Hello
Miron HFG , I legitimately hope you are well, write this because I really want to congratulate you for your good work, your talent and dedication to your games are reflected in them. Your debut “vicious circle” is easily one of the best games on this platform, its script and gameplay is masterful, in that game (in the submissive route) you can follow the route of being the most dedicated, loyal and submissive slave in the world, and at the same time you could become the repentant worm who doesn't really like BDSM, but realized that it was too late to get out of there; This edition of that game is very good, I really like it a lot, but I must be honest in one point where it differs from the original game:
And it is the fact that the MC, does not have the opportunity to be the ultimate submissive slave in this edition, let me explain to you, in this last stage, the reason why he becomes a slave 24/7, is due to a betrayal committed towards Alex, who is truly furious with the MC, leaving him with 2 options, stay by his side or go with someone else; and this, unlike the original game, breaks the fact that our MC legitimately gives his soul to Alex, with all the conviction and absolute desire to be his property; Instead, he feels like he's some kind of clone of the MC from "Moving down", a vanilla person, who in the relatively more submissive route, is forced to become a slave who doesn't feel completely devoted.
Many will say that it is an unimportant detail, but the truth is that it extraordinarily reduces the experience and feeling of freedom for the player, not being the maximum submissive, I know this because I have played the original game and... do everything possible to submit you. . to Alex (ignoring everyone else so as not to be unfaithful to him) and in the end, all your effort throughout the entire game is reflected in this image, which is, for lack of a better description, like touching the sky:
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She tells you (sorry, I don't remember the exact dialogue): "now I know that you love me and care about me", you notice that face of love (yes, I know it is twisted and distorted, but at the end of the day, love) how even, Without any need or obligation to owe him anything, he promises to treat him well and advocate that his wife (Luna) does not harm him unjustifiably. Even moments before, when she informs her submissive that a woman desires him, no matter how much she tries to hide coldness and indifference, she is actually extremely jealous of feeling that someone feels some kind of affection for her slave. .
I know that that “Love” that Alex feels when dominating the MC is also here in this edition of the game, in addition to the absolute desire, “Love” and limitless devotion towards Alex on the part of the MC, I notice and feel it clearly. Proof of this are these faces: when he tastes the magnificent taste of her goddess and her face of legitimate concern when her slave was hurt:
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That is why I believe he can still become the most submissive MC in the history of all visual novels that have ever existed.
I have a couple of proposals that could accomplish this task, which also should not represent a significant load of extra work for your work (I say this because of the programming code, the rendering modeling and the coherence of the script).
Finally, everything I wrote here is merely a comment from a fan, nothing more, at the end of the day you are the author whose work I like to see, regardless of the route you decide with this and the other games, I will be delighted. I appreciate your reading this post, and again, thank you very much for your talent and mastery in telling the type of stories we like.