VN Ren'Py UFO [Ch.4 v0.7.8] [17MOONKEYS]

[TheCragger]

My two cents of the newish stuff.

1. I liked Alexandra's body, very hot.
2. The dark skinned bot hot, would take on ship.
3. Alice, not my kind of thing but I thank you very much for the option to avoid it.
4. Ivan, unexpected and cool
5. What Ivan tells you about the Uterus is cool, that is makes monsters to is interesting if it makes female monsters.
6. Moolinda, I like more then Layla but her proportions are a bit over the top and lose the natural body shape feel all the other greats like Aisha, Alexandra, Pamela, Barbie, dark skinned girl have.

 

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[IXL]

Not for me... but thanks.

 

[ShiroOkami2]

People talking about realism of a futa's dick...in a game that has monster girls, paranormal and spaceships? beginning to think when AH stated ppl believed JD had scissors for hands she was right. I dont think people were barking at dev, more like giving constructive criticism and voicing the opinions due to the futa tag appearing with hints (alot here would not have read the novel mentioned in another post or even know about it) at most they suggested/asked it be optional and dev did as for honest feed back

Though I am out for now, might check back later and see what going on since I do like the models (especially hairy goodness)...the "- Multiple Penetration [Sexual penetration involving 2+ penis/toys into multiple holes or same holes.]" Is something I had not noticed before, and I dont like sharing LI's or any partner even one time deals. Wish Dev all the best

 

[Durruti2000]

so is there forced futa content? do the women have sex with other women/futa without choice?

Well yes but no, it's like those games were is avoidable but it happens because I said no, there was a weird transition and magically she knows something is off and the MC was naked...

 

[DWTD]

So shota and incest were removed (or reworked?), but futa added. Interesting change of direction. Will try game when its closer to finish, but looking at votes I consider it's one of the best right now.

 

[Buster65]

Sooo... Since I don't like to give my opinion without knowing what I'm talking about, just based on prejudices or false premises, I downloaded and played the game. Ok... Here is my "honest feedback", as requested by 17MOONKEYS.
First - The aesthetics of the game is very good. (If you like thick and voluptuous women, this is your place! And mine too!)
Second - The story... well... There is not much to analyze. It's a SCI-FI fantasy (Except for a couple of incoherent details. For example, if the crew of the rescue ship are "robots" or androids... Why is the captain drinking coffee? Or... why the Captain's assistant does yoga? Or what do they need beds for? Either way, it's just details) Oh! On a more personal note, I would have liked Alfred, the old robot, to have been more of a C3PO style.
Third (I have read several users complaining about the aspect of the MC) I must say that it is not to my liking either. (Gives me a lot of "Shotacon" vibe and it's not my thing) Change the "young adult", with the appearance of a kid, to a real young adult and the game will be really fantastic.
And finally, thanks for the unexpected "Blade Runner" reference in the tunnel sequence.
Peace and good luck!

 

[The game master]

I want more of milf's milk coming from big busty tits of dark goddess mom

 

[Crimson Fire]

Feedback for the game as requested by the dev...

These are in general things I think make a good porn game you might already do these things but it is good to have a list of things people want.

1) Animate your sex scenes and make each loop automatically repeat until the player advances. Let the player control when a loop stops or transitions to the next animation.

2) Sex scenes should include multiple positions with multiple angles. Too many games make sex scenes too quick and boring because they don't show multiple positions and angles. This is a general rule, if a couple are having a clothed quickie in a changing room maybe multiple positions isn't realistic but multiple angles would be.

3) If you want a slow burn for a character then include other characters that don't. having characters that will sleep with the character at different rates feels more organic. And helps when you have multiple motivations and the story mapped out...

4) Map out your story before you do a release/chapter. Know where the story is currently and where it is going before hand by outlining in point form where the story is planned to go. The story will be better written if it isn't written in spits and spurts but has a clear direction.

5) Have the love interests with different motivations for wanting the MC. Some character can overlap for sure but it multiple characters have a different motivation than I am girl he has large cock must fuck. You'll have better sex scenes and better story because you anchor their desire to something and it isn't the same for all characters.

