out there right now than this one, please let me know because I'm honestly curious.

I think they are different in the case of A promise Best Left Unkept has more options so that one can choose and make the MC more active and be able to choose how to act. In this latest update Felix has been given some action because his route had become very meaningless. Let's see what happens. I find it very disturbing how Sophie no longer has any feelings for Felix.

 

[JillNadin]

Question for you guys. I currently think this is the best NTR game out right now. I literally have not been able to wait for the free version and have been paying the 15 bucks to get it on the 20th. Is there a better more comprehensive and seductive NTR game than this one right now?? I truly would like to know, I feel like this game corrects the mistakes that A promise Best Left Unkept made.
If there is a better NTR game out there right now than this one, please let me know because I'm honestly curious.

What are the mistakes you think A Promise Best Left Unkept made, out of interest?