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VN Ren'Py Vulgar Reverie [v0.09a] [Saxonado Studios]

4.90 star(s) 43 Votes

Enlight432

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Jan 4, 2024
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Unfortunately, there seems to be a misunderstanding between the author of this game and its audience. I understand the author's desire to maintain tension and evoke a range of emotions as we interact with the story. However, in my opinion, the author has made a mistake. The action unfolds too quickly and in too "wild" a style.

I don't mean that the main protagonist and his wife should have a five-hour segment assuring each other of their fidelity and love, interspersed with flashbacks about how they met.

The game advertises itself as netorase, where a partner, with the consent and knowledge of their significant other, has sex with someone else. However, we have a situation where the main protagonist's wife spends the night reading about cuckolding and then decides, seemingly at random, by trial and error, what and in what quantities she will give her husband in this matter. This happens without a mature discussion about what they both want and agree on.

Some may prefer this "wild", more spontaneous style, but I believe the audience looking for netorase would expect a more "civilized" approach. Communicating with glances and half-words might be more exciting, but personally, I wouldn't risk my marriage and love on the hope that everyone will perfectly understand what the other person means in the moment.

It seems we have an arc where Geist becomes our best friend, despite his threats to kill us after his ego was damaged because our wife did not look at him 100% of the time when he fingered her. Maybe if this were a netorare story, this character would fit better. But in netorase, this approach feels out of place for the audience, or at least for the part I belong to.

I hope the next update takes a different direction from 0.05. While it’s not a perfect visual novel, it has the potential to be at the top. And I, along with many others, can't wait to see this potential.
I cursed at Geist, my post was deleted, it is illegal to curse fictional characters in games ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ

My previous post with a little edit:
I totally agree with you, everything was great until Geist came into the story, even fmc is hiding things about him
 

Rastafoo

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Jun 6, 2018
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On July 28th, the author posted to his discord recapping the events of 0.05 and confirming the beach update for 0.06. The Author mentions striving to improve the writing to better convey the impression they were shooting for.

Anyways - THE BEACH UPDATE IS COMING AUGUST 9TH!
 

Hmong-sama

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Jan 3, 2019
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This VN is such a fucking masterpiece. Geist did come out rough but I feel like he'll be a good dude in the future story of this game. It's character progresssion imo that is.
 
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Cairenan

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Sep 9, 2022
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Absoloutely PEAK pure netorase! Finally a developer that realises that just because a guy wants to be submissive and get humiliated and cucked with consent in the bedroom doesnt mean he has to be a spineless loser outside it! This game is absolutely amazing and I hope it continues in the same way!
 

Turret

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Jun 23, 2017
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For me that kind of doormat MC isn't fun to either play as or witness as a third person. A common retort on these kinds of threads is 'just stop self inserting bro!' - I don't want to read a story from the third person about a sad sack and his sad life - that's no slight on you or anyone who would enjoy such a story; one could prefer the proverbial classic comedy or classic tragedy.
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Agree with you 100%! But then again, our taste is similar so little wonder. :) ;) One of my pet peeves is that so many games get ruined by Devs caving to the NTR crowd and insert "Tension", doormat characters, bullies you should shoot on sight and cheater assholes, which should be kicked out at first opportunity.

If I want "tension" and reading about the sad fate of far too many people, I take the newspaper! I want my eroges to have emotional hard-ons and soaking wet pussies, with the characters having fun doing it. Fun romance, sharing and swinging!
 
4.90 star(s) 43 Votes