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Sorry to say, but the ex is DEAD as a LI for a lot of people, including me.
She is a hoe, and a hoe gonna hoe.
And I hate betrayal, and she betrayed the mc in one of the worst ways possible.
To me, no type of redeption going to save her as a LI for a good amount of people.
She's most likely going to be the most avoided Li in the game, if she is not already, But I cannot speak for everyone.
You say you're going for wholesome, but nothing is wholesome about a cheating ex.
So she is just a waste of future renders in my eyes.
But aye, what's someone else trash, is another man's treasure, but she is just trash and will stay trash
To me, It should have been an option to block her number as soon as she called, instead of having to go meet up with her and see the hoe. It's no talking, explaining, nor forgiveness to be given.
I just never seen cheating ex GFs as good Lis in general, But as long as she is avoidable, and I never have to see her again, then that's fine with me. But tbf I honestly want her to be miserable seeing MC surrounded by all his girls he's going to get while she's stroking a cat, miserable missing out on what she fucked up on just one time. Hell, even better, I want her to walk in when the mc is fucking her mom, call a spade a spade, then she can fuck off LOL.
Overall, she IS THE PAST and the past should be left alone imo, even if she was one of the causes for the MCs problems.
No matter how you tell it, it's no saving a hoe, simple as that.
Maybe it's just that I had REAL LIFE friends who families were torn apart due to cheating lying ass hoes, and I can say, it just something that I just don't tolerate.
The only way to save her as a CHARACTER and LI is to completely take out that she cheated on the mc.
Other than that, she's dead, and like one guy said, the mc don't owe her anything. No backstory is going to save her, and I am not interested.
But like I said, as long as she is avoidable, don't matter to me, other fishes to catch.
Also, what mc was thinking, sounded better than what he was saying when he was talking to her, to me, he let her off too easy instead of really speaking his mind.
Now I gave this game a second chance after the whole porn “look alike” thing, and I like it so far, the other Lis are likable.
other that the hoe, the other LIs, are fine, especially emily.
Overall, appreciate taking the feedback and applying it too dev, and good luck.
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maybe i should have explained why those red texts have some relevance:
"feels disingenuous to the writing" the writing is great. but because what is written doesn't match what is shown i face confliction with the renders being in harmony with the writing - and i only get half the experience cause of that.
"lazy to witness" this is what it feels like when reading because it happens too often it comes off as negligence (i.e. not worth it), the reader begins to question the visual-writing dynamic taking him out of the story and into "why is the game like this?"
wasn't coming from an area of cynicism, i understand the many hurdles that come at you in a creative process but i wasn't going to sugar coat what i wanted to get across directly. and it's not an assumption, it was a statement to paint the sensation as one reading continuously encounters this discrepancy and how it affects the experience of the VN - i'm not going to say the reason behind an issue i raise because i won't know it. all i know is it hurts the VN based off my experience and that's worth pointing out for the dev to consider - it's not about excusing him for whatever reason as it's not coming from a place of hate i assure but constructive criticism. keep up your hard work
but i sense you really appreciate the positive energy from previous comments in the thread so i'll add NOT for the sake of but because i think it will do some good as my direct criticism was received as cynicism lol; the VN's story is unique and sincere/wholesome (thus far) and MC behaves, somewhat, so far like a normal guy, the realism is refreshing - and i don't mind that it is a slow burn. with each of these points i have points considered negative i'll save for a full review when i'm finished with the game version
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Windows says Trojan virus on this. Downloaded hundreds of games here and this is the first time only on this one right here:
Hey! Who do you think you're talking to? You've seen me in threads before saying the exact same thing
I know what I'm doing. If you don't trust me on it, you can just avoid her. But I will say that I've done a lot of good rewriting, so don't worry too much I've explained this above somewhere in another post, so if you want extra detail look for it above; I will say that we are all different people. You may have less patience for that stuff, but the MC and other people have much more. Because we've seen the same thing that happens to those that someone betrays, happen to the betrayer. It's a vicious cycle and personally, I don't think it's healthy one. No matter how much you say, she doesn't deserve it, I think there is redemption for most people in this world. If you don't feel that, we'll give you an option next update. Then everyone is happy
Well, I've heard express enthusiasm for Emily, so don't worry, we'll have something good for her next update
For now, we'll take a small rest and then reconvene soon.Thanks the feedback. Most of it I know cause you know, I'm an F95zone dinosaur, but I love the feedback. Especially making it known your love of Emily, who I also really like. This is still a slow burn story, so don't expect too much in terms of sexy times with her soon. But if you like her character, expect more things. Maybe she's a bit of a prankster, who knows. I see that her enthusiasm is infectious and MC will have a good time in her company
Same with me, ain't gonna play till it isn't fixed can't trust ppl.
I appreciate the clarification, but you saying it looks "disingenuous" and "lazy" is what I took issue with cause it was neither. Cynicism of being skeptical of ones actions or purpose, I said that cause you said those words. I have no issue with you saying them if that's your opinion, I only said my piece to clear that up.
I'm ALSO a huge fan of proper criticism, because I feel you learn more from it than just positive notes. Don't misconstrue my intention, I appreciate it just as much as others.
Thanks for catching the MC and his traits as well. He has his own problems that he won't show, don't we all, and the ladies will be the key of realizing some form of release and catharsis. Every girl is important in this game in some way and extent, so I hope MC isn't the only one you like
Have a good one!
