VN Ren'Py Unexpected Opportunity [Ch. 6] [Sweetychily]

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(To be honest, if you ask me, I cannot say that he is very sympathetic at the moment.) This changes as the game progresses. So we also want to show character development.

The problem is that year passed and he is still shy, undecisive, pushover loser as he was at the beginning. Girls already liked and desired him as he was, without need to become better version of himself, grew some balls, confidence, charisma etc. anchoring with this, that its how you should be in conquering woman hearts. Here is some hard to swallow pills, being this way as this mc, will never get you to be truly liked, loved or respected by anyone. I learned the hardway many years ago this simple true and get cringe every time when I see that in games for adults this unmature and childish mc's personality and pathetic behavior somehow gets desired effect with girls.

P.S. And remove tag "handjob" if remade version of the game doesnt have it.

 

[Sweetychily]

The problem is that year passed and he is still shy, undecisive, pushover loser as he was at the beginning. Girls already liked and desired him as he was, without need to become better version of himself, grew some balls, confidence, charisma etc. anchoring with this, that its how you should be in conquering woman hearts. Here is some hard to swallow pills, being this way as this mc, will never get you to be truly liked, loved or respected by anyone. I learned the hardway many years ago this simple true and get cringe every time when I see that in games for adults this unmature and childish mc's personality and pathetic behavior somehow gets desired effect with girls.

P.S. And remove tag "handjob" if remade version of the game doesnt have it.

You interpret what a man should be like from your own perspective. (I'm more or less of the same opinion as you. ) I think it may not be right sometimes to interpret something based on your own experiences. Different lives can reveal different realities with different characters.
But I want you to know that we take your opinions into consideration as far as we can.

 

[Larry2000]

The problem is that year passed and he is still shy, undecisive, pushover loser as he was at the beginning. Girls already liked and desired him as he was, without need to become better version of himself, grew some balls, confidence, charisma etc. anchoring with this, that its how you should be in conquering woman hearts. Here is some hard to swallow pills, being this way as this mc, will never get you to be truly liked, loved or respected by anyone. I learned the hardway many years ago this simple true and get cringe every time when I see that in games for adults this unmature and childish mc's personality and pathetic behavior somehow gets desired effect with girls.

P.S. And remove tag "handjob" if remade version of the game doesnt have it.

I'm gonna respond directly cause you are saying that a year has passed right? A year has only passed in our world. It's only been a total of about a month and a week that's passed since MC met Lisa.

As I said, ad nauseam, this isn't that kind of game where MC is conquering ladies. He's not interested in that at this point in the narrative. That's the point of this beginning. At the end of Chapter 7, it opens up to what is possible for him.

I'll say that I completely disagree with your assessment that he's "unmature" and childish and pathetic. Once again, he's not trying to earn any favor from them, so you are starting under a false assumption. Nothing he's done is childish, no way he's acting has been pathetic (except maybe to himself) and he has issues, so he will act a way that isn't the best way forward. That's why people have to grow.

Clearly you like our game enough to continue being here, so I'll stop saying this game isn't for you. Maybe we'll see you on patreon eventually. Until then:

I wish you a nice day!

 

[MixQQ]

The problem is that year passed and he is still shy, undecisive, pushover loser as he was at the beginning. Girls already liked and desired him as he was, without need to become better version of himself, grew some balls, confidence, charisma etc. anchoring with this, that its how you should be in conquering woman hearts. Here is some hard to swallow pills, being this way as this mc, will never get you to be truly liked, loved or respected by anyone.

i agree, if most of guys on this planet would be like him then.. well.. population of lesbians would drastically increase

 

[Nezron]

" Also, rightfully so, there is no obvious sexual content in the game yet. Some people find this annoying. (Maybe it burns slower than other slowburn games. Trust our writer’s experience in these matters. It will be worth it.) "

I find this comment to be somewhat frustrating in a way. Like some singer in a competition that does not do well and says "if you give me another chance I will do better"... the audition was the chance.....

This game is an Adult Visual Novel... but there is no "Adult" content. I am not mad about it, and I don't mind some slow burn with main characters. But there could have been some side girls the MC could fuck. Myself it is not even about the lack of sex, it is just a totally unrelatable MC... he seems to be good looking and in good shape, but his personality is that of a virgin wimp...

now we know he is not a virgin because he had a girlfriend that he thinks cheated on him... well maybe he is still a virgin... anyway can't relate to that kind of MC. This is kind of like all the woke disney movies.... women are great... men a losers.

anyway something to think about. peace

 

[Nezron]

I'm gonna respond directly cause you are saying that a year has passed right? A year has only passed in our world. It's only been a total of about a month and a week that's passed since MC met Lisa.

As I said, ad nauseam, this isn't that kind of game where MC is conquering ladies. He's not interested in that at this point in the narrative. That's the point of this beginning. At the end of Chapter 7, it opens up to what is possible for him.

