sweetytanAsDAsD

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Dec 6, 2022
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To preface, it is your game do it how you want, these are my opinions and recommendations from my experience trying your game, and also as someone who is a hobbiest programmer in 7 languages.

You need to stick to a naming convention for your files. You have calls to folders that are spelled one way, but then other calls to that folder with a different spelling. Also when making web games its best practice to be case sensitive. Windows doesn't care but if you ever hosted this on a server or like me, your a Linux user, File1.txt and file1.txt are 2 different files. I would also recommend not having spaces in filenames, depending on what you end up doing with the game further down the line it may cause you some problems. (Long story short spaces are a security risk in many situations, so they get replaced by its escape code, space being /x20). Doing these things will not only make you a cleaner programmer in the long run but will greatly reduce your possible errors when you work. If you always name files and folders in the same way you never have to second guess when trying to call on a file what its name was, or the path to it.

Best of luck.
Thank you very much for the advice, I will follow your advice.. thanks again for the advice
 

Oliz82

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Mar 15, 2021
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Hello.

This update isn't really big but it's starting to take shape. We can now work, eat or interact with students at university. You should have added the possiblity to work from home too (well, if you planned to do it too) because I think it would have been better to make everything related to work available at the same time (outside side jobs that have nothing to do with professor of psychology). Speaking of the teaching part, I feel like what he is saying isn't fitting for a psychology course outside the fundamentals
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What are the schedules for either the university and the lessons (if we go directly to university when we wake up, teaching isn't available; if we leave at 15:00, to go to the park for example, we can't come back since it's closed but if we interact with the students, then chose nobody, we can do a second lesson; and if we chose any of them, we end up at 20 (though with Martina, we can finish at 15:00 if we help her or at 23:00 if we teach her...)?
The same with our salary : how much and when is it paid? On another note, I don't know on what you based the game's prices but they seem excessive (200 for helping a student, 500 for fucking your wife, even 70 for the fast food (which isn't indicated while I'm at it)).
Also, we need to have a way to know our relationships with people outside our wife (a journal/diary, a status info on the PC...).

Some actions aren't advancing time like eating at home or doing the laundry (there's no text under this one either).
Eating at the canteen seems to not work properly (it can either increase or decrease satiety). Apparently, it depends on our hunger bar but how do we know how much each plate is supposed to reduce it? You should think of a way to inform us (either numbers or a bar under the plates themseves).

There's a broken image when receiving a gift from Martina (cf files).
Then we "cum for Martina" 2 times.
There's also something you forgot to translate after : "Continua" 2 times.

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Here, everything should be under the image.
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Here, there's a useless "A" under.

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Here, the choices should be separated or on different lines like in the rest of the game (it's watching gift porn for info).

Sometime, the gif of Einstein appears 2 times like this :
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There's also too much empty space sometimes between the text/photo/gif and the link at the bottom.

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Good continuation.
 
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TheLionGuy

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Hey! Not all us 2 comment Andys are bots, I am just a lurker. I only leave comments if I am truly incensed to do so. Also, let it be known before this comment I actually had 3 comments but one of them was a long ass toxic essay explicitly making fun of another commenter which got deleted by a mod (was getting a lot of likes before it did so I don't feel bad about it).
 

somebodynobody

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Text/files needs to go through a spelling and grammar checker and also be looked at by eye.

Images for choosing where to go should all be the same size in dimensions.

Auto save at the start of a day.

The stuff in the right hand bar should just be at the bottom of the left bar and remove the right unless it will actually be used.

Too much unused space, it is adding scroll bars and forcing players to do extra movement for nothing. Remove excess space, you can put the text of where places are as a hover or directly on the image instead of below them.

Videos having volume but no way to control it. Look at Apocalypse world for adding volume slider and also normalize the volume of everything so ears don't get blown out.

Probably use a different image than the masturbate to fantasy.

The videos need to be cut some, like when you choose to fuck and then continue, having the repeat of the start where they go from not fucking to fucking is weird.

You can meet Chandy in the park and say you are her professor but never meet her at the school.

Some files are spelled wrong. like gihpy 1. I don't know why it is named that at all.

Kitchen sex, only choosing to cum, or ass will force cumming, the other 2 can be done forever.

Just looking at the console after clicking around a bunch shows tons of errors.

When trying to give Martina oral sex.
Error: cannot find a closing tag for HTML <div>
<div class="macro-say">…

Sei stata brava adesso andiamo a lezione, sono in debito con te. (not English, after Martina squirts)

Error: cannot find a closing tag for HTML <center>
<center>… (Martina jerking you and you cum on her legs)

Fantasy porn in shower only has a back if it is oral.

Softlock if you look into Martina's eyes "Teacher.. I don't know... Do you want to give me oral sex? in exchange for repetitions ?" and can't click anything.

I would also suggest having an option choosing what their preference is, gay/straight/bi. Thus you could keep people from not seeing what they don't want to.

Game really needs the dev to play it all themselves to see the bugs.
 
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