I'll now list my suggestions to the dev, assuming he's reading the thread, if not, oh well... :
-Incest with the MC and the girls, it's too obvious it was planned that way, but the game most likely suffered from patreonitis
-While usually it's the other way around, sexy things happen too late, I feel like it happened way too quickly here. While it kinda fits the story in a way, I still think it was a tad too quick. But then again, there's no doubt about anyone's feelings or hopes. If anything, they both should "check" the terrain a bit more before being so open. Nobody in their right minds would risk breaking such a bound that quickly in my opinion.
-A gallery/replay scene, so we can easily check out all the paths/renders (with the option to unlock everything easily should you plan to have a long game.) If the game will be a very short one, then replaying the game from scratch is fine.
-The MC not having kept contact with the girls for this long, considering their obvious bound, makes little sense to me. I believe it would be better to have the story going toward the MC keeping contact whenever he could instead. Otherwise, things feel a bit out of sync on their feelings. Just my opinion of course.
-As you may have seen above future/planned tag/content. Many of us have been burned before with "surprises" like trans/futa, interracial or NTR added later on with no warning.
-Adding a bit more renders to the opening. Like, part of their childhood, part of the MC's experience in the military. It does not need to be massive, but having the game just starting with the MC arriving, felt a bit odd to me. When the MC describe shortly his past, some renders/flashbacks would be pretty nice at the very least.
-A smaller sized version for people without 4K screens. While I see a 4K render as a blessing having a 4K screen, many would have no benefits from it, and such a size is going to become a problem for hosting extremely quickly. I would suggest to have the smaller size (fullhd) as the base game, and offer a free 4K patch to replace the renders hosted wherever you choose.
-Did I mention incest with the MC?
-Incest with the MC and the girls, it's too obvious it was planned that way, but the game most likely suffered from patreonitis
-While usually it's the other way around, sexy things happen too late, I feel like it happened way too quickly here. While it kinda fits the story in a way, I still think it was a tad too quick. But then again, there's no doubt about anyone's feelings or hopes. If anything, they both should "check" the terrain a bit more before being so open. Nobody in their right minds would risk breaking such a bound that quickly in my opinion.
-A gallery/replay scene, so we can easily check out all the paths/renders (with the option to unlock everything easily should you plan to have a long game.) If the game will be a very short one, then replaying the game from scratch is fine.
-The MC not having kept contact with the girls for this long, considering their obvious bound, makes little sense to me. I believe it would be better to have the story going toward the MC keeping contact whenever he could instead. Otherwise, things feel a bit out of sync on their feelings. Just my opinion of course.
-As you may have seen above future/planned tag/content. Many of us have been burned before with "surprises" like trans/futa, interracial or NTR added later on with no warning.
-Adding a bit more renders to the opening. Like, part of their childhood, part of the MC's experience in the military. It does not need to be massive, but having the game just starting with the MC arriving, felt a bit odd to me. When the MC describe shortly his past, some renders/flashbacks would be pretty nice at the very least.
-A smaller sized version for people without 4K screens. While I see a 4K render as a blessing having a 4K screen, many would have no benefits from it, and such a size is going to become a problem for hosting extremely quickly. I would suggest to have the smaller size (fullhd) as the base game, and offer a free 4K patch to replace the renders hosted wherever you choose.
-Did I mention incest with the MC?
