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Not to cramp the dev's style but I never understand who these games are exactly for. And I don't mean HTML games in general, I mean that if English isn't your forte maybe get somebody to help you with the text. Otherwise don't make a text based erotic game.
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I refuse to try this game out, not because of the bad english, but of the file size.
monke brain will go with any language, but my download rate will not.
monke brain will go with any language, but my download rate will not.
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maybe the room was just that bad
Don't dump walls of gifs/vids. Put one for simple action, make them random selected. Or 2-3 if it's needed. The scenes tho... but again, don't dump wallz.
- Apr 24, 2022
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- Dec 6, 2022
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Do you mean the movie name of the photo in the main post?
- Dec 6, 2022
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Thank you all for coming to see my project, I've read a lot of criticism, now I'm starting to work with the problems that exist, such as the css and changing a bit of the design inside! grammar as far as possible... in version 0.0.2 the mall university will be created! and clean up the images
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Criticism will always come, don't worry too much and just take them as suggestion to improve your game. Don't rush into rework the game using new tech, your focus (imho) should be learn how to compress your media (4gb can be ok for an already enstablished game with TONS of content, you will scary many potential players by having that size on a v0.1) and don't forget to expand the content while you improve your game. You can and should plan how get a better engine and work on content having that in mind but don't forget that the reason we all play games here is content, not to admire how much advanced is your game regard ones that are using the classic Twine/SugarCube. I saw many games that lost player's interest by pushing update over update with just 2/3 new scenes each time because devs were giving too much effort into tweaking the backend without a real reason to do so (not implementing new mechanics for example). I can understand that many can get pissed by a bad english writing but honestly that's something you can easy fix by using some revisioning once you will have some update under your belt and your game is settled in its basics.
That saied, the incipit seems interesting and the location for sure isn't usual, i hope that we will have a different point of view/characterizations since you decided to set the game in Italy since most of these games have a russian/fake US based world building. Godspeed for your project anyway, i hope to see it grow.
- Dec 6, 2022
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Thanks for your answer! Yes, you will see him grow up. I work on the project at night... there will be many more contents! now I'm planning other places.. for graphic design as soon as I learn how to do it, I'll put it right away. Thanks again and if you feel like I've created a discord I'd appreciate it if you come in to say hello
Oh wow, that's bad.
On the plus side, you get a ton of quality porn on your drive. But mostly it's used as a random media, and just as your fantasy, not a real event. Speaking of events, the game is shallow despite its size. For example, there is neither Rome nor University. You can fuck your wife and 2 sluts in the park, and I guess that's it.
All combined with engrish (but I've seen and done worst tho) and bad, really bad programming (mostly CSS issues I guess)
It could be fun if developed more, but that's a long way from where it's now
On the plus side, you get a ton of quality porn on your drive. But mostly it's used as a random media, and just as your fantasy, not a real event. Speaking of events, the game is shallow despite its size. For example, there is neither Rome nor University. You can fuck your wife and 2 sluts in the park, and I guess that's it.
All combined with engrish (but I've seen and done worst tho) and bad, really bad programming (mostly CSS issues I guess)
It could be fun if developed more, but that's a long way from where it's now
At no point does me being a teacher fantasizing about seducing my students come in to play. I can handle some poor english, but there is no game with my 4 gb files of porn scenes.
I can go in to the garden and fantasize about sex. I can go to the bathroom and fantasize about sex. I can go to the office and fantasize about sex. I can go to the park and fantasize about sex OR have sex with one of two chicks. I can stay home and fantasize about sex OR have sex with my wife.
I appreciate the high quality porn bits, especially the gay scenes, but as of right now I can do like five things and 90% of them all end with seemingly random porn gifs and webps.
I can go in to the garden and fantasize about sex. I can go to the bathroom and fantasize about sex. I can go to the office and fantasize about sex. I can go to the park and fantasize about sex OR have sex with one of two chicks. I can stay home and fantasize about sex OR have sex with my wife.
I appreciate the high quality porn bits, especially the gay scenes, but as of right now I can do like five things and 90% of them all end with seemingly random porn gifs and webps.
- Dec 6, 2022
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Hello.
The summary made me come but the result is very rough.
The worldbuilding is fine for a first release.
The characters are few and could be described better.
The plot is inexistant. What is told in the summary isn't in the game yet (where is the university? You can't even work in your office...).
The photos/gifs are well chosen.
The idea seems interesting but what you did is all over the place.
Our portrait isn't good : are we supposed to be an old man? (furthermore, you use Jordi with the wife which is a big gap of difference).
As others said, the english needs some work.
There should be some items/stats to increase our power of seduction. It won't always be possible just by cleaning the house like our wife.
Don't use big boxes with little text in it. The emptyness isn't necessary.
When we go with the straight option at the park or with the porn, we can't stop until we cum.
My little suggestion would be to include some preliminaries (licking, caresses, kisses...).
With some corrections, your game could become interesting.
Good continuation.
The summary made me come but the result is very rough.
The worldbuilding is fine for a first release.
The characters are few and could be described better.
The plot is inexistant. What is told in the summary isn't in the game yet (where is the university? You can't even work in your office...).
The photos/gifs are well chosen.
The idea seems interesting but what you did is all over the place.
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Our portrait isn't good : are we supposed to be an old man? (furthermore, you use Jordi with the wife which is a big gap of difference).
As others said, the english needs some work.
There should be some items/stats to increase our power of seduction. It won't always be possible just by cleaning the house like our wife.
Don't use big boxes with little text in it. The emptyness isn't necessary.
When we go with the straight option at the park or with the porn, we can't stop until we cum.
My little suggestion would be to include some preliminaries (licking, caresses, kisses...).
With some corrections, your game could become interesting.
Good continuation.
- Dec 6, 2022
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