First of all, I want to stress that I REALLY like the art design- it's a refreshing change from the usual found at this site. (Not that I MIND the usual- I'm just saying that It's nice to have a change.) But, I just don't like the story for a couple of reasons:
- so much of the goals that I look for in these games- the seduction (and impregnation) has ALREADY been done offscreen and all we get to see are flashbacks. Takes the fun out of the grind. Also the hopping around format of the flashbacks leads to make the timeline really confusing. I've caught at least one bit which indicates the game itself is confused about the sequence of events.
- That brings up another point- the kinetic novel approach. The only choices that I get is to reimburse the shop lady some money or whether to rape my mother (AGAIN) when I've drugged her.
- the dark plot turns. I really don't mind plot complications in these games- some of my favorite games here have very involved stories (Harem Hotel, Lessons in Love, Corrupted Kingdoms, to name a few.) But here the dark elements seem to be overriding the basic story, which is seducing MC's mother- oh, that's right! He's ALREADY done that, and knocked her up to boot!!!
I really would have preferred a simpler game: Maria is MC's teacher (or aunt) and we're building to SEDUCING Mom- NOT "Sleep Rape", maybe working through the classmates or neighbors. Or other teachers, relatives, whatever.
I apologize for my seemingly nit-picking, it's a very well-crafted game and I appreciate the time and effort that has been put into it. My point is that I just think it could have been a lot better with a different plot. Maybe the dev will do better on the next game when this one is finished.