6) REMOVE sex progression from your story. No Adult Women goes i wont have sex with you but I'll give you a hand job and then next time says I 'll relent a tiny bit and give you a boodjob this time, next time a blowjob and so on. Once a women decides she will do sexual acts with you she has sex. Adults don't behave like teenagers in movies. (No one does)

7) Don't mix harem with NTR. Just don't. If you want NTR then make a NTR game if you want Harem make a harem game don't piss off both fans by trying to merge mutually exclusive fetishes. If you like both make two separate games dedicated to each one.

8) Have a regular release schedule that is sustainable. Don't burn yourself out working non stop getting in lots of releases but that can't be sustained. Firstly you'll get sick of the game and burn out and drop it. You may not think so but everyone burns out if they work too hard. Second once you have established a rate of release people will expect it and be upset when it invariably must slow down. Or if you release too infrequently people will lose interest and get upset at the pace of the game.

9) Try to have sex in every release, not in reality some releases this might not work especially if you are planning out your story but make it the norm not the exception. People play these games to get off so give them sex. If I want story i play actual games not porn games. A good story is a awesome bonus in a porn game but not why people support a dev or play the game.

10) Be transparent about what you want to make in terms of fetishes and don't promise something you don't really like making. Also if real life is kicking your ass and you have to delay a release be upfront about things but don't overshare. No one wants your sob story. Explain you have either personal, or work related issues that will forestall a release. Try to be accurate about the time frame and aim to make the new release date. If you know you can't make it again be upfront and say so as soon as you know or suspect and then give an updated release date that you should do everything in your power to make OR say the game is on hold and update people every month. (Hopefully not milking their subs)

 

[BaasB]

Could you please give me some honest feedback?

Why ask whether, you want to skip the futa content, when her thick cock is already in your face.

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[chrisman11335]

I LOVE THE FUTA STUFF ADDED <3

 

[Deleted member 5108550]

ooh the Ladies in the this game is freaking Hot ! Hotter than most games i have seen.

 

[Freki.g]

Feedback for the game as requested by the dev...

These are in general things I think make a good porn game you might already do these things but it is good to have a list of things people want.

1) Animate your sex scenes and make each loop automatically repeat until the player advances. Let the player control when a loop stops or transitions to the next animation.

2) Sex scenes should include multiple positions with multiple angles. Too many games make sex scenes too quick and boring because they don't show multiple positions and angles. This is a general rule, if a couple are having a clothed quickie in a changing room maybe multiple positions isn't realistic but multiple angles would be.

3) If you want a slow burn for a character then include other characters that don't. having characters that will sleep with the character at different rates feels more organic. And helps when you have multiple motivations and the story mapped out...

4) Map out your story before you do a release/chapter. Know where the story is currently and where it is going before hand by outlining in point form where the story is planned to go. The story will be better written if it isn't written in spits and spurts but has a clear direction.

5) Have the love interests with different motivations for wanting the MC. Some character can overlap for sure but it multiple characters have a different motivation than I am girl he has large cock must fuck. You'll have better sex scenes and better story because you anchor their desire to something and it isn't the same for all characters.

6) REMOVE sex progression from your story. No Adult Women goes i wont have sex with you but I'll give you a hand job and then next time says I 'll relent a tiny bit and give you a boodjob this time, next time a blowjob and so on. Once a women decides she will do sexual acts with you she has sex. Adults don't behave like teenagers in movies. (No one does)

7) Don't mix harem with NTR. Just don't. If you want NTR then make a NTR game if you want Harem make a harem game don't piss off both fans by trying to merge mutually exclusive fetishes. If you like both make two separate games dedicated to each one.

8) Have a regular release schedule that is sustainable. Don't burn yourself out working non stop getting in lots of releases but that can't be sustained. Firstly you'll get sick of the game and burn out and drop it. You may not think so but everyone burns out if they work too hard. Second once you have established a rate of release people will expect it and be upset when it invariably must slow down. Or if you release too infrequently people will lose interest and get upset at the pace of the game.

9) Try to have sex in every release, not in reality some releases this might not work especially if you are planning out your story but make it the norm not the exception. People play these games to get off so give them sex. If I want story i play actual games not porn games. A good story is a awesome bonus in a porn game but not why people support a dev or play the game.

