Finally got back to this after nearly a year, and going through a Rachel scene and wondering if the dialogue will ever quit being so damn cringe with her. It's bad enough with some of the others, but, with Rachel, MC's had sex with here several times by this point, but talking at her like he's seducing her for the first time and she's talking to him like he's never been balls-deep in her and creaming her. And she's supposed to be, what, 27 or 28 at most, and she talks like she's in her mid-40s. I know women in their mid-40s that don't say any of that "I'm old" shit. This kind of dialogue worked the first few "days" but now it's more than a month in, with all kinds of foolin' around, and it's time to move on from all the cringe and talk like real people do.