VN Ren'Py Abandoned Unexpected Journey [Ep. 2 v0.2] [SolidCoffee]

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TiffanyMonroe

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does that mean no wincest?

It would be nice to know planned tags and say if the fetishes are avoidable (they don't happen according to player choices), skipable (they happen but the player doesn't see the scene) or forced by plot, it.


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Anyways,good luck.
So naturally the mc is a little bitch? Is he also a midget with a big dick? :unsure:
 

Scotsman1989

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Nov 10, 2018
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All i can say from trying this game is that, IT HAS SWEET POTENTIAL!!! I'm looking forward to see what happens in the future.
 

Mister_M

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Apr 2, 2018
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Engrish is strong here, humor is hit-or-miss, but what's most unfortunate is that it has at least one unavoidable sex scene so I'm out. Renders are good though and you can see there's been some work put into it.
 

Call of Booty

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What is with new releases and micro fonts lately?? Do devs see that at all? Not a good way to sell the product,honestly
 

Juv3

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Once again MC seems to be a midget loser
Most of the developers here seem to like losers or is it their experiences or their way of thinking? or they can't see it?
The same old story with the dom Bitch sister and the bully
He fell with one punch and they laughed at him
And MC Seems selfish too
He abandons his mother to live alone
And he is delusional still thinks he's strong only in his mind
I don't feel good about the game
wat is the planned tags
And do the choices it matters Or maybe it's an illusion? And can you avoid some fetishes
 

Old Man Al

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Jan 18, 2022
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Hard to rate yet. It is not really bad, just not very... unique and the implementation could be better.

In more detail:

Clunky english. Many sentences are missing words - like "Alexis gave me phone number.". Some sencentes sound strange, maybe they are english translations of turkish (I guess that is were the dev comes from) sayings that simply do not work in other languages. Plus typos, most feeling just like careless mistakes - for example Jacob is called Jakob by Michael. The dev should let someone proofread who actually speaks english.


Models are not too bad, a bit grainy maybe (gets better after some time), but:
Alexis, the cheerleader looks like 30, Mia the nurse looks like 12. Strange choice for using those models (speaking about faces mostly) for those roles.
Some facial expressions are a bit strange too sometimes.
But at least the models are not of the type you see everywhere else. So that is plus.
I just don't find any girl really attractive, even the "most beautiful girl the MC ever saw" is a good average in my book. If you think of F95 as a porn games site, this is amateur porn level, optic wise.

The story is as stereotype as they come on F95.
New school. Check.
Moving in with step-mom. Check.
Bitchy step-sister. Check.
You walk in on her being in the shower. Check.
School bullies pick on him. Check.
Everyone with a vagina (and Henry, no homo - I hope) are after his dick. Some sooner, some later. Check.
Father lives... oh ok, that is kind of original.

Music is there and fitting most of the time.

The MC right now, is a victim. Getting pushed around, but at least he is not whining about it all day.


Could get better in future updates, I really hope so. It is not completly hopeless.
 

LineageL2ad

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May 5, 2021
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Fonts too small on mac 11' air( I've played a lot of games here, 95% of them don't have similar problem.
It will be good to make fonts options in settings)
Saves also buggy - when you try to save, nothing happens before you press enter.
Also sometimes text unreadable on bright background.
For example: Снимок экрана 2022-08-07 в 01.03.49.png
 

Light86

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the font is too small even if you change it to DejaVu sans
its still small and i had to scale it up that resulted in names being too big!
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d_pedestrian

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Jul 18, 2020
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even cuddling and handholding virginity
Dude....cuddling and handholding virginity? Seriously? Can you even hear yourself?

I like virgins too but you're taking it too far. I'm seriously concerned about you. It's not normal to be this possessive.

For fuck sake i never thought I'll read handholding virginity when I woke up this morning.
 
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cebs

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Made a slight change on the text size...

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Just drop scripts.rpa inside game folder and replace it
 
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Mikilande

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May 21, 2018
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This game is promising, but it is difficult to read the dialogues, because the writing is too small and no contrast for certain passages (white on white background) and the font is not the right one for this kind of game!
 

E_nigma

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Dude....cuddling and handholding virginity? Seriously? Can you even hear yourself?

I like virgins too but you're taking it too far. I'm seriously concerned about you. It's not normal to be this possessive.

For fuck sake i never thought I'll read handholding virginity when I woke up this morning.
pretty sure that dudes a troll, he pops into a lot of threads with that same stuff

that said I could definitely go for some future tag clarification myself
 

Byczer

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Feb 1, 2020
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Not bad for a start. we'll have dom/sub content I guess with linda, camgirl stuff with alexis, romance with ginger, milf stepmother and bunch of good looking school girls and teacher. The conversations could be a little more interesting I got bored while reading it. Good luck with your game bro.
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