1. Annette should be mentioned, but Bill is left out as she doesn't see them as a threat.
7. Ah, it was fooling around in her room, I believe. In the town center, if you go for vaginal, it does the goblin style scene, complete with mention of aphrodisiacs, other goblins, etc.
Curiously, the apartment also has random traffic as if it was in the open of the town hub, such as guards roaming, or the increasingly common
"Look at that their tits, milk is just pouring out.", someone comments, pointing at you.
For the record, I'd far prefer the random chat to be oogling the PC for various attributes, such as their tiddies, cake factory booty, or thigh muscles that could shatter a watermelon.
8. Just saying. Gob and Percy are doing their best. Characters that are offhand saying they are trash, and to a lesser degree, the passive protag that gets walked on can sometimes wear a little thin. 'Tis not my fault they have mocked the waifus or husbandos, and chosen violence.
Given events, perhaps Percy is going to need a power up or training of some kind. I can't see her staying idle on the sidelines forever.
Regarding the Ringleader, the way the player tends to be written and the way things go it's pretty obviously she'll end up in charge. But I still like the idea of things not going the way she expects. Perhaps while she's feeling up or using the player the PC lures two of the cats behind her, out of sight. All aboard! ...wait, that's a nautical thing. Whatever.
8a. On the topic of fish, the mermaid was... odd. At first I was going to suggest a variety to the scenes with the interaction with her, such as speaking of your adventures or showing the occasional bauble (though that would probably be better used showing off for the kids or lovers, honestly.)
Not entirely sure I'm onboard with the mindfuck and such. The player is literally a roving plot piece, there's no way they wouldn't be able to devise a way to bang with a merfolk at some point. But at the end of it I'm like... nonplussed? For a gal, in theory, head over flippers in love, that's a strange way to go about it. Found myself just sort of scratching my head.
Also, some of the wip sentances you posted there in the circus are absolutely hilarous.
9. That leaves even more awkward time of Red just sort of existing in a pretty busy area full of content. Still may be the better call if there's a few factors you may or may not want to establish for the encounter.
Like, I'm assuming Foxxy is going to be a thing before it, which would likely color some Mariko interactions. Ugh, I'm chomping at the bit with questions and ideas for it post encounter, but gonna wait a bit, haha.
I will say that after that, regarding Avery - well, it wouldn't be the first or the last time the player fucked themselves over. The ghost and the mother thing is a bit strange in the overall scheme, though. I also can't trigger the ghost gangbang where they strip you you mentioned prior.
10. You can still have it, thought? Just mask their identities a bit. Either the player stumbles on traces of their conversation, or they are incognito for one reason or another. Intrigue is a thing.
11. Yep, getting there. Though I'm probably just gonna wrap things up for some basic t pose sketches and such for feedback before going full ham. I'm not the greatest artist, but I do dabble.
