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I wasn't the one who added the description. It was taken by an admin from a Patreon post I made trying to introduce her. MC is the male in front.I'm sorta conflicted about this... On the one hand the overview features a female character, and how important she is to the male character, but on the other hand the title and images suggest a male main character, so make up your damn mind.
MC: "VENGEANCE? Sometimes I have tell myself it's just not worth the jail time."
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I don't know how I feel about NTR so there won't be any for now until maybe the majority of people vote for it. The other males are there for story purposes.I would suggest getting the dev tag.
Also would suggest clarifying tags, i.e. what will be in the game in the future and what won't be.
Given the sound of the desc, I would clarify on the sharing/swinging/NTR tags. (since it sounds like if you make the wrong choices it could lead to that. And the 3 males that have a spot in the promotional image.).
Since some people will 100% want to avoid this game like the plague if it has those tags. (some even if it is avoidable).
So would get that out of the way now, so you don't have to answer it later, or get people who are mad if you do add such things and were blindsided by it.
Also sounds like you might need a patch? or are relationships define-able by the player?
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Holy shit! You brought Default Chan into your game?!!!, In her default clothes too?!!! Dude.. Respect!
There is no incest for now. MC leaves with the 'landlady' and 'housemate' duo for now.is there mother and son incest in this game or just brother and sister?
Oh wow. I guess I forgot entirely about that tag since I'm definitely not a fan of that."Scatty"? Pineapple.... i'm scared of future tags now.
HiWith a name like Mangled Baby Ducks, you know it's got to be good -- old SNL skit.
Your dev. name gave me a visual that almost made me ignore the thread right away. Whatever trips your trigger, I guess.
I'm in agreement with Harsh007's comment that the overview makes it sound like a female protagonist. I had to double check the tags when I read it as well. Also, "Vengeance" in the name but nothing in the overview about what the vengeance may be against, or against whom.
In your dev notes:
good artwork - eeeh, if you say so. The body proportions in the previews are a bit too out of whack for me.
story-line - if your overview is any indication...
With that banner, future tags are going to be a must before you get many to download at all.
One last nit to pick: A teacher wearing that dress in a school that requires the students to wear a uniform? I don't think so.
I do wish you luck, but I'm not impressed enough to download yet.
+1The overview is a bit confusing. I guess we play Tyler? Can we rename him? Why is Yuzu so important in the overview that I though for a second she was the MC?
I see incest tag but no patch. Do we name the relationships?
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Man, you just hung yourself. You've basically told us that you have no idea what will be in the game. Writing a game via polls has never, ever, worked. Personally, I can't recall even one poll driven game that has ever been completed....so there won't be any for now until maybe the majority of people vote for it.
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I'm not the devusing this kind of artwork is not good really. i suggests using daz.
yep, thats why i edited it. sorry.I'm not the dev
I would suggest decided on the definitively sooner rather than later. (It isn't the kind of genre you want to leave up to a vote, because if voted for, you would lose people you gained, but if you just don't have it then you lose nothing, or if you have it from the start you don't get people who would leave in the first place).I don't know how I feel about NTR so there won't be any for now until maybe the majority of people vote for it. The other males are there for story purposes.
How did you reach this conclusion? I know exactly where the story is going, but I'm flexible with some characters' mini stories.You've basically told us that you have no idea what will be in the game.
It was my initial plan. But seeing how slow I kept making assets (I have little experience with Daz, especially with map-making) updates would take forever to be developed.ScattyPineapple
Developer Notes:
"I'd like to believe that being a player for many many years has shown me what the community members are looking for (good artwork, story-line, updates etc.) and what they despise (milking)."
using this kind of artwork is not good really. i suggests using daz.
That's true, thank you for this. I'll make it clear in the tags.I would suggest decided on the definitively sooner rather than later. (It isn't the kind of genre you want to leave up to a vote, because if voted for, you would lose people you gained, but if you just don't have it then you lose nothing, or if you have it from the start you don't get people who would leave in the first place).
Also people may avoid your game for now because there is a possibility you may add it if asked for.
Honey Select 1Anyone knows what the engine or art is? I swear i have seen the same mc in over 15 games now.