Okay, I've played for a couple of hours now, and my thoughts are:
1. Beach content (until she can only work with tips) - I honestly preferred the schoolgirl work uniform to the bikini one. If she has to wear a bikini then she also needs a work hat or badge to show she's an employee. Either that or split the beach content to work and play sections.
2. Bar (day) - Needs more content and more interactions with the customers, and she should have some thoughts about the outfits she has to wear too.
3. Bar (night) - Not a fan of attempted rape in my corruption games, unless *I* made her walk down the wrong alley or something. The fact that nothing happened to the guy who tried it also rankles a bit.
4. Modelling Session - Needs more content between "take it off" and "gimme a HJ". It felt like the guy hypnotized her.
5. OnlyFans - Needs more content between t-shirt & blouse and rubber suit - and WHERE did she get the rubber suit???
6. Corruption - I was scratching my head at this. Beach guy strips her topless = nothing? Blouse pops open in bar = 2 points? Wearing something sexy at beach or bar = nothing? Wearing a blouse & miniskirt for OnlyFans = 1 point?
7 Main Character - To one person she's all "HOW DARE YOU?" and to another she's "Take it off? Sure!" Then you go back to the first person and she's still "HOW DARE YOU?". She wanders too fast between "independent woman" and "doormat".
8. Boyfriend - Completely worthless. Honestly, you could remove him entirely and nothing is lost - in fact, the event with the green-haired guy in the bathroom would hit harder. He needs more to do... perhaps he can be tempted by the blondie at the beach ("I know something you can do, baby!"), or perhaps instead of buying presents for him the two can work together to keep the relationship going. You know, some sweet vanilla fun? Show us why they're still together.
9. Bugs - The bartender has repeating text during minigames, the bar itself has some dead zones you can walk right through. The bar sounds are too short and get quite annoying to listen to on continuous loop. The beach sounds keep playing after the beach event is over.
10. Overall - I felt the game was too "on rails". Nothing *I* did raised corruption, only scripted events did. The girl is attractive enough, but became half-naked to completely naked far too fast for me. I wanted to enjoy her in casual clothes longer, to go with the whole "only my boyfriend can see" early stages of corruption. Some down-blouse and up-skirt shots would be nice too.