VN Ren'Py Abandoned Unforgiving Lust [Ch.1a] [FlipJoker]

[SlavMaster]

Usually i do not mid bit of bad English cos mine sucks hard but I think google translate trolling you

- You wont leave without a decent bed afternoon will you?
- Why leave without my great bed afternoon?


P.S. It is an easy fix with a bit proofreading and that is it, game is fine tho

 

[str8up]

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The actual game will have a few extra changes.


Demo versions did not have a few facial expressions but the fixes are on the next update

Meet Chloe, Mia's best friend from the gym

lose the balloon boobs and she MIGHT be ok

 

[PeggyBlackett]

Anyone who looks like this:



should consider getting a lupus test.​

 

[mofonistik]

I've seen bad engrish before, but never have I played a game where the male MC's bed was referred to as the place where he would lay his eggs.

 

[Deleted member 1130326]

unforgiving english

 

[Deleted member 1571716]

I'm not going to trash this like some have. The game is in dire need of a proofreader. The renders need much more work. I'll keep an eye on this to see if it improves over the next few updates.

 

[Thirsty_88]

Dev can you add MC's mom too that'll be more exciting and enjoyable

Probably on the forth chapter

 

[crypto]

So, what happened to this? FlipJoker