10) Be transparent about what you want to make in terms of fetishes and don't promise something you don't really like making. Also if real life is kicking your ass and you have to delay a release be upfront about things but don't overshare. No one wants your sob story. Explain you have either personal, or work related issues that will forestall a release. Try to be accurate about the time frame and aim to make the new release date. If you know you can't make it again be upfront and say so as soon as you know or suspect and then give an updated release date that you should do everything in your power to make OR say the game is on hold and update people every month. (Hopefully not milking their subs)

Obviously it is so, you have listed the main points for the realization of an enjoyable successful game and also those that allow you to gain the trust of the supporters, unfortunately, the professionals in this sector are rare and instead there are many who improvise here with the hope that they will be able to learn the trade at the expense of supporters and many good projects start well and with good intentions but, more and more often they end up in oblivion or manage to involve a hopeful public that finances them for years unfinished projects.

I do not know the fate of this project started well (today it begins to raise doubts) but it will not take long to find out and I hope the project, for how it started, can achieve maximum success with the utmost satisfaction of those who supported it above all the fronts.

 

[jhustrue]

How are you even going to enforce the banner thing? Are you gonna make people come message you and wait for you to respond every update? How they gonna know about the update unless they see it on the latest updates or on your patreon? Better yet, are you gonna take the time to send out the update to every single person that does it? That really doesn't sound like a good time to me... It's a decent idea at first glance but I don't really think it's going to work out for you.

 

[Master of Puppets]

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[OddityOne]

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It Will Be:

- Anal Sex [Penetrating the anus, (sex toys, tentacles, etc).]
- Sex Toys [Any kind of toy that is used for sexual purposes.]
- Interracial [Sex act between 2 or more people of different races.]
- Lesbian [Sex act between two or more females.]
- Male Domination [Used when a character submits to a male character via domination.]
- Masturbation [Self-pleasuring by hand or with toys.]
- Titfuck [The act of thrusting a penis (or similar object) in between breasts.]
- Transformation [A sequence showing a physical, biological change of some kind.]
- Virgin [Sex act involving virgins and the loss of virginity.]
- Female domination [Used when a character submits to a female character via domination.]
- Harem [1 person being courted by at least 3 others, all engaging in consensual sex simultaneously.]
- Groping [Sex act involving groping anothers body.]
- Group sex [Sex act involving 3 or more people.]
- Pregnancy [The act of impregnating a woman or having sex with a pregnant one.]
- Animated [Used in combination with 2DCG/3DCG/Real Porn when a CG is animated.]
- Spanking [Spanking someone's butt as torture or for sexual pleasure.]
- Multiple Penetration [Sexual penetration involving 2+ penis/toys into multiple holes or same holes.]

Your Ideas (I'll think about it):

- Corruption: My imagination of Aisha being corrupted into a exhibitionist sex nanny/maid/etc. makes this appealing.
- What about netori? When the MC steals someone elses girl
- Include in the female domination: facesitting and forced orgasm
- Maybe low gravity sex.
- If you add a character with small boobs but a curvy and thicc bottom, I think that would please everyone. (Look at "AJ Applegate" for reference).
- So I could see Aisha for example scolding the MC for cursing. (F words)
- I would also wish to see a scene where the MC is milking Aisha while she give him a hand job.
- Cumplay / Cum Addiction for the females is also a popular theme you did not touch yet.
- Can u add milk play or lactation content with the MC and futa/trans?

if you are goiung to integrate that many fetishes, most people will have both turn On & turn Offs in the game. a system to turn off/avoid fetishes may be advisable. the "simpler" scene skip option, or the better but much more work of "alternate scenes". best system i've seen for the second a fetish option window during game setup so the alternate narrative is seamless.
i certainly see bot turn ons & turn off's in that list, and would prefer a way to skip the off's at a minimum.

 

[JapanFreak]

how many times do you need to remake the beginning of the game until you are satisfied ?

 

[Segamegadrive01]

0.4 is very ineresting)

 

[AlexTorch]

Holy shit, this was funny as hell...

Good update, but now there is more questions than answers...is the sdf the bad guys, moolinda will join us, what happened with barbie, are we going to have any sex, so many questions.

 

[KurtisK2007]

just like the futa said IM IN LOVE wish i can has more >///<