Corvus Belli

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The first few days have a very small number of spelling, grammatical and syntax errors. But at a certain point, they start occurring ever third text block, and sometimes there are several examples in a single paragraph.
For example, in the scene when the MC talks with his mother in the kitchen about his doctor's appointment, there are several dozen such errors. Individually, they're all relatively minor ("no that not a problem" instead of "no, that's not a problem", "thats" instead of "that's", "shes" instead of "she's", "to" instead of "too" and vice versa, "district" instead of "distinct", missing commas, and the like) but they occur with notable frequency all of a sudden, especially because they were so much less common in the first couple of days.
Was there a problem with the proof-reading?
 
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RG80100

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It seems to me there was a proof reading when was released 0.6. Surely another later
 

Moonis

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I played this for the first time and it turned out to be far better than I expected. Excellent writing and great characters.
There were only few things I didn't like (too many characters with enormous breasts/wide hips, asphyxiation scene, for example). Otherwise quite perfect.

As usual, I took notes of the typos I saw. I can't vouch I saw them all as I skipped some speeches too fast to read every word. And I listed only typos. As a non-native english speaker myself, I don't mind bit weirder sentence structures.
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when the mc was talking to aden when the ntr stuff was a choice is it mc takes girl or the girl gets taken from the mc?
 

DatWanGai

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when the mc was talking to aden when the ntr stuff was a choice is it mc takes girl or the girl gets taken from the mc?
I've started seeing JP devs use these terms to cut down on confusion.
NTRe = NeToRare or having lover stolen
NTRi = NeToRi or stealing someone's lover

I really wish it catches on more, not really sure how they'll do netorase (maybe NTRs?).
Would also like a new term for when the heroine isn't the MC's lover just someone he's in love with. Like NTRiend Zone, IDK.....NTRZ?
 

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I've started seeing JP devs use these terms to cut down on confusion.
NTRe = NeToRare or having lover stolen
NTRi = NeToRi or stealing someone's lover

I really wish it catches on more, not really sure how they'll do netorase (maybe NTRs?).
Would also like a new term for when the heroine isn't the MC's lover just someone he's in love with. Like NTRiend Zone, IDK.....NTRZ?
Professor of NTR over here HAHA

also the NTR part is probably the mom of Victoria, which is my favorite personality btw, an unknowingly jealous of her youthful child, in terms of beauty, really wants you to get in her and fuck the idea out of her
 

DatWanGai

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Professor of NTR over here HAHA

also the NTR part is probably the mom of Victoria, which is my favorite personality btw, an unknowingly jealous of her youthful child, in terms of beauty, really wants you to get in her and fuck the idea out of her
Ok, but that's not NTR though, professor (at least not until you and Victoria become a thing, mom stealing her daughter's lover is something I quite like myself). And the original poster, who I quoted, specifically talked about Aden so most likely (and by that I mean 100%) they are talking about Catherine.
 
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Yes, all the ladies will be able to become pregnant, including the mother and sisters. And yes, there will be pregnancy sex.
Hi BaiBai_,

Sorry to necro a so old post but i was playing your game and several dialogues seem make the MC really committed to pregnancy. I was searching for more info here in the thread and i saw this post from you.

I was wondering if it will be avoidable or not. Not a huge fan of preggo here.
Thanks in advance for the answer
 

mentosa

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Ok, but that's not NTR though, professor (at least not until you and Victoria become a thing, mom stealing her daughter's lover is something I quite like myself). And the original poster, who I quoted, specifically talked about Aden so most likely (and by that I mean 100%) they are talking about Catherine.
The NTR thing will probably be MC NTR'ing Julia w.r.t husband.

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Alandir

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Hi BaiBai_,

Sorry to necro a so old post but i was playing your game and several dialogues seem make the MC really committed to pregnancy. I was searching for more info here in the thread and i saw this post from you.

I was wondering if it will be avoidable or not. Not a huge fan of preggo here.
Thanks in advance for the answer
Given that it would double the amount of renders baibai has to do, I doubt its gonna be optional.
 
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