VN Ren'Py UFO [Ch.3 v0.6.7] [17MOONKEYS]

[Deleted member 3994251]

I mean blueballing.. u know teasing.. when you are so much hungry, but someone taking food just when it is getting near to the mouth..

Got it

 

[RabidSloth]

It's quite early for some decent criticism, since your VN is short for the time being. The plot is hilarious and this seems like a lighthearted fun game so far.

There isn't that much plot, yet, to criticize. So I'll talk about content. You already provided a huge list of possible future content. One advice, whatever you'll do, make it avoidable or skippable, because some fetishes like furry, sissification, futa/trans, NTR and many more might not be enjoyable for everyone.

Since the mc is drugged with SpermoGen and Aisha with MilkoGen, I thought immediately about future pregnancy content. But it's only on the "may be" list. I guess a lot of people had the same thought, so this should definitively be in the game. Then, will android sex bots become pregnant as well, maybe by an upgrade, the mc may find during his space adventure? Whatever, but also some other people might not enjoy preggo content, so again make it avoidable.

Unfortunately a "President Rump" was mentioned in Boobs City, former L.A. I don't see how this game might profit from political skits of any sort, especially if these aren't genuinely unique or fresh, but stale. Worst of all would be, if these were completely one-sided, if you really have to bring politics into your game. Since most likely you already have a personal political opinion, it's almost impossible to really stay neutral, which most likely will lead to very one-sided jokes, which will please one side, but alienate the other of the political spectrum. Do you really want that for your game?

Trump jokes becoming old and left leaning persons don't want to laugh about a senile puppet president Biden, who can't even finish a complete sentence, without strong medication. You see, there is a dilemma already, if you include a Trump caricature, but don't dish out against the other side of the political spectrum, too, which then might ruin the game experience for many.

As a developer I'd keep politics or political references out of my game. Otherwise you might alienate people, who otherwise might enjoy your game and support you at some point. I'd say, keep it lighthearted, hilarious and fun and leave politics out of your game. Just my honest advice, since you asked for criticism.

I completely agree with this personally. It's crazy to me how many porn games I've played this past year where the dev felt compelled to insert their political commentary into it. I mean it is their game. They can do whatever they want with it. Don't like it, don't play it etc. But it does get exhausting as a player when I'm just trying to take a break and fap for gods' sake and I still can't get away from hearing about Trump, or climate change, or "libtards vs republicunts", or "Liberal/Conservative Tears" coffee mugs, or several dozen different types of "-isms", etc. for more than 5 minutes.

 

[Deleted member 3994251]

But it does get exhausting as a player when I'm just trying to take a break and fap for gods' sake and I still just can't get away from hearing about Trump, or climate change, or "libtards vs republicunts", or "Liberal/Conservative Tears" coffee mugs, or several dozen different types of "-isms", etc. for more than 5 minutes.

It's really funny, I had a good laugh, thanks! There will be no politics in this game!

 

[I_Only_Support_Real_Onez]

No criticism plotwise/storywise/ or typos from me. My only criticism is that its almost half a GB but only like 10 minutes long. Im not a dev or anything but it seems too big for that little amount of game. Other than that Im enjoying it. Aisha is thick as fuk and the humor so far is good.

 

[RabidSloth]

It's really funny, I had a good laugh, thanks! There will be no politics in this game!

Bless you for that lol. It almost makes me want to try to endure that bush.

...almost

 

[jems242]

New content?

 

[sunqian3000]

Please give us VN and Big Tits Milf , Don't give Sandbox and Loli to us .
Visuals and game experience are important , The story doesn't matter .

 

[Deleted member 3994251]

New content?

A little, mostly bug fixes

 

[Junior jack]

Are there any animations?
game looks cool

 

[Deleted member 3994251]

Bless you for that lol. It almost makes me want to try to endure that bush.

