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ooooh... Low gravity sex....
, could be very dangerous with the 'assets' at hand . motorboating head sized melons in zero G... - Thread starter 17MOONKEYS
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, could be very dangerous with the 'assets' at hand . motorboating head sized melons in zero G... 
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It's quite early for some decent criticism, since your VN is short for the time being. The plot is hilarious and this seems like a lighthearted fun game so far.
There isn't that much plot, yet, to criticize. So I'll talk about content. You already provided a huge list of possible future content. One advice, whatever you'll do, make it avoidable or skippable, because some fetishes like furry, sissification, futa/trans, NTR and many more might not be enjoyable for everyone.
Since the mc is drugged with SpermoGen and Aisha with MilkoGen, I thought immediately about future pregnancy content. But it's only on the "may be" list. I guess a lot of people had the same thought, so this should definitively be in the game. Then, will android sex bots become pregnant as well, maybe by an upgrade, the mc may find during his space adventure? Whatever, but also some other people might not enjoy preggo content, so again make it avoidable.
Unfortunately a "President Rump" was mentioned in Boobs City, former L.A. I don't see how this game might profit from political skits of any sort, especially if these aren't genuinely unique or fresh, but stale. Worst of all would be, if these were completely one-sided, if you really have to bring politics into your game. Since most likely you already have a personal political opinion, it's almost impossible to really stay neutral, which most likely will lead to very one-sided jokes, which will please one side, but alienate the other of the political spectrum. Do you really want that for your game?
Trump jokes becoming old and left leaning persons don't want to laugh about a senile puppet president Biden, who can't even finish a complete sentence, without strong medication. You see, there is a dilemma already, if you include a Trump caricature, but don't dish out against the other side of the political spectrum, too, which then might ruin the game experience for many.
As a developer I'd keep politics or political references out of my game. Otherwise you might alienate people, who otherwise might enjoy your game and support you at some point. I'd say, keep it lighthearted, hilarious and fun and leave politics out of your game. Just my honest advice, since you asked for criticism.
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I loved all the star trek references like the MC name and the ship.
it looks promising and I like the MC young like he is and hope you won't age him up.
Hopefully the game will have more content and animations.
it looks promising and I like the MC young like he is and hope you won't age him up.
Hopefully the game will have more content and animations.
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oh ... almost forgot: *.png = bad -> lossless *.jpg/webp = better
(settings of jpg/webp to 100% imagequality (lossless) - mostly the standart setting for jpg/webp is 90% (lossy quality))
Helps immense to keep the game smaller - better for you -> less time to upload ... and better for us -> less time to download^^
Without sacrificing noticable image quality
*.webp is usable in layered images like *.png - just in case you wanna use layered images
(settings of jpg/webp to 100% imagequality (lossless) - mostly the standart setting for jpg/webp is 90% (lossy quality))
Helps immense to keep the game smaller - better for you -> less time to upload ... and better for us -> less time to download^^
Without sacrificing noticable image quality
*.webp is usable in layered images like *.png - just in case you wanna use layered images
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I work on a project every single day, in the next update I want to add a lot of content and plot. This update is very small, I just fixed a lot of bugs.
- Sep 3, 2020
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Whatever you do, please dont give us blueballs. And preferably, please keep MC as the only male.
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REALLY!?!? makes you Gag?? but you're a SLOTH!This one is painful for me personally lol. I want to try it so bad... but unfortunately I'm afflicted with a personal disgust for hairy bushes, to the point where that single thing is a hard stop for me. Which is a shame, because everything else in it looks so hot!
Btw that is not me knocking bushes, or people who like them. To each their own. Different strokes and all that. People can each have their own individual and unique turn ons and turn offs, even if they might seem silly to others. And that just sadly happens to be one of my biggest personal offs, to the point where it actually makes me gag haha. But nonetheless I wanted to compliment the dev on everything else in the screenshots and wish them luck with their game. Cheers.
All Hairy like...but seriously, good words .
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i really like her hairy and thicc how we see more girls like that or at the very least keep the variety. (similar to my previous feedback)
This is only the second patch ive played of this game but please add more content. this isnt me whining that there isnt enough content but rather take some time and make a decent size patch. not sure if this is a regular thing for you development, if you intend is doing this for advertising or research as to what people want thats fine otherwise i personally will always prefer a dev that takes time to create enough content per release rather then 30 seconds of content per release.
i really like her hairy and thicc how we see more girls like that or at the very least keep the variety. (similar to my previous feedback)
This is only the second patch ive played of this game but please add more content. this isnt me whining that there isnt enough content but rather take some time and make a decent size patch. not sure if this is a regular thing for you development, if you intend is doing this for advertising or research as to what people want thats fine otherwise i personally will always prefer a dev that takes time to create enough content per release rather then 30 seconds of content per release.
I think you are right, I should reconsider this. Thank you for opening my eyes. I myself am very politicized and I should not bring this into the game.
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Some of these tags scare the shit out of me sissification, tentacles, traps? Too much dip for my chips.
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I mean blueballing.. u know teasing.. when you are so much hungry, but someone taking food just when it is getting near to the mouth..
I liked it, It's fresh and wide open for development.