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MrLakes1579

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I remember the last time I played a version of this. And it literally didn't get around to the gimmick that the whole game is pitched with. Feels like getting that far should be the criteria for version 0.0001. By all means hold back on the sex and stick to shower peaking, but if your transformation game doesn't actually get around to the transforming part there's a problem.

Also the shirt removal minigame made no sense . Wasn't able to progress it at all.
 

FatGiant

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I wish I could understand the purpose of hiding content under seemingly innocuous dialogue options. I can see 2 options, either you want this to be played with obsessively completionist players, or, you don't know what you are doing.

There's also the fact that most of the options are completely stupid, and choosing any of them, for completionist sake, is extremely unlikely. There's also many continuity problems. For example, the sister photograph. I have it in my Inventory, yet, the bald smelly guy shows it to her in the park?

The conversation with Jimmy's friends, why the fuck would I tell that POS the name of the girl? Is the MC completely devoid of brain cells?

Apparently, it was supposed to give the pill that fell to the ground when fighting the rapist in the train, to Lindsay... Are you serious? I meet a girl, save her from a rapist, stop the rapist from attacking another person, and then after learning that that pill may be a highly addictive drug that turns people into sex maniacs, I give it to the girl I saved? What is this, a competition to be the most stupid person on the planet?

Most of the Pink points are annoying, pointless and lead to nothing.

I think that this needs another remake, and a more focused game. You are trying to cover too many topics at the same time, hiding content left and right, to the point that nothing makes sense and there's really no plot at all. It's just a points chase and save scumming to try and see pointless and plotless sex scenes that lead nowhere.

Peace :(
 
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omega977

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I agree with you and I'm glad you've decided to re-do and carry I with this game. Just follow your plot and go ahead with the storyline. I like the game is not just a "fap" game but there's a story unfolding as well. I guess I'll be supporting you on Patreon soon.
 
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greono

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There's also the fact that most of the options are completely stupid, and choosing any of them, for completionist sake, is extremely unlikely. There's also many continuity problems. For example, the sister photograph. I have it in my Inventory, yet, the bald smelly guy shows it to her in the park?
Maybe it was a bug? Do not you think?

The conversation with Jimmy's friends, why the fuck would I tell that POS the name of the girl? Is the MC completely devoid of brain cells?
Has it ever passed through the "cell" of your brain that he might have reasons?

Apparently, it was supposed to give the pill that fell to the ground when fighting the rapist in the train, to Lindsay... Are you serious? I meet a girl, save her from a rapist, stop the rapist from attacking another person, and then after learning that that pill may be a highly addictive drug that turns people into sex maniacs, I give it to the girl I saved? What is this, a competition to be the most stupid person on the planet?
I think the choices you make in the game say more about you than the MC.
Did you give her the pill? Think about it.

Peace :D
 

FatGiant

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Maybe it was a bug? Do not you think?


Has it ever passed through the "cell" of your brain that he might have reasons?


I think the choices you make in the game say more about you than the MC.
Did you give her the pill? Think about it.


Peace :D
No, I didn't, only learned of it here. As well as I didn't give that fucker Lindsay's name, which locked me out of content. It's ok. I wouldn't change my mind anyway. But, are you sure that what you said applies to me or to you? I didn't make those options, you did.

It's quite interesting that your instant reply is a deflection.

Peace :)
 
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adri12

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Sorry, guys, but I won't be able to please everyone. I'm here to tell a story, although the game's theme is pornographic, there is a really cool plot behind it. The game is too complex for me to create a "Perfect" reality. I try to bring the characters as close as I (a mere human) can to real people, they will come with their problems, loves, impulses, flaws, qualities and motivations. You can try to break it and mold it to your shape, but it will be (in my opinion) impossible to keep everyone under "restraints". So, those who cannot idealize this and accept it as it is, I ask you to open your heart and mind and try to understand the game as it is.

You can try to keep everyone under your control, but I won't guarantee that the game will be careful about that. There are characters and stories that are too complex and are fundamental for the plot to follow.

The game is not just about being NTR or not, the characters are following their lives and they already had lives before you arrived in the Capital. You can influence their lives, but they also influence your paths! If I told you that it is possible to make all the characters love you unconditionally, I would be lying, because there will be bad characters, antagonists, you can also relate to them, but putting your own integrity at risk.