I'll say that I completely disagree with your assessment that he's "unmature" and childish and pathetic. Once again, he's not trying to earn any favor from them, so you are starting under a false assumption. Nothing he's done is childish, no way he's acting has been pathetic (except maybe to himself) and he has issues, so he will act a way that isn't the best way forward. That's why people have to grow.

Clearly you like our game enough to continue being here, so I'll stop saying this game isn't for you. Maybe we'll see you on patreon eventually. Until then:

I wish you a nice day!

I do have a question... I can see the MC having some relationships with some of the MILF's.... But I don't see how anything can happen with Lisa... without making her a cheater, or her husband a cuck.... and from how you have made the MC, I don't think he would like to be with a cheater, or even cuck the old man....

I guess you can have the old man die... then the whole comfort the widow thing would be open....
And about that only a month and a week thing... when I was the MC's age that would have been an eternity to not be fucking someone.... and he is around all these hot girls all the time???

 

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I'm gonna respond directly cause you are saying that a year has passed right? A year has only passed in our world. It's only been a total of about a month and a week that's passed since MC met Lisa.

I never said anything about ingame time, only about what player saw in game about passed year of development.

As I said, ad nauseam, this isn't that kind of game where MC is conquering ladies. He's not interested in that at this point in the narrative. That's the point of this beginning. At the end of Chapter 7, it opens up to what is possible for him.

Harem game where player watches mc who isnt pursue, conquer or atleast interested in womans and sex throughout whole year and 6 chaps, and MAYBE he will behave as player anticipate only in future chaps, well thats just sad.

I'll say that I completely disagree with your assessment that he's "unmature" and childish and pathetic.

Dude, special for you) A little bit of examples, too lazy to actually bulldoze whole script, but I definetely remember way more than this.

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Once again, he's not trying to earn any favor from them, so you are starting under a false assumption.

I get story right, its exactly why story cringe and boring. Player for 6 chapters just look how dude just trying to be overwhelmingly nice, friendly, supportive and accepting of anything to make girls feel better, be a good puppy boy, best "male friend", with strictly platonic relationships, in another words - best in the world handy pushover errand boy with whom girls can be sure that this eunuch wouldnt want absolutely anything in return, but somehow they still respect him for that and like him even more, when dude in the meantime still live in his own world where he doesnt want anything from life, except of pure tranqility and soul peace. Its absolutely obvious how easly this mental child can be abused and used by people.

Clearly you like our game enough to continue being here

Wrong, I didnt like the game just shared my experience and thoughts after. You can agree, disagree, take into consideration my opinion or just ignore me. And notice that I didnt write anything about absence of sex, just about how was this story and mc baked and tailored.

 

[Larry2000]

I never said anything about ingame time, only about what player saw in game about passed year of development.

Harem game where player watches mc who isnt pursue, conquer or atleast interested in womans and sex throughout whole year and 6 chaps, and MAYBE he will behave as player anticipate only in future chaps, well thats just sad.

Dude, special for you) A little bit of examples, too lazy to actually bulldoze whole script, but I definetely remember way more than this.

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I get story right, its exactly why story cringe and boring. Player for 6 chapters just look how dude just trying to be overwhelmingly nice, friendly, supportive and accepting of anything to make girls feel better, be a good puppy boy, best "male friend", with strictly platonic relationships, in another words - best in the world handy pushover errand boy with whom girls can be sure that this eunuch wouldnt want absolutely anything in return, but somehow they still respect him for that and like him even more, when dude in the meantime still live in his own world where he doesnt want anything from life, except of pure tranqility and soul peace. Its absolutely obvious how easly this mental child can be abused and used by people.

Wrong, I didnt like the game just shared my experience and thoughts after. You can agree, disagree, take into consideration my opinion or just ignore me. And notice that I didnt write anything about absence of sex, just about how was this story and mc baked and tailored.

Don't worry, I get it. Thanks for your input. I sincerely wish you a nice day.

 

[Larry2000]

I do have a question... I can see the MC having some relationships with some of the MILF's.... But I don't see how anything can happen with Lisa... without making her a cheater, or her husband a cuck.... and from how you have made the MC, I don't think he would like to be with a cheater, or even cuck the old man....

I guess you can have the old man die... then the whole comfort the widow thing would be open....
And about that only a month and a week thing... when I was the MC's age that would have been an eternity to not be fucking someone.... and he is around all these hot girls all the time???

Not a bad question to ask. I can't reveal everything of course. As it would give away too much, but I'm not trying to reinvent the wheel. Rather, I hope that our story can engender yourself to our characters. You are right on all counts about MC and Frank and how they are.

As for your theory, I can't confirm or deny what's happening, but I think it could be a good one. Though personality wise, MC isn't the dude who wants to get with all the girls all the time. Call it personality type, or whatever, but even barring that, the trauma definitely gets in the way of that instinct. Maybe had he not gone through it, he might be just as you described.

