BaiBai_ your game is great, it is far better than one would think, considering the by now tired story, but every time a new update hits, I'm just completely thrown off, by how horrible the spelling and grammar is.
It's a rare occurrence to find a correct sentence, not the other way around.
Words are incomplete, spelled completely wrong, mixed up with similar sounding words.
It's just a real chore to read and considering you clearly put your heart into this, doesn't the game deserve to spend that extra time, to at least halfway get the writing right?
Just run a spell and grammar check on the text before inserting it into the game. That doesn't take that much time and would improve the experience so much.
I know not everybody registers this as annoying as I do, but there are many who do.
If you ask around, you might even find someone among the player base, who would be willing to do it.
Hell, if I have the time, I would be willing to work on correcting one or two chapters.