Linsey hates cheating, which is why she dumped Bret. But your aunt won't become your toy overnight, she's a powerful woman and doesn't care about you feelings! (At least not for now).
No problem buddy, it's your game after all. And we love it! ;)
 
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GeorgeTheBush

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Is the shirt removal minigame bugged? I'm supposed to fill the blue bar or something, but it seems nothing is happening. Not clicking at all is also not resulting in a defeat as the instructions suggest.
Otherwise nice game so far, really like the mixture of VN and some freeroam and the story progression. It's also not too fast paced like some of the other games.
 
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Is the shirt removal minigame bugged? I'm supposed to fill the blue bar or something, but it seems nothing is happening. Not clicking at all is also not resulting in a defeat as the instructions suggest.
Otherwise nice game so far, really like the mixture of VN and some freeroam and the story progression. It's also not too fast paced like some of the other games.
This bug will be fixed in version 003
 

Osurankaya

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I was eagerly waiting for the new part of the game and I think it was worth the wait. The little surprises in the game made me smile. The story is going pretty well now. I hope you continue this way. I'm looking forward to the 3rd episode.
 
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Jacques1

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Really hoping the dev doesn't disappear like the last times. The game has a lot of promise/potential and the scenes that are there already are good.
 
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Chabbo

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Oh shit I did not know you had restarted this game, thought it was abandoned from years ago.
I wonder if you remember us talking about the sister on your patreon.


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Have not tried this version yet, but man was the sister a cutie from the first game, too bad patreon got so pissy about how she looked.
 

Zedire

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greono I really like this game so far. Seems very interesting. I haven't played any of the previous version but I really hope you see this one through! I always appreciate a game with a good story & character building as well as the sex.

I have a question about the Bret 'relationship' from the scene in the alley. If you choose the 'favor for a favor' option for a sexual payoff when you give him info (my character is bisexual but leans more heavily toward gay), can I still get a job at Bret's garage considering he doesn't mention the job when making that suggestion?
Likewise, if I choose the option that gives me a friend point and Bret offers you a job at his garage, will I be locked out of any sex scenes with him that I would have gotten if I chose favor for favor?
If I tell him about Lindsey & the beach, considering I agreed to go with her & her friend & I'll be there, will that give me another chance to get with Bret on that day or will it work more to bring Lindsey & Bret together?

I'm really looking forward to/hoping for a gay romance with Bret (ultimately), I just don't want to mess it up.
Also his brother? cousin? Adan is a cutie, I hope we can get with him in future.

EDIT: Oh! I also got the bug where the gross bald man had my sister's picture and tried to get to her in the park, even though he gave it back to me after I beat him up on the train (the picture is still in my MC's inventory).
And speaking of that scene, is there any way to get back to my sister before or during that event to help her out? During the scene where we go the the guard's office, I avoided peeking and chose 'leave' but literally was forced to peek on the officers (though I have no interest in doing so). Could we get an option to skip that whole scene by leaving immediately after talking to the guard captain and so be able to be there for our sister?
 
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SegaleVidale

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Hi! Is it even possible to dominate her here?

I tried at least 8 different paths and roles focusing on this very specific situation (calculating, redoing) but I never had enough points to unlock it. God is my witness I spent at least an hour finding out what I did wrong...No success.

Man, this game has one of the most frustrating game mechanics:
It is teasing you like " Hey dude, You could have done this. See! ("Dominate her") , but you miss something somewhere hihihi, so you can't. Move along." -.-
I made these kind of mistakes as a rookie GM in DnD decades ago.

If the Dev only "wants to tell a story" I advise them making a Kinetic novel instead. Punishing Gamers because of their choices, making very strict paths for specific content and blocking gamers out of it is a very bad game design.
Either the Dev should give more point or more paths from where gamers can reach exactly the same content.
Alternatively, hide those choices that we can't choose for some reasons... In this case Players wont get annoyed by seeing what they could have done....
If the Dev believes that the story is too complex for them, it's only a matter of time or content, when the gamers find it more exasperated too as they get locked out from more and more content.
 
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Hi! Is it even possible to dominate her here?

I tried at least 8 different paths and roles focusing on this very specific situation (calculating, redoing) but I never had enough points to unlock it. God is my witness I spent at least an hour finding out what I did wrong...No success.

