Okay, just started to play: the first scene almost made me close the game, i really don't like when games start in the "future", just tell the story from the beggining, please. The resdes are pretty good so far, and the premisse is promissing.
Okay, finished this version, really short demo, but could get an idea of the relashionships, and how they started, still don't like the begging, and another per peev of mine is the thinking, its okay for the character to have two "clicks" of thinking in one cene, put any more than that feels like time stoped, and just straight exposition, the dialogue is where a visual novel shines, not narration. As i said before, it looks promissing, and i think it can be very good, but i still don't like knowing the "future"