...almost

Please, try

 

[Deleted member 3994251]

Sandbox and Loli

I dont like it to

 

[RabidSloth]

I know this is a minority opinion, but I'll still give it: I actually like sandbox, when it's implemented well (ie minimal grind, and clear hints on what to do next to advance). I like the extra feeling of interactivity, freeroam, repeatable sex scenes, etc.

 

[Deleted member 3994251]

Are there any animations?

Unfortunately there is no animation.

 

[Lysergic]

Its just expectations of UFOs doing UFO things were raised. But it seems to be mostly vanilla and robot girls if Im understanding?

Thats totally fine it just seems like the UFO part isnt adding to the game. Maybe add some abducting cows for food just for thematic value? Edit Or maybe low gravity sex.

I saw an object flying and to the MC it was initially unidentified so I'd say that the the title is fine.

 

[RabidSloth]

Please, try

I can't, my dude . I'd like to. But you don't understand lol. I wasn't exaggerating when I said it makes me gag. I literally become nauseous at the sight of it . Your game looks to me like just a sad and unfortunate example of when you come across a game that seems to press all of the right buttons for a variety of your kinks... except for one thing... but that one thing just happens to be a deal-breaker for you personally lol.

 

[Seewolf]

This one is painful for me personally lol. I want to try it so bad... but unfortunately I'm afflicted with a personal disgust for hairy bushes, to the point where that single thing is a hard stop for me. Which is a shame, because everything else in it looks so hot!

Btw that is not me knocking bushes, or people who like them. To each their own. Different strokes and all that. People can each have their own individual and unique turn ons and turn offs, even if they might seem silly to others. And that just sadly happens to be one of my biggest personal offs, to the point where it actually makes me gag haha. But nonetheless I wanted to compliment the dev on everything else in the screenshots and wish them luck with their game. Cheers.

There are people who enjoy pubic hair and don't like completely shaved and the other way around. To each his own, I really agree. The solution to this would be some kind of customization option. It means more work for the dev of course, to include one version of every scene with and one without pubic hair. Some devs do that and I love it, when the player can decide which version he/she prefers. But it means some more work for the dev of course, don't know how much, though and if it's worth it. But most people do enjoy some customization of course.

 

[Lysergic]

I know this is a minority opinion, but I'll still give it: I actually like sandbox, when it's implemented well (ie minimal grind, and clear hints on what to do next to advance). I like the extra feeling of interactivity, freeroam, repeatable sex scenes, etc.

The problem is that from my experience you get maybe 2 out of every 10 sandboxes that would fit your definition of "implemented well"


I can relate to you almost 100% about the pubic hair bit, I'm not quite so averse to it in a game or in porn but I am pretty strongly against it's inclusion if given the choice.

 

[RabidSloth]

The problem is that from my experience you get maybe 2 out of every 10 sandboxes that would fit your definition of "implemented well"

I can't say I disagree with you lol. It does suck when it's a case of "Okay, to advance just repeat this action 50 times in order to earn enough money." Or "Go through this boring handjob scene that you don't care about and just want to get through, that has the exact same dialogue every time, 10 times to build up enough "Lust" or "Affection" in order to advance to-- etc."

 

[Lysergic]

I can't say I disagree with you lol. It does suck when it's a case of "Okay, to advance just repeat this action 50 times in order to earn enough money." Or "Go through this boring handjob scene that you don't care about and just want to get through, that has the exact same dialogue every time, 10 times to build up enough "Lust" or "Affection" in order to advance to-- etc."

Don't forget the classic, "There's more content for you to see but you get no assistance or even a hint of what it could be. Here's a map and a handful of variables, figure out how to trigger it yourself."

 

[RabidSloth]

I can relate to you almost 100% about the pubic hair bit, I'm not quite so averse to it in a game or in porn but I am pretty strongly against it's inclusion if given the choice.

Believe me. I wish I wasn't

But I really wouldn't word it as I'm "against its inclusion" though. Because I'm sure that for hairy-lovers it's great. And I'm glad for them at least. But there's nothing that someone who keeps tarantulas as pets could ever say to me that would make me any less of an extreme arachnophobic . It just is what it is unfortunately (for me lol).