Thanks so much for your comment. If you REALLY want to know more, you can always DM me and I can answer in more detail

 

[oscuroslayer]

Not a bad question to ask. I can't reveal everything of course. As it would give away too much, but I'm not trying to reinvent the wheel. Rather, I hope that our story can engender yourself to our characters. You are right on all counts about MC and Frank and how they are.

As for your theory, I can't confirm or deny what's happening, but I think it could be a good one. Though personality wise, MC isn't the dude who wants to get with all the girls all the time. Call it personality type, or whatever, but even barring that, the trauma definitely gets in the way of that instinct. Maybe had he not gone through it, he might be just as you described.

Thanks so much for your comment. If you REALLY want to know more, you can always DM me and I can answer in more detail

you say MC isn't the dude who wants to get with all the girls all the time then isn't it a harem game?

 

[Kukipett]

I had played this a year ago i guess and now it's stlîll an unexpected confusion!
The writing is weird, things happens that don't really make sense or you are forced to do something and your choices don't seem to matter. In fact there is almost no choices, it would have been better to make it a kinetic novel because i feel that there will be some kind of canon. The dev said it would be a slow burn, but i can't see any fire in this, just smoke that makes me unconfortable.

 

[Kukipett]

i agree, if most of guys on this planet would be like him then.. well.. population of lesbians would drastically increase

And now we understand why his parents wanted him gone, they hated him for being annoying, gave him some money and out, good riddance!!

 

[Kuba1]

Good

 

[Enimvaar]

I think the main reason why the "slow burn" isn't working is because, after getting a job the MC hasn't had any story goals and he isn't trying to pursue any of the women. Since he isn't pursuing anything or anyone, there is no sense of progression. If nothing is progressing, then nothing is happening.

 

[TurhaanKoitatte]

I'm not usually a fan of slow burn games, but I decided to give this one a chance and for nothing. Now there were 6 ch and nothing. No fucking lapdance will carry the game anywhere. Usually it's considered a good combo to have at least one sex scene per update, but how does it go for slow burn is it 1/100? That's it. If the game maker wants slow burn, then let them keep this children's game but without me, I don't even care about the good characters anymore as I get nothing out of them but they are ruined by pointless waiting. I can't wait any longer. No slow burn game has ever rewarded anywhere near the effort of waiting that it's worth wasting your time on them. If there is a slow burn, then the amount of sex that would be rewarded should already be in the style of a porn movie. Not going to happen. In the next game, I hope the game developer at least thinks a little bit about why the fuck his game should be an adult game and not a Pegi 3 or Pegi 7 game.

EDIT: What the fuck is a brain fart to even put a harem tag on this? It's a bit of a pointless combination of harem and slow burn. This really is like 100 updates and one sex scene and if you want to get all the women in bed you have to play about 1000 updates. Only in your dreams Pedro

 

[TKdropemoff]

ok I don't mind a slow burn.. But I feel most people are a bit on fence about certain slow burns.. Like if the MC was actually building more, and making more progress then he already is, then ok.. this is chapter 6.. I have not played in about 2 chapters because I know it's a slow burn.. But man...

This why even some slow burns throw in some side characters at least for some type of action.. Yea I get the MC's trauma, and I am not a fan of sex scenes just to have them.. Even throwaways.. But I see why some devs do it for some slow burns.

Also I hope this game don't fall into other "slow burns" that been going on for YEARS with nothing happening what so ever.. Even some straight up being abandoned.


BRUTAL...

Too slow of a slow burn can kill the drive and investment in that said characters.. I get the great feeling of buildup and finally CRACKING THAT EGG if you know what that mean.. Nothing is as satisfying as that when it comes to a story. I love that. But, if it just drags on and on with too slow of progress my interest dive bombs a bit, and it's not all as satisfying after that. It's bitter sweet tbh.


These sadly are the types of slow burns I put on the backburner.. Even sometime forget about them due to how slow the pace is.

I like the game and all, Just hope the pace speed up a bit..

 

[Sweetychily]

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[EvilMonkey]

Is this "Friendzone Simulator" or something? I don't mind a slow paced romantic game but so far it's just been setup after setup for some sexy time only to have the story swerve into trauma revelations and "chivalric behaviour". I mean, I know that a game doesn't have to have an immediate pay off but right now it's got nothing, just an ever increasing litany of 'love interests' with no indication that anything will ever happen.

And the Dev doesn't know how to the play the game 'Never have I ever', where you extoll the previous statement and reveal the fact that you haven't done a particular act. So you can't ask people if they've done something that you've done, only something that you haven't done, hence the name of the game. The questions/statements are also supposed to be passed around the group so that you get varied responses and the game drifts into the 'daring' as secrets are spilled and people try to trick others for revenge. Not the soft balled questions that the MC picks off of Google.

 

[Zakk00]

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[Kakasan]

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