VN Ren'Py UC8 [v0.2.5.1] [Dark Griffin Games]

[Jimayo]

Liked the update, it's interesting to get to know the characters better and the dialogues actually sound like they were written by someone who's interacted with other people in real life, which isn't something I can say about every game on here .

I don't think you can say that about many avns honestly(at least relatively speaking, as in percentage wise). The vast majority have just painful dialogue. Even some that overall good stories still have cringe dialogue, like you really think talk that way. Just painful.

Before I played avns I never thought writing dialogue was difficult. I mean you have conversations every day, write dialogue like you're actually conversing with someone, not that hard. But apparently it is hard for most people.

 

[Jimayo]

Nah, try this one...
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MC: You look nervous. Is it the scars? Wanna know how I got 'em?

 

[Kazanovaromeo]

Great update as usual, BUT

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[Grif1001]

Liked the update, it's interesting to get to know the characters better and the dialogues actually sound like they were written by someone who's interacted with other people in real life, which isn't something I can say about every game on here . My only complaints would be that the lightning/colors of the renders could be better and that, so far, the sex scenes are very short, don't really show much, that there's no real build up in the scene that leads to the sex and that they don't seem to have much impact.

Spoiler: Possible spoiler for Tink next update?

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Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next update.

As for the possible Tink spoiler....

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The script for Chapter 1 Episode 2 is 85% complete, and 100% planned out. There are 32 scenes in the next update which is almost half the number in the current episode, so it should take less time to complete than this one did.

 

[scrumbles]

Sorry if the question sounds retarded. These and Mike's other works are a reference to any actual fantasy/sci-fi author?

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[Grif1001]

Sorry if the question sounds retarded. These and Mike's other works are a reference to any actual fantasy/sci-fi author?

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No, These are completely made up book titles that I came up with based on the idea of the Steampunk world that Craterface and Nugget are based in...
The Craterface and Nugget Universe consists of the TV show's that are seen on the televisions in any scene with a TV in the background during the game.

Mike and Mary are in game representations of myself and my girlfriend. If I ever get the chance. I will turn Craterface and Nugget into... something. maybe a VN, maybe an actual animated show, but who knows. They are just another one of my creations that I have played with for years and decided to incorporate into the game because I didn't like the idea of TVs with blank screens.

And also, I thought all of those would make kick ass book/movie titles!

 

[Calz]

Hopefully some kind soul ports it to android at some point

 

[RoadWulf]

I think my worry concerning Kayla and the Daughter/LI split idea you have is that currently there is no better girl in the game than her and unless the blonde assistant manager pans out, there's no good LI I've seen be introduced. Certainly not other women at the theater who at a glance are considerably less attractive than Kayla. Maybe you have someone to introduce yet, maybe not, but I think that's going to be the problem for those who want Kayla to stay just the daughter.

There's no one else.

 

[Look-see]

didnt patreon make a rule that kid characters shouldn't show up in a adult VN regardless if they have content or not.

i feel like a dev recently mentioned that before and had to remove said characters.

edit: i remember now. that dev decided to abandon patreon and stick to subscribestar.

hopefully Patreon doesnt notice this game.

 

[J.R.]

Hopefully some kind soul ports it to android at some point

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[cxx]

didnt patreon make a rule that kid characters shouldn't show up in a adult VN regardless if they have content or not.

i feel like a dev recently mentioned that before and had to remove said characters.

edit: i remember now. that dev decided to abandon patreon and stick to subscribestar.

hopefully Patreon doesnt notice this game.

1. that was steam
2. patreon is ok (atm) if chars are said to be 18 or over, to what extent is unknown

 

[grahegri]

UC8-0.2.0.4

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[JenMistress]

And not only her own TV, but looks like she has her own show too.

 

[Grif1001]

And not only her own TV, but looks like she has her own show too.

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Both of the girls have smart TV's. It's an image on a flashdrive that is stuck in the TVs usb port and then selected to be displayed as a welcome home. He had Stacy set them up on the TV so that, as he told the girls in the truck, they would know their rooms when they found them.

 

[Orangepocalypse]

Really enjoying the game. Played it first time yesterday and the diner scene where MC and daughter meet is great. It did, however, leave me with one question.

Do they have Christmas in France?

I'd say best movie ever, but This is Spinal Tap is still my undisputed champion.

 

[Grif1001]

Really enjoying the game. Played it first time yesterday and the diner scene where MC and daughter meet is great. It did, however, leave me with one question.

Do they have Christmas in France?

"Chrisss-maaas! Christmas!"

 

[Orangepocalypse]

"Chrisss-maaas! Christmas!"

Gee, real sorry your mom blew up, Ricky.

 

[FatGiant]

Do they have Christmas in France?

Should I try to submit this to a subredit called: Things Americans Said ?

Feels like it could go quite high... Maybe not...

Peace

 

[cxx]

how does 1 even finds usb port on that big tv?

 

[sisco1986]

my only criticism for the game is the name lol

maybe we will have the first scene with the mc and the cinema crew in 2028 after the dev finish introducing the entire university campus, the US soccer team, 2 random submarine crews and the traveling circus trope that just arrived into town