Man, this game has one of the most frustrating game mechanics:
It is teasing you like " Hey dude, You could have done this. See! ("Dominate her") , but you miss something somewhere hihihi, so you can't. Move along." -.-
I made these kind of mistakes as a rookie GM in DnD decades ago.

If the Dev only "wants to tell a story" I advise them making a Kinetic novel instead. Punishing Gamers because of their choices, making very strict paths for specific content and blocking gamers out of it is a very bad game design.
Either the Dev should give more point or more paths from where gamers can reach exactly the same content.
Alternatively, hide those choices that we can't choose for some reasons... In this case Players wont get annoyed by seeing what they could have done....
If the Dev believes that the story is too complex for them, it's only a matter of time or content, when the gamers find it more exasperated too as they get locked out from more and more content.
you need masculinity 10+

I will be able to review the issue of the necessary statistics points. No problem.
 
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greono

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If you choose the 'favor for a favor' option for a sexual payoff when you give him info (my character is bisexual but leans more heavily toward gay), can I still get a job at Bret's garage considering he doesn't mention the job when making that suggestion?
Yes, you will have countless possibilities to get a job with him. Becoming a "lover" with Love, or a friend with Friendship, or blackmailing him and manipulating him with Domination.

Likewise, if I choose the option that gives me a friend point and Bret offers you a job at his garage, will I be locked out of any sex scenes with him that I would have gotten if I chose favor for favor?
No, nothing prevents you from extracting sexual favors from him in the future, or even having an affair. The option of sexual favors only makes it clear to him what his intentions are, leaving things clean.

If I tell him about Lindsey & the beach, considering I agreed to go with her & her friend & I'll be there, will that give me another chance to get with Bret on that day or will it work more to bring Lindsey & Bret together?
Great question, this will depend on your actions. If you want to bring them together, your dialogues must follow this logic, but if your intention is to have relationships with him, then avoid the two of them being together and stay with him as much as possible.

Also his brother? cousin? Adan is a cutie, I hope we can get with him in future.
Adan (Cousin) is a fan of Bret, who knows if you win over Bret you won't win over his cousin? Just a stray thought, hehe.

EDIT: Oh! I also got the bug where the gross bald man had my sister's picture and tried to get to her in the park, even though he gave it back to me after I beat him up on the train (the picture is still in my MC's inventory).
ill fix it.

And speaking of that scene, is there any way to get back to my sister before or during that event to help her out? During the scene where we go the the guard's office, I avoided peeking and chose 'leave' but literally was forced to peek on the officers (though I have no interest in doing so). Could we get an option to skip that whole scene by leaving immediately after talking to the guard captain and so be able to be there for our sister?
I really wanted to make this skippable, but it would be more content to add and I was already worried about the release time. Believe me, I plan to make this optional soon.
 
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greono

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Oh shit I did not know you had restarted this game, thought it was abandoned from years ago.
I wonder if you remember us talking about the sister on your patreon.



Have not tried this version yet, but man was the sister a cutie from the first game, too bad patreon got so pissy about how she looked.
The current one is better.
 
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Some_Dude?

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Sorry, guys, but I won't be able to please everyone. I'm here to tell a story, although the game's theme is pornographic, there is a really cool plot behind it. The game is too complex for me to create a "Perfect" reality. I try to bring the characters as close as I (a mere human) can to real people, they will come with their problems, loves, impulses, flaws, qualities and motivations. You can try to break it and mold it to your shape, but it will be (in my opinion) impossible to keep everyone under "restraints". So, those who cannot idealize this and accept it as it is, I ask you to open your heart and mind and try to understand the game as it is.

You can try to keep everyone under your control, but I won't guarantee that the game will be careful about that. There are characters and stories that are too complex and are fundamental for the plot to follow.

The game is not just about being NTR or not, the characters are following their lives and they already had lives before you arrived in the Capital. You can influence their lives, but they also influence your paths! If I told you that it is possible to make all the characters love you unconditionally, I would be lying, because there will be bad characters, antagonists, you can also relate to them, but putting your own integrity at risk.

Linsey hates cheating, which is why she dumped Bret. But your aunt won't become your toy overnight, she's a powerful woman and doesn't care about you feelings! (At least not for now).
I love what your going for keep at it, the story sounds like its gonna get amazing, also do you know when you will introduce the swapping gender again or is that still a little ways off before it comes?
 
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