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i edited my response and added a reason behind those two "assumptive" points you highlighted in red to give you some transparency on what they meant in regards to criticising the game
na it's not just MC i like but too often do devs neglect the MC being fleshed out so he stood out enough to give a mention (reminds me of myself). ill give the girls a thorough screening tooThanks for catching the MC and his traits as well. He has his own problems that he won't show, don't we all, and the ladies will be the key of realizing some form of release and catharsis. Every girl is important in this game in some way and extent, so I hope MC isn't the only one you like
Yea I 100% disagree, But all in all, As long as she is avoidable, and I don't have to see her again, no skin off my back.
Overall, other than the hoe, the rest of the Lis so far I like.
Will any more Lis be introduced? Or is this the base?
and will it be virgins?
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enjoyed the game and all the characters except for the ex i 100% agree with the people saying she is unsavable as a LI. Unless its revealed it never happened but based on the conversation between her and the mc i dont think thats the case based on what she said. Dont know how you intend to create a wholesome story about stealing someones wife but im here for it.
OHHHH! Okay. Now I see what you mean! Thanks for clarifying. Of course, I wouldn't add all those things, we just literally ran out of time to get all the renders done, so we have artifacts. I apologize to make it FEEL lazy and stuff, it wasn't our intention. In the future we'll work better on that. Since I'm no longer filling new writing into old scripts, this shouldn't be an issue. It's just how it happened to be in this first versioni edited my response and added a reason behind those two "assumptive" points you highlighted in red to give you some transparency on what they meant in regards to criticising the game
na it's not just MC i like but too often do devs neglect the MC being fleshed out so he stood out enough to give a mention (reminds me of myself). ill give the girls a thorough screening too
Thank you so much! Also, my reaction count was all tapped out, but I got one just in time to give it to you. I appreciate it! <3
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It's not like I don't agree with you for the most part, but like... you mostly just kept repeating the same stuff over and over but in different ways, I think you take this a bit TOO seriously. Why So Serious Bruh?
I did say betrayal is a touchy subject for in the post, so yea it kind of hit home lol.It's not like I don't agree with you for the most part, but like... you mostly just kept repeating the same stuff over and over but in different ways, I think you take this a bit TOO seriously. Why So Serious Bruh?
I don't think I repeated the same stuff, But if I did well when I am in the MOMENT of talking about something, I am IN THE MOMENT..
And no I don't take it too seriously, But I do SELF insert when I play, so I INVEST myself and I am really passionate.
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The main three are Lisa, Emily and Nicole. However, there will be other love interests that we're thinking of adding. Those will most likely more side Love Interests. The fact is, we think these characters represent a good mix of the core characters we want and then the rest we can have touch on other interesting stories. All that said, we're not against adding another, if she turns out to be really awesome!
Virgins?
Maybe a few
Oh man! I got so many ideas!
There will be some ups and downs, but overall this story is pretty damn wholesome! Rachel's will be the most dark and mature, but you can avoid her, so you don't have to worry about it if you don't want to 
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okay i understand now. an artefact of reworking - i never thought of that as a reason but now i will.OHHHH! Okay. Now I see what you mean! Thanks for clarifying. Of course, I wouldn't add all those things, we just literally ran out of time to get all the renders done, so we have artifacts. I apologize to make it FEEL lazy and stuff, it wasn't our intention. In the future we'll work better on that. Since I'm no longer filling new writing into old scripts, this shouldn't be an issue. It's just how it happened to be in this first version
and next time i'll do better at getting my points across
i appreciate the good vibes. and yeah don't burn yourself out on the discussion as a dev, it can get ruthless in these waters
It still helped out a lot! Appreciate it. <3okay i understand now. an artefact of reworking - i never thought of that as a reason but now i will.
and next time i'll do better at getting my points across
i appreciate the good vibes. and yeah don't burn yourself out on the discussion as a dev, it can get ruthless in these waters
I will now rest into my Dev Cocoon. You normies wouldn't know, but when you become a Dev you get a special cocoon where you become crystalized and you only wake to start the next update... that or I'm playing Tears of the Kingdom
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I'll definitely say after the rework it looks promising especially with the some of the concerning things edited and it also looks like there'll be more flexibility in options moving ahead.
Though I am undecided on whether this game will focus on story/lore more or lewds? Has it been decided or have the Devs given it a thought?
It's better in my opinion to not exclusively go for both, that is if the dev has a clear vision that the game will prioritise story or lewds over the other it becomes easier to manage the game progression. Also by this I don't mean that for instance a dev chooses story over lewds then lewds have to be completely neglected, it just means that the dev commits to his audience and himself that he'll not compromise on story in any update even if it means leaving out or compromising on lewds for that particular update.
That being said I think it's re beginning of the game, and playing it certainly gives a fresh new vibe; let's see how the Devs progress with this and one can imagine that the game develops on a steady pace and we all get a great game that ultimately gets completed too.
In case the dev is here thanks for reading and best wishes for ahead
Though I am undecided on whether this game will focus on story/lore more or lewds? Has it been decided or have the Devs given it a thought?
It's better in my opinion to not exclusively go for both, that is if the dev has a clear vision that the game will prioritise story or lewds over the other it becomes easier to manage the game progression. Also by this I don't mean that for instance a dev chooses story over lewds then lewds have to be completely neglected, it just means that the dev commits to his audience and himself that he'll not compromise on story in any update even if it means leaving out or compromising on lewds for that particular update.
That being said I think it's re beginning of the game, and playing it certainly gives a fresh new vibe; let's see how the Devs progress with this and one can imagine that the game develops on a steady pace and we all get a great game that ultimately gets completed too.
In case the dev is here thanks for reading and best wishes for ahead