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Hey SBB, I got kinda of idea and I thought I shoot it by you and see what you think. How about if Michael's father or mother came to visit and stayed for a few days and in that time, Jen gets very friendly with Mike's parent. Mike is working late so they have plenty of time to get to know each other and quickly it becomes intimate, due to Jen's morals on a fast decline. It could also be Mike's brother or sister who visit. Same idea. It's not incest, but, it's close. Of course, all this is kept from Mike, wouldn't want to blow his mind about his family. Just an idea, SBG. (Now that Sarge got a piece of Jen, would like to see him making out with Jen while he fucks her, like lovers)
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now that undercover is done, I’m curious what the dev next game will be about. I would love for him to go back to misfits but I doubt he’ll want to go backwards
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The dev needs a better PC to render...Yes, the man has the skills to make a great corruption story, more intricated, more arousing.
His muse is Amy from TTDOC, I hope to see her now as a wife, married with a good honest man.
And do you know what happens, then...
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I think I'm close to the end of this version, so SBG, let's examine what has transpired.
The cartel boys, Pablo and Estevan (wow, how cheeky can you get, lol), get to double-fuck Jen, but get blown away (in a bad way), before they can double-cream her holes. Wish we could have seen that.
An observation, Trina and Jen have the sexiest skinny legs. (oh, how I love skinny legs) I think Jen's hair should be a lot redder, it look too dull (use my avatar as an example), almost grey.
I'm hoping that at the bar celebration, the Chief and then the Lt., get a chance to sneek Jen into the restroom and get their chance to fuck her. The other cops, run interference for them by keeping Mike occupied, by talking to him or having the waitress keep him to busy to notice that she is missing.
When they get home Mike unbeknowning gets "sloopy whatevers", and even eats her out before fucking. He's too drunk to notice the change in flavor.
In the end they both had a wonderful night and Jen is even more sluttier than even and loving it.
Just wishful thinking, SBG.
The cartel boys, Pablo and Estevan (wow, how cheeky can you get, lol), get to double-fuck Jen, but get blown away (in a bad way), before they can double-cream her holes. Wish we could have seen that.
An observation, Trina and Jen have the sexiest skinny legs. (oh, how I love skinny legs) I think Jen's hair should be a lot redder, it look too dull (use my avatar as an example), almost grey.
I'm hoping that at the bar celebration, the Chief and then the Lt., get a chance to sneek Jen into the restroom and get their chance to fuck her. The other cops, run interference for them by keeping Mike occupied, by talking to him or having the waitress keep him to busy to notice that she is missing.
When they get home Mike unbeknowning gets "sloopy whatevers", and even eats her out before fucking. He's too drunk to notice the change in flavor.
In the end they both had a wonderful night and Jen is even more sluttier than even and loving it.
Just wishful thinking, SBG.
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Shit!!! I just saw that this game is complete, dag-nabbit!!!!
Man, I sure hope there is a sequeal.
BRILLIANT ENDING!!! THANKS, MATE!!! Turns out Mike and Jen are the perfect couple. PLEASE BRING THE SLUT/WHORE DETECTIVE SERGEANT AND HER CUCKOLD MIKEY BACK!!!!
Man, I sure hope there is a sequeal.
BRILLIANT ENDING!!! THANKS, MATE!!! Turns out Mike and Jen are the perfect couple. PLEASE BRING THE SLUT/WHORE DETECTIVE SERGEANT AND HER CUCKOLD MIKEY BACK!!!!
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great story and renders sad to see it end ......but well done i enjoyed it immensely
I will be watching for your next one ......
I will be watching for your next one ......
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yeah poor Liam but every time she tried he was fucking another girl, so its not like she left him with blue balls.
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Hate for beautyful girls ?
A real girl never will fuck with Scoppino. Ron Jeremy without porn probably will be an incel.
Let us not discriminate old fatass frog faces, they too need some love.
But that's what hot about that. An old and ugly man with power taking advantage of women.
It's the power play here not the physique of the characters.
how annoying it is...
“to evaluate a game write a review on it, at least 200 letters”... ok, I wrote it... “your review is inappropriate and we've fucking deleted it, read the rules on how to write reviews”... just fucking awesome... I was made to waste my time writing to just rate the game and they just throw it in the trash... and I can't rate this game anymore...
and it would be okay if this system worked fine... but inappropriate 5 star “reviews” no one deletes...
“to evaluate a game write a review on it, at least 200 letters”... ok, I wrote it... “your review is inappropriate and we've fucking deleted it, read the rules on how to write reviews”... just fucking awesome... I was made to waste my time writing to just rate the game and they just throw it in the trash... and I can't rate this game anymore...
and it would be okay if this system worked fine... but inappropriate 5 star “reviews” no one deletes...
“5/5 just for the update pacing and the delivery of a story in a space of time that is ACTUAL reasonable. Unlike about 75% of these Ren'Py Patreon Developers who make snails look quick. Thanks Slow Burn and good luck with future projects. I enjoyed it a lot”
That's a good, appropriate review, isn't it???
This nonsense makes game ratings just useless...
Greetings to whoever came up with this and those who abuse their position...
This nonsense makes game ratings just useless...
Greetings to whoever came up with this and those who abuse their position...
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I beg to differ. It's bigger temptation and harder to resist a bad man who's attractive. Andrew Tate had more "willing" victims than Harvey Weinstein.
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Yep. And lot of men top are attracted from girl who kick their balls. Probably a kind of submission ? Masochism ?
NTR too is a kind of masochism ?
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yeah i know there is a format for reviews .... when i first tried to review games I didn't follow the format either and they deleted my review with a shitty note like you got .... it took me a while before i got it down too i think i got about 3 shitty notes and a 3 month suspension of ability to post a review at all
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I don't follow anything of this, but I got two reviews deleted because I was an asshole. But you can look at my reviews, only the last one that I put some effort into. The thing is, you need to talk about your in-game experience and not just sugarcoat it or go full butthurt.